@BIGalex,
Aight try battling some dudes while your here ur helps to being up your skills a lot but here
-Multis
-wordplay
-metaphors
-flow
-similes
Those are what you need if you can intertwine all of them together in your lines you'll be golden
Try Multis first instead of rhyming stare and pair rhyme something like
Two pair, you stare, who's there
Rhyme 2 words instead just one
