Neverending Rap Battle IV

I hittin' heapsa' higher, am beltin' on - stabbin' in the shin
Ya bringin' weaker "fire" than Elton John, so I puttin out these "candles in the wind"

I brand you to begin, dont tempt me loser, i'll come box you in half
Your more "Full of ****" Emcee Kruger than an old collostamy bag

I'll come trot on your pad- Takin' live's like a bull straight out the gates
You'll be second best like a cavemans wife- fool, I think you made a mistake

You fake aint ya mate? you aint leavin no crew bleeding on streets!
Like the history X tape - this Heman Krewg's eating concrete

Read on N weep, Slips dont stop speakin elite
and sleep with one eye open so scared eating ya sheets..




Too many rhymes, bit confusing. I used bold, italic and underline to match but it switches up and there was one word rhymes i hade to leave out of highlighting to avoid confusement. e.g- mate and tape. Fool and bull. Each bar has transitions linking the one before for improved flow.

Thats how it is done fella's.

dont delete mods. It's piped down.
thanks

Killer2, battling you, is just like de ja vu,
You reek of the same stench as Mohamadz pooh,
An illiterate ****, ill murder you,
the same ******* way an Aborigine hunts a kangaroo,
I mangle through, put my hands on you and strangle you,
Sorta like Homer choking Bart, making him dangle too,
And Mc Kruger,i dont need advice from a guy with your name,
You gonna end up the same way as Freddy Kruger, burnt up in flames,
Its clear,
when the site called for a dick, you were the one to volunteer,
Saying others need need improvement, **** get outta here,
and disappear,
You better off sticking to toilet cleaning as a main career,
Or a cashier, at the local charity store, selling souvenirs,
Treated as trash by day, and a night treated as a queer,
It fits, the perfect description for a half wit,
Im a **** with you you, till you ******* finally admit,
and commit, sucide, ill permit, it, and benefit, from it,
Your gonna be sent twisted in more ways than i can break a biscut,
You explain everything, in your little ******* brackets,
While im a sit here patiently, listening to all your racket,
And i hack it, when i see a good rap i then attack it,
And i break you, more then Marat Safin breaks his tennis racquets,
Make you pack it, Leave the website feeling shattered,
Wondering, if whatever you wrote to me even mattered,
It leaves me flattered, that you think im the one needing practice,
Now that ive got you interested, get your ass up off that cactus

what are u talking mc
bla bla bla man u dont now me
if my rap is desastour what about u how is going to be
and like if the asian won?
man we make u all run
mohamad ali mohamad what
these all make u all down
man u cant rap i swear thats not a good rymes
it have to be fun just like mines
hey evrybody look at him hey gyz
he dont now what he is saying he just throw hes fuckin words
man i dont now what are u doing ur playing woth the world
asian win asian what but u now they never been
like ur fuckin head
and i am just fuckin sad
at u cause u dont habe brain
its empty yes man
u wil bever be a fan
look at ur u turn u burn i dont now ali mohamad hussein these are
\our names and if u didnt like it go fuckin play
this is my day to make u pray
ya i am not going away i am ganna stay and shoot u with my word
hey mc kruger i am ganna eat u in mu burger

Well. Their is some half decent people on this site.. I'll reply to that soon

yo mohamadz chek it out


my rimes foll like rain my verses are insan I leave brouses across you
froum left two right I leave you lookin like a parasite because toinght
is the night that I put up the fight that brings me up to first and brings
you down to the worst ill give you the mister b curse and I"m the tipe
of costomer that orders the worst



hit me back

misterrr b
are u talking to me
man hahaha look at u u sit close to the sea
u write ur fuckin lyrics on the beach
u dont now what u wanna say and what u wanna do to me
yaaa man u are not ganna win
ya and u will never win
ya i tol du that before man
loo at u u sutill writing 4 lines
and i swear its not like mines
i look at u and i look at ur eyes
i will throw the dice
and i will beat u like a mice
ya man thats ur size
ur justt 12 years old
so wy are u battling me dork


lol wirte something for me now lets see if u learn something comon wirte it down

mister b
write somthing in here comon
show me what u got on
comn dont stop we are not done
and write it more then 4 or 5 lines sun
and killer2 i have in my hand the gun
i wanna destroy ur bones
man i am in lebanon
u now what that mean lol
i am ganna make u fuckin fall
from 2000 and 800 hall
ya man stop fuckin rock and roll
just jump here and rap
and say something good not
like saying 2 words ar 5 fucekd
i am ganna cut ur head
ya man i am a bad man bad
i sing rap
not like u some fuckin crap

and evrybody from abl2know say m.z go go go

and xvirus

stop fuckin say my name
i am really bored of u but u talk a lot cause u loose the game
ya man u are so lame
i am bored get out here u alwayz say the same

consequences crticical bringing pain to this game
watching you guys rap makes my eyes burn-- engulfed in flames
Blazer and Virus at least got skillz
lower than moderate mercy promptly causing blood to spill
i'm obligated to oblitorate
forcing you to abdicate
hardly able to retaliate
cuz all I do is dedicate
silver coated syllables that I use to slay
unique style forces you to over write which causes under play
sketchy talent is knocked away
ending lives without reaching the conclusion
coming straight at you not worring about the entrusion
i'm ready to snipe you, ready to cripple
b!tch i'm ready to bust this line tripple
I died for awhile but I've risen from my grave
But now i'm permenant i'm your f***ing air wave
slowly seeping into minds starting to in-slave
concentrating on creeping into the cults cave
into other worlds to find new talent
now i've returned cuz there is none quite as gallant
if you think you can't be penitrated
then you must be over rated
decisevly demonstrated
I overcome any obsticle in my way
putting down any skill that you convey to your dismay
don't matter wut you show or what you display
no body can match my wicked word play
cuz i hold sway in the sun or in fine spray
in a fair fight or a little foul play
rip you up and tear you to pieces
sutable stamina that never increases
so i wear you down till you can barely breathe
then execute when you start to scream
or before you bleed
don't matter to me
then by the end when its you that got mangled
you realize you lost when you look from a different angle

thats for any body who will step up

**** i gotta admit thats one massive rap Respect MacDaddy

Ive told you once, ive said it twice,
You raps slip while mine stay precise,
Mine grip tight, like a woodworking vice,
While your are sold out, at factory price,
A terrorist in the making, sorta like bin laden when he was 15,
Insist-ing you leave people shaking, ive seen scarier things in halloween,
Your obscene, not naming no 1, coz apparently u will cry,
In our last battle you got outdone, and cheated out of it with a lie,
So i reply, by attacking you on all fronts - from race to colour,
tracking you, smacking you, leaving you feeling dazed and bizarre,
Like a F grade rap star, hoping to get a contract with the shady recordz,
Dont hit back at this, its a bad act you cant afford,
like im the landlord, and you cant pay the bill,
spending all ur money on that suicide bomb used to kill,
and fulfill, that dumb task all you fuckers wish to achieve,
tell me what the **** u thinking coming up at me,
So now i leave, u can mention me all the **** u want,
but i never mentioned ur name, so shut the **** up

**** u **** **** u leave me alone
i fuckin win and i am done
i am not having with u some fuckin fun
bitch i aint terorrist and if u say that again i am ganna kill u with my gun
**** u i am 15 and i am wite and i am a arabic man
but u are a mothefucka i dont now how u sing u will never be a fan
damm i eat u in 2 minutes yam yam
or maybe in 30 seconds and u are not ganna run
i will catch u from ur fuckin hair and cut it
and u wont fuckin dair stop it
i dont car if u win or loose just leave me alone before i pop ur *boobsssssssss*

and u now i battle all of them and i all like them
but u u are a big snitch
u say the same **** like a bitch
u are following me i dont now were hitch
but what i now that if u say something again
i am ganna make u pray did u hear me man
ya just say again my name
i swear god i will go to fuckin ameriqia and cut ur head
ya dont be sad
dont scare i am just litle mad
but u now i told u beofre i am a bad bad man

on of ya lines said ****


how u white if u an arabic man :S ****confusion lol ****lol

cause here in lebanon its in midleeast close to israel and syria we are all there wite whats wrong with u man

not all but there is some wite people*

any one gonna battle me if not i'm out then....

iight...

ok man u drop first

Slipperz only time your an "MC" is at a 'victims of crime' convention /
Your like a parachuter with no parachute trying to relevate my comprehension /

Your flow is 'slipping off' like "fat kids with no balance http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4TAWJK9Fr8 (just a video not premoting anything)
Your f^cking 'ripping off' lyrics from " whack-kids-with-no-talent http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pp3Gp3MCyp8 (again not premoting nothing moderator)

You need dick like ''you need'' doe I'll disrespect you hoe! Like barbers Messin up Niggaz Afro's /
My disses will make you bleed, and leave you quivering in anguish, Like when your walking home from Castro's / (castro's- Gay club)

Your lyrics are Whack, You're a newjack Don't wreck ur career by battling me, Don't spoilt-it-troll//
My lyrics are phat, The only time you drop "ill-****" is when your wrestling a turd over the toilet-bowl//

4bars.... come on little man!