dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Thu 7 Jul, 2005 11:26 pm
yo offradar, you shouldn't give away info that doesn't need to be realeased, like your age, **** that can get used on you...think man...
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Thu 7 Jul, 2005 11:29 pm
like in a battle man, just keep info to yourself that doesn't "NEED" to be released...other than that your freestyle is good. good work man, keep it up..
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offradar
 
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Reply Thu 7 Jul, 2005 11:29 pm
dr eryk, i just started this rap battling thing. so ill remember that brotha thanx
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Thu 7 Jul, 2005 11:40 pm
aight man, if you know how to judge, judge this 2 on 2 battle we have going on. Look at the lyrical content, and see who wins.. aight....
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offradar
 
  1  
Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 12:02 am
hey yall, i wanna battle sum1 one on one, pleez sum one respond to this.
im outy
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:15 am
yo i know the doc said dont talk about yourself it protects your health
check your self if you believe im not evil giving you typhoid will have you breathe ill you want something new you want me to stop this two on two im dropping anti matter make an explosive batter shatter your frame splatter your name you got no aim you off topic my sawed off blows your jaw through your optic you want me to stop it im on the top never quitting for ever spittin for every script written like subliminal messages hidden your minimal your no criminal are you kidden i win em all in the hall of fame you'll see my name for the most insane make you a ghost every lyric sprayin growin everytime all my rhymes like land mines you cant stand on my mind like the dawn of spawn i procreate cons mafia dons i play you like pawns in chess im the best the professor testin the lesser you child melesters yo crazy they got diapers on there dressers inscest that messed i rip open ur vests with insects that infest eject out chest my lyrical expression is a phycotic confession like when i go to a therapy session stare at me i rip your flesh in three its eerie you never heard of me i leave you needing reconstructive surgery its an emergency call ems this bit*h is on pms bleeding on your rag you fag i crack you like an egg tendons sending pain in all directions put you on the table for
disection injecting a disease with no protection i diss with ease cold like how liquid nitrogen freeze send you to the coroner with no knees what you cant use testees in a rap so now the crap you slap on the page is like air in a cage weres the rage weres the anger like the eastside strangler
or the the boston mangler its weightless debate this real rappers hate this
here i have no fear what you gonna do im mike fuc* u i liked to strike you with one hit i spit like the sun lit the skys burning the retinas in your eyes i'll teach you to die with speach i take your blood out like a leech i clean up the scene with bleach your decomposeing under a beach dead sorry i didnt hear what u said dont be who you are that means being hard thats going to far for u takeing bats to the bar reading the stars suceeding in feedin sars to breeding porn stars tar and feather u turn your skin to leather who better then to make a corpse into a sweater doc and dj on the block giving bj's mock my spray you wont walk away
u to holding hands gay i told you man the way i spray is cold never old ruthless n bold the truth is told the proof unfolds
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:28 am
my personal view is give them all they want you should know yourself better than anyone so i just let ppl diss me then i just make them look like they dont know what the fu c k there talkin about
i just say practice flow and skill
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offradar
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:30 am
when it comes to rhymes off radar iz the master,
ill blow you away like a natural disasta,
your the beaver, im the rapter
spit so sick itll give your gay ass cancer,
see, you beatin me is like a cat beatin a panther,
im top dog, your the pussy cat,
a cat so weak itll get beaten by the rat,
in fact, hearin youre ****, I think youve been reduced to a kitten,
if you put on an extra extra small condom it still woundnt be fittin,
your whack rap..... ive heard it bfor all your **** iz written,
so go roll around in **** and lick your ass,
go back to hip hop school and this time try to pass,
your slow, they call me offradar cuz im fast,
and when i call you slow im not talkin about speed,
after your done with hip hop school go to special needs,
if you and i fight police will find ya body in the reeds,
youll be throwin cheap shots, so ill wear a cup
battle you? homie you lucky i dont beat you up,
they call you the professor cuz youve spent 20 years in highschool,
if you think your gonna beat me your a dam fool,
so go back down to the gay bar,
invite a guy into your car,
promise him that you dont live very far,
then suck his dick like concrete on tar,
your spit iz gay and it really suckz,
ill turn you inta roadkill like you got hit by 5 truckz,
ill be on the sidewalk to watch ya body splatter,
then ill see if your moms gotten get any fatter,
but you know whats even sadder?,
you'll still be a loser while I climb up the ladder,
and i aint gonna slip, i aint gonna fall,
you tried to climb to, but ran into a wall,
you cant go up it either, the ladders too tall,
go to the little girls department and get some new underware,
go downtown, getcha nails done and cut your hair,
put your highheels on, and try not to slip on a stair,
dawg, with your looks and rap you could pass as Cher,
I could go on forever but ill stop now just to make it fair.
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offradar
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:33 am
good advice, thanx, and no disrespect to you
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offradar
 
  1  
Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:42 am
can some people pleez judge that battle, its my first and i wanna no hoo won
peace
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:50 am
****, that **** was borin to read
alot of that **** was filler aka **** you dont need
**** was worse then a newbie tryin to rap
wait a minute, my bad. you are a newbie at rap
c'mon multies, thats the only element you mastered
you aint rappin' you babblin' like a guy that's plastered
you dont thikn before you type, that's where you go wrong
spiting run on setences that are more then 1000 words long
I can picture you rap in real life, must be hilarious
i can come with vocab too, I'm fukin' nefarious
rippin' it yourstyle is easy, I've outgrown that awhile back
how can you callyour self a rapper, when you can't freestyle and rap
**** it's painfull to have to read your raps, there borin
even crazypdog hates them, I actually heard him snorin
i can give up, call this a warning
cause face it, you two well never win
i'm killin you as soft as i can, almost like a violin
you two are easy to kill, I should end this **** now
how, its easy when you two are about as soft as a cats meow
imma make this short casue I know i've killed you
crazyp and proff addmit it your both through
so proff you can spit your babblin raps, cause I feel like a nap
crazyp you can spit your predictable **** that are not worth being called raps
so your go you dumbfuk bitches
shoot you wit a staple gun, and call them stitches...


aight, yo, how long this battle goingon for man? how many rounds....

you judges please..anyone judge this, look at lyrical content, no dickridin'///just want to make one thing clear, no disrespect to the batlers, your good compitors... and dont throow this in my face..
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:53 am
offradar wrote:
can some people pleez judge that battle, its my first and i wanna no hoo won
peace


judge that battle, who you battlin anyways? i cant judge a battle if your not battlin' anyone..
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offradar
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 01:56 am
ib battlin professor
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 02:00 am
oh ok? didn't know that, his last rap was to me...I think. see were havin' a two on two battle right now
me and quik kid
and him and crazypdog.. so I don't know...proffessor is pretty good man, you sure you want to battle him?
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TheTruth 2
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 02:01 am
Off the radar, that's where your ass is gonna be,
So lose your attitude and realize that you're under me,
Gotta jump-in the new guy, Ima pop his cherry,
You think you run the show? Bitch it's the contrary,
You're thirteen so "Just Hatched" is a chilling description,
If you think I'm your match, have Eryk fill a prescription,
Cuz I'm the illest mc, you got the worst morale,
Guess you forgot your rappin skills in the birth canal,
You ain't got hair downstairs and tell bitches that it's shaved,
Havin trouble havin sex when your penis is concave,
Havin trouble grabbin melons when you can't elope, (cantaloup)
But if you can't get a girl, then just have Hope, (mc_hope)
Wanna act like king-**** I'll make you look like a fool,
And take a lesson from professor cuz you just got skooled,


And I'd keep goin if it wasn't four in the morning,
Gave you your warnin now I can't stop yawnin,
Showed you who you're f***in with, now Ima leave you,
But if you want more then try me, this was just a sneak preview,
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 02:04 am
lmao damn, ssee what i mean bout givin' info away, got fliped on you man, nice freestyle truth, good wordplay there...nice...good job man..
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 02:06 am
LMAO, I LIKE THAT MC_HOPE WORDPLAY LINE, FUKIN' HILARIOUS, **** THAT'S FUNNY...lol... can you judge this battle we have 2 on 2, not right now.. it's four in the morning you said..aight peace.
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 02:09 am
well i'm out, peace ya'll......
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 03:11 am
...............
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Fri 8 Jul, 2005 03:11 am
...............
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