Neverending Rap Battle

Well bro, we know I'm new to this ****,
But I'm reppin' Cruger, you reppin' Limp Bizkit.
And Ill trap your ass and you'll wish it was over
Because I'LL cap YOU fast, you littke fuckface Nova.
Now evidentually, you'll see I'll be a legacy,
While you'll be rippin' on those flippin' trippers from page 3
So settle, test your mettle, I'll certain bet all -
we're two parts of a rose - I'm the thorn, you're the petal.
So we'll continue, I'll rip out your sinews,
And feed 'em to lions and snakes and some rabid shrews.
And now I'm gettin' vicious, and right now I'll diss ya's
Because you're Mom calls you Precious and you're washing the dishes.
So prepare to take shame, coz you're rap patterns lame,
And I'm intendin' to spend my time fuckin' your dame.
So I'll stop it right here, so lend me your ear,
This battles the start of the end of your career.

******* pussy .... u ever pulled a knife on me ud have a sotgun barrel down ur throat

EMINEM DOES NOT USE A ! SYLLABLE RHYME SCHEME U DUMB MUTHAFUCKA


u dont ask for credit you earn it

u dont deserve any at all - Im the kinda rapper that is doing my social service by helping young emcees develop an teach them tricks
of the trade


if u honestly believe your better at rapping then anyone on this sit Ie- bambi , whitey , drewfc


drew is younger then you and twice as deep



IM In the studio today , i'll lay something tonight for ya bitch ass


and ur copy cat tactics , using bitch please after ,my references of it in my verses


Bitch Please 2 many rappers like you


bet uve never heard eminems infinite cd


bounce .... recognize

sup kill u seem cool , but you ever talk about kotd on here ima puke on you


I know the people who run it and i was invited in it , its a piece of **** league enough said , if u wanna battle step

Cheers man, and its not the league I like, I respect the artists that dual it out

Killzone,
I kill one,
Jus fo fun
My fist is my gun
Burnin like like the sun
Dealin out vermin, little hermit, turnin green like Kermit,
You'll learn it, murder
I'm no sheep herder
But I know just how many girls you've got
None dick snot
Put down yo pot
Headbangers, rockas, outta the Parkin lot
Fought
Fo the love
Of gods above
But I'm the god on earth
Raise the hearth
Fo what it's worth.
Failed child birth
When worse comes to worst
It hurts
But I gotta drop ya
Maybe pop ya
Got ya?
You ain't popula
Fight with us
Even Gus
Got better lust
Than mr. Zone
Need a loan? No no...
I own
And I dropped yo phone
2012 kony
**** gets bony
Ya a cannibal?
Eatin em up with yo mandibles?
Don't ya go ramble!
Come eat yo cambell's
Yo gots a cold
Old pains
Moldin rain
Fo the insane
Rippin up the night like a Great Dane

Bouncing like tigger
Pull the trigger
Nigger
Smoke a ciger
As the killzone lays down the law
I rip out his maw
Till my hands go raw!
No offense from the song
In my best regards
Your turn to do wrong
CLOSE!
But no cigar!

Your turn

Ill battle ya after nova stops hiding

oopan.. you just joined this forum, this game, and you just GAINED the hate from me, prof, and whitey. we know exactly what we're doing. dont give anyone advice when you yourself need so much help on lyrics, flow, etc.

you record big shot? you got a mic? if so put somethin up, i'd love to hear you rap since yu CLAIM you're some rap god.

who's favorite emsees? do you know the definition of an emsee? wait nah you'll prolly just look it up

tell me what kind of structure me, whitey and prof have. id love to know.

you know what multi syllable rhyming is? if so, id love to see yours.

are you better than me? hmmm. i just lauged my ass off

i dont have to prove myself to some shitty "rapper", you know what you're not even a rapper, you prolly dont even know what i mic looks like..

BUT hay i will drop about 10 audios tonight, due to this kids whack ass.

not to prove myself but to SHOW this kid what a real emsee is. you gotta work on your craft in order to be a "god" eminem, pac, biggie, big l, jay, dre, ice cube, x, snoop, treach, etc arent even GODS. all them rappers i just listed always have room for improvement. i have tons of room, TONS, only cause im 16, you have a **** LOAD, a toilet load fulll of improvement. maybe show some respect, and we'll help you become a lyricist. but for now.

OOPAN'S LYRICS ARE A BIG PILE OF HORSE ****. AND COW ****. FLOODED WITH PISS AND CORN. WITH FLIES FEEDING OFF IT.

wish ya luck..... homie

quality over quantity son.. hahaha i love you.

oh an nova. i got the lyrics for hell on earth for ya. but im revising them right now and re-recording it this fine fall evening.

theres 100 somethin views on that track and nova makes up 3/4 of them views

thanks for the love homie. holla

oh and oopan... you suck balls. holla to ya whack ass punk

I just gotta say it really didnt take me too long,
To realise your name's a rip of first word in Psy's popsong.
And itll take less time
To **** your mind
With my limey boy rhyme
drinkin' fine red wine
So take the sign
Im so sublime
You think you're god, oh so divine,
How many times?
This genres mine,
And ill **** yo ass up in over time

So lets get quicker
And slicker
I'm sicker
You're thicker
You probably can't even handle malt liquor
You think you're so ghetto
Sippin' crap Amaretto
Ill bust two more bars and then thats it, ill let go.
You dont realise
When its time to devise
A new way of fuckin' up,
Are they tear in your eyes?
So bring it and sing it
I'm the king, you just ain't ****
And by the way, you reputation?
I just killed it.

Okay then, how bout we back it up?
I'm rockin the ****, gonna mix **** up!
Toss yo raps in the blender, even that rejects it
I'm drivin Lamborghini as you go by in your Lexus!
Cause I'm the nexus! Controllin a full plexus
Look those up in the dictionary
Stomping you down like four t-rexes!
Your no internation
I'm the device used for floatation
I save lives fo yo information
I could be leader of the nation!
I don't care how eminem writes
Jus tryin to stop monky from how he'll CRITISIZE
Spit the lies, baby cries, nova dies,
Cause you decide that you'll dispise!
Killzone can trample you
At the mantle you
Are an ample
Supply of assholes!

Beautiful as a samphire
My music hides a fatal ire
Hard wired, I'm not tired
I hunt like every man combined from shire
Sire? Call me the mad tire
Runnin over bad rappers, man damn I'm on on fire
Van Dam's got less raps to hire
Than oopan, Jackie chan
Can land before prof man

So stay watch, or you'll catch a shoe to the crotch
I'm top notch
Time to batten down the hatch
Get the catch? Your gross as a garbage patch

Now stop the hatin
I'm not debatin
That's an order!
Ya hoarder
I'm on the border
An I'M the forer
An the former
Here's a quarter
Month salary
Yo fatality
By cavity
I don't care so don't mess
With my jest
Bam!
Bulletproof vest!

I'm sorry, did you not hear the word?
Well everyone's sayin that you just got served

Bambino, the only reason I don't record is cause peeps like you an yo friends are constantly hatin on me. I have the right to practice too. The only reason I'm on this site is to get better and measure other people's rap styles. My recent rap has multi syllable and an MC is actually someone who is great at speech. Now excuse me, I need to record a rap, bitch.

record a rap? ahahahhahahhahaahhahhahhahhahahahaa

its record a TRACK. your hip hop/rap terms are so fucked.

you dont know how TO RAP, punk

we're hatin on you cause you barged in here and acted like you were sooo good.

you're ****. now ask for advice from me. ill be happy to give you some.

bye

Who's psy and what popsong? Oopan was a nickname My girlfriend came up with when I was with her. She moved, so the name means a lot to me. I get that the name fuckin sucks, but I like it. Don't critisize it please.
Same for all the other gang members who strangely pick on the one dude who doesn't give a ****. SERIOUSLY THE CRITISISM IS FRICKIN ANNOYING! You try writing raps while people are saying "you suck bitch! **** you! Your not perfect! Now let's make fun of his name!" Seriously guys? What are you trying to accomplish? I'm not leaving.

Record a rap is okay to say. I'm rapping. I'm recording it. What am I recording? A rap! So record a rap! A track is if you want it to be copyrighted or part of an album. If its just for fun, call it a rap.

And okay, I do want your feedback. That's THE WHOLE REASON I JOINED THIS FUCKIN SITE! To get better! Feedback beats critisism any day!

We were having a lil rap battle, criticism is a key feature - I'm a noob and I know that.
I can see why the others don't like you.

Critisism is a feature in rap battle! Not when we're talkin to eachother! Look back 7 pages or so! I came in horribly, but pretty much the same as you! Look at what happens. The fuckin hate me. Then you come in actin like god, practically identical vocabulary an structure an they love you. I don't care if you pick sides. Just think before you act. Don't go do everything they sat, make sure you understand the weight of your decisions.

Damn. I fuckin hate autocorrect in the middle of a post.

Gotta run

I got love for killzone because he came in asking for feedback on what he needs to improve then applied them no offense killzone but you and oopan are at about the same skill level but kill is lookin to advance you're convinced that you're already better than everyone I get that you have to have an image for yourself and we're guys, rap battling, of course were gonna make fun I each other? I love Bambi but he looks like a retarded Shawn white who had a failed abortion in his forehead? It's all love don't take insults to heart especially considering you JUST told us that our insults don't mean anything to you there's a simple solution to the hate you're getting and if you don't see it you're an idiot