Neverending Rap Battle

Lol just dont overdo it aha just kidding but logic I finally recorded some stuff would u mind giving it a listen and an opinion?

http://soundcloud.com/mic_messiah/monsters-in-my-head

Holy **** just talked a girl out of suicide lol I'm so amped up right now anyone wanna cypher or something

All that I can say is that you are far better than me at what you enjoy. Keep at it and you will be even better than what you are now.

Thanks man appreciate it

my moms dead
rip
you say im a pillow walker wel your a stalker
go fap
while i rap
while i spread moments like this and that
and this moment im king
and your glieth and i own the sling
grow up fast
before i kick your ass
im going to end you bitch
im boing to beat you and throw you in a ditch
now go to your boyfriend a suck and ****
and do you need help throw the door your asshole looks swore
you such a man whore
well life didnt come with instrutions
stop trying to bebsomething wen you nothing
begone bitch im out see all ya'll mother fuckers in niglet city

Hey What does everyone think of this intro to a series of books im in he process of writing ...

Thomas Edison’s The Ghost Machine –Paranormal Book Franchise
Intro-
Adventure’s of Thomas Edison, hunting Ghosts and other Paranormal activity,using his inventions along with his wit and homemade barrage of weaponry , traps, gadgets, and potions travelling across the world to discover ancient secret’s... teaming up with assorted inventors,military personnel and shaman along the way ...


Thomas Alva Edison Born on February 11th 1847 at Milan, Ohio.
1854 Moved to Port Huron, Mich.
At ten years of age in
1857 Set up a chemical laboratory in the cellar of his home.
1859 Became a newsboy and "candy butcher" on the trains of the Grand Trunk Railway, running between Port Huron and Detroit.use to be a Hustlah , more than anything though he believed knowledge should be shared so Thomas in.
1862 Printed and published "The Weekly Herald," the first newspaper ever to be typeset and printed on a moving train. The London Times features a story on him and his paper, giving him his first exposure to international notoriety.
1862 Saved - from otherwise certain death in a train accident - the young son of J. U. Mackenzie/secretly head of Freemasons secret-ops division Head agent disquised as a station agent at Mount Clemens, Mich. In gratitude, the child's father taught him telegraphy,and kept a close eye on him over the next little while , growing to know him well truely believing in his ability well edison
1862 Strung a telegraph line from the Port Huron railway station to Port Huron village and worked in the local telegraph office. It wasn’t until a few weeks later he sat down and had the talk , with agent J.U. Mackenzie...a flash of light glimmered in his eyes , eager to leap at the chance , his whole life wish and praying for a moment like this , in
1863 Tom Began Training along side Mack and a few other members of the group, where he Obtained his first cover position as a regular telegraph operator on the Grand Trunk Railway at Stratford Junction, Canada. Later, is resigned by them to help develop a duplex system of telegraphy,working in the underground lab on research, learning how to make new potions and explosives and gasses ,aswell as chemical bonds ,healing chems, and so on ...quickly getting a feel for it an making some tricks of his own , gets moved into ballistics and excels at a rapid pace , creating his own style of hand to hand combat, relying on various methods from pressure points to technique holds, and a arsenal of different methods...in 1863 goes into his first field experience as a fully commissioned agent,
1863-1868 Spent nearly five years as a telegraph "tramp operator" in various cities of the Central Western states, always experimenting with ways to improve the apparatus.is what it would say on paper but in truth ... this is the story of those 5 years , in which this man faced the firey depths of darkness to ancient evils that run amok and whole tribes of tyranny aswell as majestic wonders , amazing views of ethereal landscapes and places one could only hope to imagine , discovering lost societies and recovering agent artifacts ,and hidden knowledge aswell as improving and createing thousands of his own inventions which aid in the conquest a journey no one has ever taken before except 1 this is Thomas Edisons The Ghost Machine .

Beginning Edison’s 1st Invention- First Chapter

a few spelling mistakes and a lil more character to add but thats the gist of it so far , ima beef it up though

I think your rap style is interfering a little your going to straight foward it's a book take your time use more adjectives and describe everything in detail even like a person hair color should be described in major detail make the reader feel like they are in the book but I'm liking it so far who knew prof was an author

Btw I released a new song it's on soundcloud it's the diss song for the fat kid lol give it a peek

see wtf ur name is dfc
man ur rap aint gd like mine
bitch most of ur words dont even ryhme
oooh sry kid is it ur bed time????
so u dont know a **** about me
1.iam a G
2.iam legendary
so hear me dfc
nigga u dont wanna **** with me
bitches like u come to me i make them go away
mann plz i dont want to start liking me i know bitches like u are gay
sooo u can surrender from the first section
and go back to glee and onee direction

lolz no offence but urs was tight but mine is tighter u judge

hey yo bambino
i do it for fun too
thats why i will kick ur ass too
make go say that guys great
man i saw ur rap 1 star rate
so hear me mate
u do it for fun
i do it for kickin ass
i bet ur a 250 kid mass
just tryin to be cool
or in the ghetto but right now i made u look like a fool
ghetto aont tough niether are bars
mann cant u see little kid in palistine throwing rocks at cars
mann **** it i dont want to reach fame
i want a world revelution so days dont go the same

my **** doesn't rhyme? i don't think you read it closely
i'm too far ahead of you..your **** doesn't come close to me
lil host is dead...but it's okay because this is how it's suppose to be
what does that say: what the **** is gd
the guy that can't spell says that hes better than me
everything you say is ******* elementary
trust ain't the name of the game i'm all about treachery
saying i'm gay yet guys are your lechery
everyone on my back...this is my military
and if you can't understand some words look them up in a ******* dictionary
Glee??? i don't even like the show..i 'll have no part of that
turn the L to the right and shove it up your ass crack
the demon in me has finally been released
and won't stop poundin on your head intill your ******* deceased
you ain't goin see me when i'm armed with hatchets
waiting for you under your mattress
with a grenade screaming LIL CATCH THIS!!!!!
your ******* with a beast, but you ain't even seen half the bull
i'll end your career, and leave you on the floor with a broken mandible
and eat your FUCKIN FACE LIKE THE MIAMI CANNIBAL......dead...i'm done

heyy i didnt ask for ma future dead story but bitch u gave it to me
listen asshole ur place is in the class of biology
u aint blendin on G
let me give u ur future story from now
NOOO FUTURE
ur lifes full of fakeass wanna bees
lets me till u wat it needs to become like lil host
a good rapper that just made u lost
u and me ain the same level
ur more of an angel bitch while i am the devil
yaaa sry i know why u dont rap gd cuz when u type ur playin with ur barbie toy
soo u can go on and be mamas boy
ma story is full of glories
while urs is full of un finished abilities
let me give u a nice memory
of u gettin ass kicked by a killen beat rapper that kills every melody
u battlin with me is like a gift
man ur words are mixed up i took ur pride u got nothin lift
guys hear this BITCH U GOT UR ASS KICKED

CHILDREN'S STORY (thedarknova DISS)

[Intro]
Child: Uncle Ills?
Ills: Yes, honey?
Child: Could you read me a bedtime story?
Ills: Heeeeere we go.

[Verse]
Once upon a time, on a rainy day
A rapper named darknova came to play
But I read his verse and it was so full of ****
Popping his mouth, he was so full of it
He tried to pull a stint, but I pulled one back
Until his heart gave way and he was under attack
He convulsed and he spasmed until his body collapsed
Soon as he dropped on the mat, the floor knocked him out flat (*thud*)
I knocked him with a door mat, thumped him with a sack
Stomped him in the nomads and shot him in the ass (*gunshot*)
Stuffed him in a mask before I dumped him in a bag
And sent his bottom in a van and flew it up to north Japan
He came onto this forum and jumped on jennaraps
After I fucked her up the rump without a condom or a plastic
carrier bag used to cover up the bad
cum stains that were left on top of her good rags
So darknova thought it would be fun and such a blast
to let his little mouth run like something from a tractor
rolling up a large farm while the farmer's sitting back
humming gladly, strumming dandy while he's puffing on the grass
I bought some sticks of dynamite and shoved them up his ass
Pressed the detonator and bombed him up so bad
He went flying to the moon like a cosmonaut that mashed
up his air ducts by taking off his oxygen mask
The first time I met him, he was such a snotty man
who was acting like a donkey jumping up and down like mad
Kicking his hooves, throwing him up against the blast
Going (*haw hee haw*) like someone who is cracked
If push should come to shove and the shove should come to bash
I will smash him with a shovel like that Norman psychopath
have him running like a chicken's head cut off of his ass
(*sound of hen clucking*) Cluck clucka clucka! Buacka buack ba-kack!
Does anybody know what the **** he even raps?
Tell me, 'cause I'm finding it tough to understand
**** lifting a foot up, he can't put up his hands
This guy is such a bitch, I thought he was a man!
In fact, he and jenna put up a perfect match
But as soon as the match is struck, up goes them, bam!
"Oh my God, Jenny, please hold onto my fanny!
We're going to meet God, and He's not a happy chappie!"
We picked on Illustraight, and now we're gonna pay
And now He's sending us down to burn in the flames!"
(*sound of fire burning and people screaming*)
On behalf of whitey, prof, charlie and bam
Goodbye, good night, and don't come back again!

*SNORE*....wa...huh..oh sorry i feel as sleep
that was a great bedtime story cuz i fell asleep from intro, but that story was cheap
But u thinkin u can beat me HA thats rich
so u admit u sleep with ur nethew, wat a bitch
a bitch to his nethew thats gonna get dominated
bitch of the year guess what u were nominated
check it out ill had to attack a girl just to prove he could win
till i retaliated and he ran LIKE the wind
right into a tornado of pain
ur fuckin full of fire bout to make it rain
cuz ur a flamer bet u could light royce da 5'9s cig with ur asshole
or we could call ur anus the fast line where people dont go in slow
yo yo he had to write a whole story on me to match my skills
he attacks jenna well i guess he dont like girls
dats y he has a gay ass shrine to the M.B.K
he gives it to himself while lookin at it every day
he basts off a first person shooter, call him halo
but hes just a little puss as girl , call him jay lo
he keeps talkin **** thats comin out his fathers ass
they have a gay two in his car and he pushes the gass (thats really disgusting if u no what it means) so u can take ur book and ur ****
u better run like a bitch before, like one, u get hit






No dis respect to mbk, jay lo, or royce da 5"9'

I don't Jay Lo or Royce woulda cared...

Just sayin

Good lyrics dough playa. But Illustraight has better multis and a little more meaning in his lyrics.

you think your **** is tough and tight?
that's knee slapper, your ****'s loser than the vagina on slut dike
hey by the way, where's your raw lyrics? i dont see any multis
your a fake fraud gimick, you have no knowledge
i paint it raw and vivid, nice name faggot, good to see someone is original
that was sarcasm, i should be marked as classic
call my name out again faggot and get your ass kicked
you're right, you are the host
it should stay that way, cause you can't rap
i cause your body to fail, you're a victim to anthrax
imma class act, stand back, snap ya snapback off ya head and sew it to your damn back, cause imma head back and treat ya with the basics
have ya screamin, goin apeshit, normal Norman Bates have tied up in basement ta get yo face split
your at my damn legs like a mutt and im just shoein ya off like "you biter you" cause your a pet to Heidi Klum
and by the way DFC's my homie and he can spit way "tigher" than you

your lyrics are at such beginners level... get on the level with the rest of the real MC's on here. HOMIE. lol

i ain't like you lil host
because i ain't no lil hokes
i can't stand your lil jokes
kick your ******* throat in your head intill lil chokes
you think your goin come here...and beat me?? your so wrong
go back to never ending diss rap battle lll where you belong
i laughed at your ****..man your so whack
this is rap battling man we don't hold back
your dealing with a dark force
i'll be the reason for your parents divorce
and if they separate just think of drew
your dad ain't leavin your mom...he's leaving you
**** you i don't care no one..you can not control me
your the fuckin devil hahaha show me
you and your whack **** and your crew could just blow me

i'm serious this time i'm done
p.s i looked over my last post to you...lol how was i even telling you about your future

Lol I recorded the diss for that kid it's on soundcloud now

Maybe this sounds a little bazaar but I just wanted to let you Rappers know that you can be way more than what you can even imagined of yourselves.
The reason I say this is because I have seen other rappers do it. I hope that each one of you would take a little time to think about what I am saying.

This may be a video that I shared in the past and if you were fortune enough to know each one of these rappers in the video, name them and know just a little about them, I would think that you would have learned way more truth than the average person has learned in a life time . Just my opinion but I do challenge you to prove me wrong. You do not have to go to college to know what I am talking about because you have the worlds knowledge at your finger tips "the internet"

im new to this...not trying to rap battle i just want advice on what i can work on..

big al..
in this world a poet like me is so rare
even sasquatch took a photo of me just to stare
he said together we can make a great pair
and scare, all the others rappers outhere
who dare to share there fake lyrics im here to interphere it..