Neverending Rap Battle

will check it out,,,let some of my dudes hear some beats

ight thats cool man

this ain't to start a battle just tell me what you think.........

a red rose intill i paint it black
all the sodium when i fall into cardiac
arrest from a heart attack
limp forward with a broken back
knife to the arm felt like a deep slash
i walked away with a broken neck from a car crash
no angel just a dark apparition
i'm the darkness in the devil's vision
so into rap that my eye starts twitchin
i was in the devil's mind so i guess i was chosen
my body is on fire but my soul is frozen
i show people what it's like,.... but they say it's hard to see
they put a hole in my chest where my heart should be
i'm not tall and not the strongest
but i'm able to tough it out the longest
if i fail i'm back in my old life and i know this
no more playin around it's time for me to focus
i feel like the world is a tower
of a raining concrete shower
i say i'm the king.. yet i have no power
being the best, i guess, i could keep wishin
time for you all to just shut up and listen
cause with my lyrics you got no idea what your missin.

u got heart homie ... jus keep doing you

i guess ima keep the thread alive

never gonna quit ,first one ta spit n i'll be the last one blastin passion
passin assassin Grimm reaper jsst killin it , fillin it wit , real n spit
the missing link , existing think its an empty page jsst missing ink
this instinct,the recipe of destiny , taste the love in it
cumming hard no rubber gloving it ,so hot I need a oven mitt
Just live it give it ya all , grow a pair a balls
sometimes shits terrible , well others pray for a miracle
you get up an do what has to be done
for heavensake anything else is blasphemy son
u have as good a chance uh hittin me , as blastin thee sun
no maskin me uh ,pass the weed , dont worry my ass succeeds
facing up hill battles , still travel , lightspeed , few entity like me energy
I know what im here for , when you hear four .... you on a golf course
when you hear your here for a hearing then your in a court
no matter how you swing ur gavil , theres no kings in battle
and less in war , pressin forth with these lessons course through the arterys
at the heart a me , a centrafuse jsst waiting to spark a free

thanks man. i respect that

I'll spit a few and if it's good I'll retire
I'm bringin the fuel like wood to a fire
Should you choose to admire the roots I aquire
I'll send you in loops and claim I'm a liar

I'll put chains on a tyre and send you higher
And make you miss me like a friend on a pyre
We require what's missing from this view
And not misuse this game with no continue's

When I get mine strychnine,
hit nine,
followed by two ones with no comma, no kamikaze,
Because we know you can't bodily harm me,
i got that bodily armour,
I put your bitch in my bed and bodily harm her
I'll get here there from A to B,
So fast you can't C,
The way i do my dirty D,
and turn it it over easy E,
Just to leave you F'ed up G.
So grab my mic when I MC,
So I can leave you ended like XYZ,
and drop an E with an ING,
so you're a dog? I'd stay away tha asian YG.

I spot a victim and hit'em,
Smelling funny to sniff'em
Fishy like the plot's fixin' to thicken,
Tuna salad with a side of chicken.
In other words I'm eating these rappers like happy meals,
And breaking their ******* legs like Happy Wheels
Bonnaci aint got **** or bones with I,
But jet speed I'm gonna fly.

So T-R-izzle,
all up in this bizzle,
Poppin' white pizzles,
and yall bitches just poppin' skittles,
Little faggots tastin the rainbow,
Seems sketchy like flipshow

If we were kids, I'd steal your big wheel,
spit in your happy meal,
then say it was God's will.

4 really u get smoked philly style ,go talk another false prophet billy idol
really rhyme brawl ,turn time capsules to time bombs
when you swollow the bottle n blow up like apollo , ur spine gone
wither'd away you bitter disgrace ,put a shiv in ya waist n spit in ya face
n cut tracks on ya nutsack , n go up ya back , till ur **** fall out
you cant spit at all now , get ya skull crowned
when I grasp a microphone n bash ya life with the throne
r2 d2 ,c3 PO go back to the hive ya ass is a drone ,cant even pass as a clone
bubble boy need to get out that biosphere b4 i start smashing ya dome
put c4 on ya rim's big pimpin n spark blasting the chrome
ur to small to put ur ass in a coma ,so I put ya ass on a comb
an brush you off , like I dont know ya ....peace dogg its over....

wow u bit eminems verse from peace destroyed
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thats hilarious i just heard it ............ BITER .... n i still beat you think about that ****.......

I thought he might have switched up his verse fro the BET cypher

if i was to be placed under any category of anything
id be placed under the catergory of chloroforming, marked as a deformed human being
human BEING you've never seen, that is me, strangle ya OFF so viciously
till ya instantly, fall to your knees, grimicing
i can TELL when there's too much pain, ill make ya YELL when ya feel ashmaed
pockets full of swords and knives, step up ta the target and get slayed

it's all fun and games when it comes down to it
they say influence in the music sparks the truest
then why the **** havent i ever been noticed?
THOUGHTS of a killer, when i SPIT ya better fill ya
ears UP with realest, cause im ONE of the realest
and **** all your feelins, i give a **** how you're feelin
cause i could BUST all your brains all over the celin
how ya feelin? hows your breathin? is it under control?
how you bein when you're guts hang all over the wall?
how you fall? how you say you feel nothin at all?
when the slugs penetrated your skull? you're dead wrong

DEAD WRONG BIGGIE REMIX

fire,,,chloroforming,,marked as a deformed human being!!!,,,nice

yep yep,,nice concept,,,salute

sipped an optimistic hourglass?,,,whoa,,,easy on em,lol

now thats some deep **** right there,,,u can really write some heartfelt ****,,,,nice,,,salute homie

thanks man... it's all in the heart

when i bust verbal bars of destruction please be near
no weezy here get popped like a comb thru peasy hair
to be clear i circle like buzzards when these squares talk
perped walked like i'm wearing a purple turban thru airports
an urban legend whose learned to defer to impaired thoughts
repaired ones society tore apart in the devils lair by default
compete for flow like bordering resorts these no ordinary thoughts
please no forgering my retorts write your own authoritive reports
kids i fathered the art of NEW YORK talk not bothered by yall
rap needed to get fucked i smashed now shut be slaughtering all
beasting thoughts i'm often reeking of it so i stay speaking ****
weekends spent ROCKING blocks like lil MIDDLE EASTERN KIDS
okay lets go,,,,
been a mike controller since i been a tyke in the stroller
big dice roller ayotollah extoller soul controller
no opposers like the U.S. rolling over angola
my bars are rough as granola the motorola folder
couldnt be any COLDER if there were 2 of me BI-POLAR
report your bitch missing i stole her and now i own her
got her smoking mad herb turned winona into a stoner
i forced her to telephone ya,this psycho gonna let me go
about 4;54 at the corner of victoria and livonia
i'll muscle older soldiers that act sweet like RUSSEL STOVER
be eating mussels over provolone holding a cold soda
foes get a cold shoulder then i roll boulders to they domes
no postphonements no time to gloss over broken components
my god that very moment gave me a stone cold boner
pimp mode when my lymph modes flow from here to california
prose poems and thomes heard crystal clear like BOSE owners
fiona buys me loads of trojans when i'm about to bone her
neighbors be condoning the moaning after that its cold coronas
cord wrapped around her neck stuffed in a closet i'm a freak i told ya
i'll get in ya mouth like molars fruit rollups or guns during a hold up
wait a minute i got this sewed up pay attention like a coat tug
H2O like a boat tug dont get ur throat cut homie no misnomer
i do it in cold blood lyrics bestowed on me by the earths owner
bloody marys mocha mimosas potients of rum and coke son
dont know why i spoke that quotient i rather blow smoke son
this **** can get uglier than approaching a poster of omorosa
flyer than a testerosa lyrics soar higher than demar deroazon
if i catch ur ass in atlantic city,i'm jacking gambling winnings
i'm BUCKing at niggaz like MONTA ELLIS and BRANDON JENNINGS,,LOL

part 2.......

i'm insane my mind is a mess
my life is a bowl of stress
everyone gets more, but i seem to get less
you can forgive, but never forget
trusting everyone is something i will regret
with shut eyes and blood as my sweet
my lyrics blow out the drums in your ears
blood, sweet, and no tears
a broken kid with no fears
with the devil's voice in his mind the only thing that he hears
if the world is thrown it wont move me
my life is a movie
people always judge someone,,,, i wonder how though
they turned a happy kid into a dark shadow
when i say my life is a movie its just a short preview
ask god to rewind life and ask for a redo
go to a library and ask for a re-new...

tell me what you think about this one!!!!!

You obviously know how to send a message and connect with people on a person note now try to complicate your rhyme schemes along with it to show your not just a simple minded kid whining about his problems it will also help increase the flow because when u rhyme 1 syllable words it sounds choppy at times I love your heart though keep in up bro