Neverending Rap Battle

Are dreams just a figment of our imagination or a magic haven to hide from our past and anguish 
everlasting language keep us connected sub consciously 
I'll die to test these philosophies like Lessons from Socrates 
When we dream we see a positive image 
But there's a wall blocking reality like a congicle visit 
These dreams we have though can they symbolize the future? 
From gripping nines with shooters to the missing minds of rulers
If a dream is lucid u can use it will you abuse it cuz ur aware of it 
Cuz when you control your dream it shows what your true behavior is 
When I'm in control of the dream I kiss her thats honest and it's true 
But sometimes going from dreams to reality is the hardest thing to do
 

Yo man, listen
Take a seat there, start wishin'
That I dont serve ya too hard with some mad-rappin' submission.
Rap battles are brutal,
we all knew that was true 'til
Your punk ass came out, rappin' with efforts so futile.
We're all here spittin' ****
To show skill, you soft prick,
So how 'bout you stop abusin' whilst bruisin' your dick.
So know that I fucked you up
How about you grow up,
No one wants to hear your **** lyrics, so shut the **** up!

Yeah man, I aint here to hate, so any digs I make are I
Hopefuly taken in jest
Thanks for the advice man

No problem man always looking to help a fellow mc just practice practice practice

Happy now ****?

Ill lay down a longer rap,
No offensives or any crap,
And ill stop using these couplets followed by lengthlines to top that.

Fortunately,you can see my rap degree increases and then ceases
when God releases some pieces of Jesus for religions to feast on
Because your recon will pass on the word of my homerun,
So that other come on to spit for some good fun.

So I'll spit it,
Some quick ****,
Admit it
You wish it
Was easy
To breeze me
Then repeat
My defeat
To your friends
And remend
Your broke ends
When I defend
My career, you hear
That sound, it draws near
Its sound of my prowess and the unlimited hours
Il spend at the top, hey, I just cant stop,
Using couplets then lengthlines, im finished, fullstop.

I thought you said quality over quantity, well i see
Nothin it's all tackity
Rackity
You're a laughin stock/ don't give a ****?/ get in the truck!

Time to die/ why/ yo rap tastes worse the moldy rye
Look at the sky/ I won't lie/ you're just a guy

You can rhyme cat an fat/ this ain't preschool!
Ya fukkin fool/ and yo a tool!/ remember the rules?
There's none!/ guess who's a outta get schooled?!?

Bam/ my yam/ has a miniature cam/ tapin the lamb
Butchered by yo fam/ an Uncle Sam/ is like "****, man!"
Dirty Dan/ begins to fan

The flames/ my claim fo fame/ was killin the monky
He's skunky/ an lame/ like a dead Great Dane/ in acid rain

Death by fire, help wanted, boys fo hire/ at the freestyle institute/

I join/ to kick the rap world in the groin/ I'm the fruit of its loins/
Gonna make coins/ an get points/ an appoint/ me teacher

Preacher preacher/ forgive my heart/ I need a fresh start/
This ain't Mario Cart/ he says/ to the camera lens

In my Mercedes Benz/ golden eggs/ layed by my golden hens/
An barbie's boyfriend ken/ is taken by monky

Monky loves Barbie more than anything ever/ watch out I'm gonna complete an endeavor/ oopan forever/ gonna pull the lever

Flipping switches/ killin bitches/ bodies in ditches/ monky hitches

His ass/ to the glass/ real fast/ as the train

Goes off/ an I scoff/ at it like hasselhoff/ an you cough/

Goin in a fit/ ya outta yo wits/ I'm munchin on ritz/ as ya fly, swinging yo tits
That hit wall and burst into bits/ and lits/ outta first aid kits
He knits/ a couple pits/ o cloth an ****'s/ aboutta get cought
In a makeshift cot/ where yo body will rot/ tiny tot/ yo just a dot/ on this spot

So step back/ full blown attack/ check out my racks/ here's some tic tacs
Dispatch/ here's a couple of facts/ you lacks/ the knack/ to fight back
And FACK/ yo mom's dack/ now pack/ like mr. PAC/ yo whack
Get back/ on track/ hit the sack
So what now, climax/ breaching point, right Dax?/ I'm goin to PAX
RELAX

Sew a Doe to a tv show, an whattya know, instant hoes, that's how the story goes
Normal joes, workin at COs, yo, yo so low, I'm goin solo

I've never known an ally, yet I always stay, to make ya pay, I say,
Cancer from gamma ray, yo body'll lay, on a tray, not kiddin

All alone, yet I still own
An pown
Like al Capone
But I'm no donor
An no owner
I'm a loner
An a roamer

I DON'T CARE
What you say
Call me a gay
Call me noboday!

I let it go!
Move on!
For I will don
Strength,
At the break of dawn...

Spit it quick **** yeah that's what I'm talking about just try to improve the vocab good to see you're putting the advice to use though!

Yeah bro, cheers - im only 16 like so I got alot to learn

Better now? Biiiiiiiiiiiitch, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaassssse!

I'm 14. Biiiiiiiiiiiitch, plllleeeeeeeeeeeaaassssse!
Wait... What? Nevermind...

Not at all that was no better than anything you've done don't be so cocky lol
I just turned 16 do don't use age as a crutch Bambi is 16 I believe? Or 17 prof has been rappin since like 13 now he's 24 I believe dfc is 14 and shuts on you yeah age doesn't mean ****

I think I'll still take WhiteMMS as a mentor.

Hahahahaha I fuckin love killzone now aha

Just call me whitey by the way

Ive only taken interest in rap battles of the past week, and ive only been writing raps for three months :')

I started rapping at 10. I'd freestyle to myself every time I was alone. That was a lot. I had a shitty part of my life. I had to learn how to never be put down an never be insulted. I carry a knife with me everywhere I go to make sure no one jumps me. I stand up to bullies twice my size. Why? Nobody will kill me. Because their scared. Not scared of me, but scared of spending life in jail, or an asylum. Because they know I can kick their crotch and run. I'd done it before. All I got out of it was a black eye. I'm going of topic here... Anyways, give me some credit. Your insults don't do ****. I see your insults as feedback, yah some peeps might not like my raps, but the reason they all sound the same is because of my idol. He uses the same writing style. An eminem has had a shitty childhood too. Mine wasn't that bad but I still realize our common ideas. So give me some credit. Dudes, I don't care if you keep insulting me, I'm just telling you that you'll be wasting you time, and computer/ phone battery.

Thanks

Yo, anyone wanna rap battle against me?

Killzone, never stop rapping. Very few people have the gift you have. Just don't let monky talk you into hatin on me too. Please. He may be a better mentor too. Still. I'm not a rival rapper.

Kk

You or I start?