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Perpetual Limerick (:3=

 
 
epenthesis
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jun, 2007 05:40 pm
It's a town in which all are kin
Not only the dogs madly barkin'
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onyxelle
 
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Reply Sun 5 Aug, 2007 06:51 am
It's a town in which all are kin
Not just the dogs madly barkin' (i changed a word in the 2nd line to make the meter right)
but outsiders come
and spoil all the fun
of interfamlial larkin

I wish I had just a penny
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epenthesis
 
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Reply Tue 25 Sep, 2007 06:59 pm
I wish I had just a penny
For each time that I popped a benny
In wide eyed wonder
I'd count the plunder
Cents you know I have not any


As buds shoot and spring so diurnal
The forethought of growth ever vernal
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aidan
 
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Reply Wed 26 Sep, 2007 04:13 am
As buds shoot and spring so diurnal
The forethought of growth ever vernal
Reminds me of changing
Phases, rearranging
Earth's cyclical dance, the eternal.

Leaves sing- chromatic radiance
Fall's song- gold and scarlet cadence
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epenthesis
 
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Reply Wed 26 Sep, 2007 05:31 am
Leaves sing- chromatic radiance
Fall's song- gold and scarlet cadence
Bare voices calling
Winter's forestalling
Soft adagio audience

With a Lear of malicious intent
For words droll, delicious, hell bent
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aidan
 
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Reply Wed 26 Sep, 2007 07:24 pm
With a Lear of malicious intent
For words droll, delicious, hell bent
wit honed like a rapier,
he set pen to paper,
then slept, sated- wickedness spent.

His dreams do not bear repeating
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epenthesis
 
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Reply Wed 26 Sep, 2007 08:05 pm
His dreams do not bear repeating
All the morph or Nyx secreting
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aidan
 
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Reply Thu 27 Sep, 2007 04:16 am
His dreams do not bear repeating
All the morph or Nyx secreting
As soon as his eyes closed
Strange vistas were transposed
Normalcy quickly receeding

Wondrous sights you will see
When you fortify tea
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McTag
 
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Reply Sun 14 Oct, 2007 04:48 pm
Wondrous sights you will see
When you fortify tea

Let's put that into limerick form....

Wondrous sights you will see, yes you will
When you fortify tea with a pill
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aidan
 
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Reply Sun 14 Oct, 2007 05:04 pm
Wondrous sights you will see, yes you will
When you fortify tea with a pill
Or an organic leaf,
that brings instant relief
And then you may choose- smoke or swill.


(Can someone please tell me the official syllable count? I thought someone said it was 8-8-6-6-8. Then someone else had 7-7-6-6-7.
Is there any consensus?)
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aidan
 
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Reply Sun 14 Oct, 2007 05:05 pm
Wondrous sights you will see, yes you will
When you fortify tea with a pill
Or an organic leaf,
that brings instant relief
And then you may choose- smoke or swill.


(Can someone please tell me the official syllable count? I thought someone said it was 8-8-6-6-8. Then someone else had 7-7-6-6-7.
Is there any consensus? )

When Alice first viewed the white rabbit
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McTag
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 02:41 am
aidan wrote:
Wondrous sights you will see, yes you will
When you fortify tea with a pill
Or an organic leaf,
that brings instant relief
And then you may choose- smoke or swill.


(Can someone please tell me the official syllable count? I thought someone said it was 8-8-6-6-8. Then someone else had 7-7-6-6-7.
Is there any consensus?)


I think 8-8-6-6-8 is best, and is the traditional form, but I think some temporary variation is allowable if you have a blindingly brilliant idea which won't fit.
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McTag
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 02:42 am
When Alice first viewed the white rabbit
It disappeared under her habit
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Francis
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 03:03 am
When Alice first viewed the white rabbit
It disappeared under her habit
Which she had alluring
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aidan
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 04:12 am
When Alice first viewed the white rabbit
It disappeared under her habit
Which she had alluring
Especially when touring
It stayed there so no one could nab it.

In Paris, it's sunny today
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Doowop
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 08:24 am
In Paris, it's sunny today
And the English are all out to play
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Mame
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 08:44 am
In Paris, it's sunny today
And the English are all out to play
Some drinking cafe cremes
Some ogling all the femmes
Many strolling the Champs Elysees .


Heard a story the other morn
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dlowan
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 08:57 am
Heard a story the other morn
About a poor fella from Quorn...
His pulse was erratic...
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Francis
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 09:35 am
Heard a story the other morn
About a poor fella from Quorn...
His pulse was erratic...
It was quite dramatic
As he couldn't play his brass horn.

So he just played with computers
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Mame
 
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Reply Mon 15 Oct, 2007 10:33 am
So he just played with computers
Like the other commuters
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