Neverending Rap Battle II

JDTrain617 wrote:

Theres some things you dont know Storm, Ill start wit a few
Im a white kid, Im poor, and my mom is dead too
I neva lied in one line, or nothin i said dude
Im real, aint tryna impress noone, especially you
Yet you insist on callin me a soft bitch, your dead wrong
Unlike Supa i dont rap bout suicide or my dead mom
My lifes been wicked hard, but its made my collar strong
I believe in God and im Catholic, been prayin all along
Im thankful for my talents, and my family and friends
Im in college for an engineering degree, thats my intent
But it aint always been this way, my life was a dead end
I was into some stupid ****, I thank God that im not penned
He kept me safe from the po's, and when my crew got shot at
Had a couple close calls, onea my boys even died in some combat
I was tryin my luck, always nervous watchin my back for rats
Got jumped by some alley cats, fractured my back wit a bat
Neva found out who did it, but I'll kill em if i have the chance
Im a crazy kid, and you wouldnt think Im smart at first glance
But i got into UMASS, wit some loans and a S.U.R.E. grant
And now in havin fun, livin it up, Im the unsaid champ
Times up, heres my 20 minute, top of the head chant

is that a 20min verse now?? sounds like a 1min waste of time

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iaintnodj wrote:

i am back finally and at the top of my game
tired of this flows that but there writers to shame
but everyonce in a while someone posts something good
like technique, with what good is fame, should be heard
i am glad you are finally not dissing on the government
but with the mexican's and they problem you should be dissin it
hell i love my country, dont get me wrong
but the immigration problem has gone on for far to long
Mexicans if you are proud of your country
then why are you here, go back, i think most people agree
i am tired or you getting our schools locked down
learn how to speak a proper noun
i am not racist, so dont even trip
i dont understand why you all are giving lip
you brought it upon yourselfs, coming here illegally
i am ready to drop bombs Spiritually
now back to the fact of where this has gone
No offence my boy quiet, but we really dont care about your mom
Jd i dont know what to say to you
if you are dissin on Quiet you just be a fool
i am not hear to make any one my foe
or to put on a show
i came to speak the truth and battle a few
make a debut and leave with a thank you

just to let you know im not mexican

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Quote:

o so u tryin to gang on me mister crack
sorry ass punk who go hide around the fact he's black
u dont like? i thought u was a cool man who be stackin
but i see u another bitch like techniwue what happened?
U think u buff and strong like ur name is shaq
i think u licked too many dudes asses thats why ur name is crack
not like fat joe where u tell niggas to lean back
u that kind of bitch nigga who try to rap with someone else on 1 person damn ur whack... o and train don't think i forgot about u
do u have a clue what hell u just step into?
ur think u won cuz u wrote a long rap oooo wow
i bet t took u 2 days to write ur mess so u stand in ur room and take a bow
hmmm yea right i can kill u with a couple of lines
imma a downass nigga i don't mind committin that crime
but SUPA and NoDJ are the realest niggas in sight
its real tight that they kill any thug nomater about anything and plus their white
but they can write like any black dude can so respect their talent
fukin faggets its about to respect us its gonna be a habit
train i like ur rhymes but i spit betta than u
plus my rhymes are real i bet ur soft **** is fake and untrue
but im cool my life was a major tragedy
but now i got paper and i spit like young cassidy
i spit harder than a speeding van
im like twista i will kill us all if thats the way to get respect in my hand
im so crazy can't u tell? im right when i spit
im the winner and the runner of the whole site and ****

techniwue? Spell my name right its TECHNIQUE
spell it right next time coz im the flow technique, you fuking PRICK
Go learn how to make your rhymes make sense
You wanna stop rapping here coz its getting tense
Ohh so you're a little white rapper, wannbe vanilla ice
Seating there all yellow, while eating your boiled rice
Why you always saying nigga, you jealous arnt you?
Coz you know white people cant rap and thats true
Now who you gonna tell that i'm making you soft
The police ain't **** cause i pay them off
I move slow always ready to go so fuk it
And annas on my dik she knows she can suck it
I'm a hard head, always having a fit
When i'm not allowed to tear up ****
Im the baddest mothafuker alive
So i don't think you and your crew can survive
Don't ever try to fuk with me
Coz you will end up with a tear
Tryin to speak up on the TEC, bro you don't know me
shiting your nuts you little wanna be

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Crack and quietstorm created and alliance,
Its about to get split up ure about to be silenced,
You see spittin takes skill it's not just a science,
You best run for cover cuz here comes the violence.
Why u rating shaq, cuz he's black.
U Wanna jump on to his back, stick it in his crack,
Cut the guy some slack he's not ready for your queer attack.
Crack you queer ure a big gay bender,
In a relationship of the same gender,
Quietstorm you lover and your defender,
Both of you are pussy's might as well surrender,
Queers like you been around for decades,
Spreading your queer disease known as Aids,
Taking part in gay pride parades,
If a see a queer he be eating a blade,
Stick this up ure ass it's a ******* grenade.
Pride marches how u gunna be proud,
Stickin cocks up their asses shouldn't be allowed,
Stick them in a gas chamber like a ******* Jew,
The Jews didn't deserve it but the queers yes they do,
Crack and quietstorm ready to take on the rest,
You wanna shoot them go ahead be my guest,
There queer they like cock more than breast,
In the Midwest they would be accused of being possessed.
So both of you pussies go ahead and be queer,
Let aids your main killer be your main fear,
Your no match for me and I made that quite clear,
And neither of you can rap so get the **** out of here.

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Yo i said
"My visions infra-red the way i can see who's hot
but im not mentionin 9inch, cuz he defines whats not
you a crime to hip-hop...."

r u scared to get back at me or r u just takin a while to try to think up some better lines than me???

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Me 9 inch scared of JDTrain617,
You mess with me end up in hip hop heaven,
I didn't miss it, it just got ignored,
You rhymes are to weak for me to take a aboard,
You repeat yourself to get your rhymes heard,
I just don't like you your rhymes are absurd,
You try really hard to make ure rap rhyme,
But u loose the meaning most of the tyme,
Ure rhymes are so bad they should be a crime,
Find something ure good at to do in your spare time,
You have been dismissed with the upmost decorum,
Do us all a favour and please leave the forum.

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Technique wrote:

Quote:
o so u tryin to gang on me mister crack
sorry ass punk who go hide around the fact he's black
u dont like? i thought u was a cool man who be stackin
but i see u another bitch like techniwue what happened?
U think u buff and strong like ur name is shaq
i think u licked too many dudes asses thats why ur name is crack
not like fat joe where u tell niggas to lean back
u that kind of bitch nigga who try to rap with someone else on 1 person damn ur whack... o and train don't think i forgot about u
do u have a clue what hell u just step into?
ur think u won cuz u wrote a long rap oooo wow
i bet t took u 2 days to write ur mess so u stand in ur room and take a bow
hmmm yea right i can kill u with a couple of lines
imma a downass nigga i don't mind committin that crime
but SUPA and NoDJ are the realest niggas in sight
its real tight that they kill any thug nomater about anything and plus their white
but they can write like any black dude can so respect their talent
fukin faggets its about to respect us its gonna be a habit
train i like ur rhymes but i spit betta than u
plus my rhymes are real i bet ur soft **** is fake and untrue
but im cool my life was a major tragedy
but now i got paper and i spit like young cassidy
i spit harder than a speeding van
im like twista i will kill us all if thats the way to get respect in my hand
im so crazy can't u tell? im right when i spit
im the winner and the runner of the whole site and ****

techniwue? Spell my name right its TECHNIQUE
spell it right next time coz im the flow technique, you fuking PRICK
Go learn how to make your rhymes make sense
You wanna stop rapping here coz its getting tense
Ohh so you're a little white rapper, wannbe vanilla ice
Seating there all yellow, while eating your boiled rice
Why you always saying nigga, you jealous arnt you?
Coz you know white people cant rap and thats true
Now who you gonna tell that i'm making you soft
The police ain't **** cause i pay them off
I move slow always ready to go so fuk it
And annas on my dik she knows she can suck it
I'm a hard head, always having a fit
When i'm not allowed to tear up ****
Im the baddest mothafuker alive
So i don't think you and your crew can survive
Don't ever try to fuk with me
Coz you will end up with a tear
Tryin to speak up on the TEC, bro you don't know me
shiting your nuts you little wanna be

R u retarted? im black u dumbass and ur **** down rhyme
learn ur synonms and adjatives nigga its go take some time
i kno u try to diss but in ur mind ur runnin afraid
since u dont know 6 letters words cuz u never graduated from the six grade
but me on the other hand imma smart ass muthafuka
Anna go cut off ur dik since its so small there is no use for ya
u fat ass bastard u need to loose some weight don't put no chicken in that pan
You need to loose fat fast like a girl go on kanye's work out play
your fat ass pay the cops off since u cant run and jump over a fence
your havent seen ur dik u got a fat flab coverin it
but me put it down like a lunatic in bed
ask ur gurl hommie man she'll clear up what I said
but dont think im just loving young men
i will slap u hommie with the back of my hand
I dont play games in the streets but i hustle in the streets
I don't have to do it anymore I pay other foos to do it for me
I got money like that where your money at kid
you need to learn im better than you and i did more than you did
I went to hell and came back out the hole
im more intouch with God now my heart is cleaner now and so is my soul
Christian soilder is what I is but i still slip up in sin
I still be layin foos out with one hit to the chin
but Technique dog what have you done?
Ate a whole cow by urself and way a ton
well Kracka ass bitch your level can't never be where I be
like Cassidy Im hustla muthafuka ask about me!

SERVED

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Technique wrote:

iaintnodj wrote:
i am back finally and at the top of my game
tired of this flows that but there writers to shame
but everyonce in a while someone posts something good
like technique, with what good is fame, should be heard
i am glad you are finally not dissing on the government
but with the mexican's and they problem you should be dissin it
hell i love my country, dont get me wrong
but the immigration problem has gone on for far to long
Mexicans if you are proud of your country
then why are you here, go back, i think most people agree
i am tired or you getting our schools locked down
learn how to speak a proper noun
i am not racist, so dont even trip
i dont understand why you all are giving lip
you brought it upon yourselfs, coming here illegally
i am ready to drop bombs Spiritually
now back to the fact of where this has gone
No offence my boy quiet, but we really dont care about your mom
Jd i dont know what to say to you
if you are dissin on Quiet you just be a fool
i am not hear to make any one my foe
or to put on a show
i came to speak the truth and battle a few
make a debut and leave with a thank you

just to let you know im not mexican

i wasnt saying you were i was saying even though we arent talking about the government that is screwed up right now

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JDTrain617 wrote:

Theres some things you dont know Storm, Ill start wit a few
Im a white kid, Im poor, and my mom is dead too
I neva lied in one line, or nothin i said dude
Im real, aint tryna impress noone, especially you
Yet you insist on callin me a soft bitch, your dead wrong
Unlike Supa i dont rap bout suicide or my dead mom
My lifes been wicked hard, but its made my collar strong
I believe in God and im Catholic, been prayin all along
Im thankful for my talents, and my family and friends
Im in college for an engineering degree, thats my intent
But it aint always been this way, my life was a dead end
I was into some stupid ****, I thank God that im not penned
He kept me safe from the po's, and when my crew got shot at
Had a couple close calls, onea my boys even died in some combat
I was tryin my luck, always nervous watchin my back for rats
Got jumped by some alley cats, fractured my back wit a bat
Neva found out who did it, but I'll kill em if i have the chance
Im a crazy kid, and you wouldnt think Im smart at first glance
But i got into UMASS, wit some loans and a S.U.R.E. grant
And now in havin fun, livin it up, Im the unsaid champ
Times up, heres my 20 minute, top of the head chant

There we go now you being a reall Mc
dont eva be like these otha foos and try to be their mennie me
their gay like Technique, 9 and money 31
they think this **** a game they think this is all just some fun
Train you cool in my book spit out ur drama in rap
dont get hooked to that commercial rap the fake **** like that dude crack rap
Now to some real ****...
I spit everyday just like dance its flawless
homo thugs try to show some love and say "what up!" wherin a dress
does that sound familiar 9 inch don't eva try to battle with Storm
Imma so you true rap that needs not introduction or no form
but imma spit rough **** with no edges or blades
you can type for days but this aint gettin u no money anyways
I know some of yall 20 and older than that
im 17 my nigga yall still gettin served by this cat
Technique be suckin 9 inch while money 31 be watchin
Im so nice when i talk i pop my collar and be flawsin
the homo trio will neva make it to the biz
cuz yall don't got no true ice like I do yall will neva be fresh asmiz
but I ain't bow wow you can underline that rhyme in some chalk
It doesn't matter how you talk It makes how u look and how you walk
I dont give a **** technique if i spelled ur name wrong fagget
You will get respect from me when u spit life down let me have it
true rap is ur life spelled in hip hop and blues
come on my nig let me see what u got u don't have nothin to loose
people like NODJ and Supa know what im talkin about man
don't u know what im sayin or u want me to spell it out in some sand
Im not here to make friends but its cool to know people got ur back
I know I got skills but where are there skills you say u have but u really lack?
I almost got off track but im back again spitten some lines
Imma be on point everytime as long as christina milian is still fine
stupid Nick cannon dumbass nigga you had her why did you diss her?
Thats stupid now your career will be a blur
My bad for dissen famous people in my rap
Ill think ill just leave im done with this crap

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Bottom line Technique, I put my **** to beats and I rap 'em
Your shits goin nowhere, jus scribbles on binder paper and napkins
Your slippin up big like a Mack truck, on ice wit no traction
Your horrible, every wack post you make, jus ignites my reactions
Its all jus spiteful distractions, from this whole forum's aura
**** Technique, you got none, from now on Ima call you señora
more bitch than a man, got a box noone would touch like Pandora's
Get runnin and dont look back, or become stone dead like Gamorrah
You slow like a ford explora, but im porscha, watch as I peel past
I'm writin metaphors buts its true, im defeatin you real fast
You tryna steal gas from this room, but ya still weak wit unreal raps
I would neva eva shake ya hand, not even business deal daps
Think you can beat me? you'd have betta luck tryna dunk on Shaquile
Cuz Im at the top of the game, and Im the cause of alot of appeal
You weavin in and out like George Bush, droppin and adopting ideals
You a bitch, dont deserve no ones respects, jus drop ya whole spiel

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yo rep uk
i bein cused bout sex do you not understand,
last thing i fucced was your mum, your last was your hand!
whos this bitch spitten crews and bein lonely an that,
you not lonley one in your mouth one in your back,
you patchy ass niga wid your im fuccin gay hat!
was spitten wid djtrey he thaught he was the leader,
iaintnodj, hes a fuccin flunky i dont trust him niether!
im spitten uk like bizzle yeah POW!!!
click-clack pow, thats another pussy down,
since i been sellin i still aint changed,
got bout 10 g on ma neck on ma wrist bout the same,
ma rhymes like wo yeah **** that pussy flo,
but ive rapped enough for today bout time to go! Laughing

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Re: yo rep uk

pimponline wrote:

i bein cused bout sex do you not understand,
last thing i fucced was your mum, your last was your hand!
whos this bitch spitten crews and bein lonely an that,
you not lonley one in your mouth one in your back,
you patchy ass niga wid your im fuccin gay hat!
was spitten wid djtrey he thaught he was the leader,
iaintnodj, hes a fuccin flunky i dont trust him niether!
im spitten uk like bizzle yeah POW!!!
click-clack pow, thats another pussy down,
since i been sellin i still aint changed,
got bout 10 g on ma neck on ma wrist bout the same,
ma rhymes like wo yeah **** that pussy flo,
but ive rapped enough for today bout time to go!

way to make 4 lines rhyme
i cant believe i waisted my time
to listen to this ****
**** your ass is about to be hit

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ATMoney31 wrote:

You need to stop this ****
for I have to come back and spit
its to late im back nigga now what
punk ass bitch look what you did you fucked up
dissen me whats alright but dont neva talk about my mother
I will com afta yo punk as a kill you like no other
**** you punk bitch you think this **** is all cool
read this **** over and over again imma take you to school
one glamour thats a female word
Its about bling you bitch **** what you heard
you aint got more money than me thats not known
listen to this **** muthafuka YOU WONT EVA TAKE MY THROWN
get on my level! like trillville just go swallow some rocks
you prolly think goin to the docter is the only way to get shot
but its not im proud you more girls then me in shades
thats why ur punkass went to the docter and found out you got aids
nigga try that **** again it didnt work this time
imma betta at my worst than you what till i hit my prime
skills is what i but all you have is prostetics
imma show this nigga up this nigga up like clockwork can u hear the tick?
but come bitch yo **** sucks no style
imma have to go but ill be back in a while

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Yo am new to this **** but i kno ma lines, an if i wer an angel id be high up like cloud nine, all u suckas dont kno **** so u read ma lines an it'll teach ya to spit, the rap game isnt all good, so ama do what i do on sunday an eatcha like a yorkshire pud, u all talk about "poppin" them guns but the real fact is u aint got the funds, u mug old ladies cos u a straigh up thug! yall do what u do best an give yaself a tug, dont drope no soap when u in the pen, u a panzy man dude uve got past chicken u now a hen!, so ama end dis **** like 8 mile cos if knew Nic Jones ud think crocadile, an i remind the ladies wiv ma cheesy smile! an yo b4 i go any1 who rites back better is a homo...! YO!

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Technique will force you into strategically retreat
Because I dominate guerrilla warfare in the streets
There ain't no way to picture me without a victory speech
When I reach higher positions
Without the recognition of pissed on competition
Cause I conquered there ambitions
In a systematic form like a religionist tradition
My mission is to take you, lyrically break you
Lyrically assassinate you
Lyrically incinerate your body and recreate you
To destroy the power that mentally incarcerates you
Cause even though I rip it better I could not forsake you
Your my people with the same oppressors so how could I hate you
The revolution of the mind that bring lee generates you
But when you come original people impersonate you, start to hate you
Cause the conflict is building within the ultimate sin
Is to be ashamed of your skin
My rhymes are like Jamaican over proof I make the room spin
Intoxicated flow I bleed vodka and brandy
Don't make me choke you down like Jon-Benet Ramsey
Something demands of me to rip this fuking **** uncannily
God commanded me to be a technological disease
And psychologically do battle with the best emcee's
Cause I'm the capital of revolutionary nation that's infallible
Aztec like the Hannibal
Rip your heart out of your chest and feed it to the cannibal's

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Nic-Jones wrote:

Yo am new to this **** but i kno ma lines, an if i wer an angel id be high up like cloud nine, all u suckas dont kno **** so u read ma lines an it'll teach ya to spit, the rap game isnt all good, so ama do what i do on sunday an eatcha like a yorkshire pud, u all talk about "poppin" them guns but the real fact is u aint got the funds, u mug old ladies cos u a straigh up thug! yall do what u do best an give yaself a tug, dont drope no soap when u in the pen, u a panzy man dude uve got past chicken u now a hen!, so ama end dis **** like 8 mile cos if knew Nic Jones ud think crocadile, an i remind the ladies wiv ma cheesy smile! an yo b4 i go any1 who rites back better is a homo...! YO!

that was the most uglyest rap ever, didnt make sense at all and why does everyone like eminem his a shiit rapper Smile

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Technique wrote:

Nic-Jones wrote:
Yo am new to this **** but i kno ma lines, an if i wer an angel id be high up like cloud nine, all u suckas dont kno **** so u read ma lines an it'll teach ya to spit, the rap game isnt all good, so ama do what i do on sunday an eatcha like a yorkshire pud, u all talk about "poppin" them guns but the real fact is u aint got the funds, u mug old ladies cos u a straigh up thug! yall do what u do best an give yaself a tug, dont drope no soap when u in the pen, u a panzy man dude uve got past chicken u now a hen!, so ama end dis **** like 8 mile cos if knew Nic Jones ud think crocadile, an i remind the ladies wiv ma cheesy smile! an yo b4 i go any1 who rites back better is a homo...! YO!

that was the most uglyest rap ever, didnt make sense at all and why does everyone like eminem his a shiit rapper

yea 1st in my life i have to agree with technique. dat was horrible. Eminem is real thats why

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i agree that that was horrible jones

and nice verse tech

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farrout i havnt been here in ages to busy and thanks JDTrain617 ur not bad urself.....

Yo what the fuk happen to reality spitting rhyme slayers
These days everybody trying to be a thug or a player
Where did all the real motherfukers go in the game
Bring back the break dancers and graffiti writers with fame
I remember hip hop before the mic cunnt clapping
Cause I used to drink forties with more flavour then these rappers
Lyrical ego trips doesn't make fortification
Your not dope enough, spit self glorification
So don't jerk me around cause my name ain't masturbation
Life is hard it'll leave you scarred cause I been threw ****
If you consider rap a job I suggest that you quit
Don't you understand the audience will listen and dance
In the club, crib or car or whatever they get the chance
To be emancipated start debating justice in the cipher
Why do you think project rooms look like the cells in Riker's
I'm explaining the significance or the reason behind it
There preparing your children for the prison environment
When you don't amount to **** prison becomes retirement
But I refuse to be took in to central booking in chains
Cause sleeping on the floor in cages starts to fuk with your brain
The system ain't reformatory, it's only purgatory
Close to hell but I rebel as begin to sparkle out
And tell my people how we fell into the trap that we live in
Because they locked us up in ghetto's and began to rape my women
So I leave the system Unforgiven like East Wood
Cause I was bless with lyrical strength to do whatever I could
You should of seen it coming long ago when you were very young
My word is through the father, holy spirit and his fuking son
Cause when I grab the mic device in front of Christ and start to rip it
I'll make Jesus turn around and say yo pop this brother flipped it
So talk about whatever and be what you wanna be
But don't mistake the way I break the faith for simple blasphemy
Cause through the highest frequencies in the NYC
I'm crushing 97.1 percent of MC's

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