yo gustavratzenhofer lay a couple a bars down
i don't think that dude actually raps i think he's jus here
I rap
crack whore
want more
the floor
bust head
you dead
well that was interesting
Thanks, dj quik kid. I believe I deserve a place in the "Rap Hall of Fame"
My stuff is legendary.
Jack of all trades thou name is gustav.
Hey gusto you are better than them.. lol, or are you just writin the same but more condensed??? they are crap hey!
They all try n beat me but can't... they hate me!!!!!
They are sick of gettin there ass whooped....
ight lemme get at this bitch
kid my ryhmes is more wild than the animals at the zoo in san diego/keep spittin bullshit and i'll put a hole in you the size of a bagel/**** your raps are a budwiser mine is cristal/put this bitch on ice cuz he gonna be there awhile/if you think your ryhmes are fresher than man let's go/either that or admit you like an extinct volcanoe never gonna blow/you could be wearin a necklace of glowsticks and you neva gonna glow/it's obvious this kid don't recognize a thing/kid you aint served no one in year's like a bankrupt burger king/all your spits man they aint done a thing/i'll make you an expert on insects wit all the slugs that you'll catch/cuz man my "joints" are hotter than someone wearin a hot patch/gusto betta than us haha that ****'s almost funny/how would you like to be in the ground longer than Bugs Bunny/don't be mad cuz we be makin money and your ass is flat broke/go start singin wit 50,banks,buck and spyda joke/if you gettin abused then go tell the administrator/your career aint comin back even if it was shocked wit a defribulator/i'm shreddin you to pieces like you jus ran through a blender/goin against me is startin to be known as a career ender/it's like rappin suicide so i guess you already got your grave ready/your condition is gettin to be like your name and your heart rate aint steady/you should be an organ doner cuz your heart is gone/don't **** wit the king cuz you jus a pawn/i'll use your shitty raps to fertilize my lawn/i reign over you so bitch toss me the crown/i don't discriminate when i eliminate i don't care if you white or brown/you just got "jacked up" like someone who got a flat tire/it's time for you to retire so jus sit on the sidelines and admire/you could be tiger woods and your shots would never make par/cuz i just gave you more shots than someone that works at a bar
respond if u want i'll hit u up 2morrow
theprofessor wrote:professor's an enthusiast
spitting uzi's an fists
what kinda duzzi is this
man listen its not always about dissen sometimes some rhymes are about crimes nines tequila with a hint of limes lines going up your nostril leaveing you hostel im leaveing you a fossil like the bones of an apostle
my rhymes are to vicious to malicious leaven you sleeping with fishes
for thelast three years ive opened my ears been drinking beers been thinking half the queers i meet are contribed i'll chop up your meat you get my vibe lifes about survival if you wanna be my rival death comes at my arrival i put emcees into coffins to often stab your flesh till it softens the proff went off the deep end lacerations across your throat deepen leave you eternal sleepen is it deep when i speak crack your head open an watch the blood leak your meek im strong your weak go ahead an beak you spit with out technique my tech's leak metal caseings eraseing your face replaceing it with an empty space
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theprofessor wrote:i just wanna spit
bust a script
turning angels to dust take a trip through alternate dimensions mental apprehension verbal accension did i mention that i was in my cell fell through the floor to hell as i was talking to the demonic demon he started screaming his flesh boiled and started steaming he said wake up your dreaming when i i awoke i'd seen things that i should'nt have seen i was holding a human spleen but somehow i was not anxious but serene my cell mate started to scream the door opened and it was the code team with beating sticks and mase so i took the spleen an beat these pricks in the face ninja kicks to there wrists throwing cement bricks as fists did a flip off the wall an gave the a scotish kiss and watch them fall like a teenagers balls ran down the halls to another unit inmates wondering hows he doing it **** tore off the officers outfit then split back out the door hit four more guards on my way to the main floor runnin for the exit
gunning the next bitch to open there slit smash through the glass makeing a hole so my ass can fit through it now your probally wondering how'd he do it a fuk screw it i took some lsd smoked some weed laced with pcp till what i bleed was no longer part of me now stronger than if i was part of thee holy trinity now any rappers in my vicinity will be sent to the inner city in 2 bags and 1 box two mags one glock shooting through wannabe pacs leaveing em with more open gashes then chicken poxs its sick when i talk
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good script and awesome flow RESPECT however bein an enthusiast dont mean **** gustavratzenhoffers a veteran and read his ****. its ******* pathetic
ps tha don offer still stands
critical i know there's better people than me but it damn sure aint u
critical i know there's better people than me but it damn sure aint u
dude, use peronal lyrics and not rhymes designed for anyone.
also try some multi's and fix your structure
You have like 10 syllobols in one line then like 35 in the next!! (kills the flow)
If i put your verse in bars and not paragraphs it would look like a mess
Also you hardly ever have a transtion that rhymes with the start of the next line!
No disrespect but that's how i see it..
And moderators please don't erase this, if you do i will rhyme it to keep you's chirpy. ta
guess whos back ppls haha!!!
