Neverending Rap Battle

It's a crooked I line from the shady cypher

hahahahhaha what the **** is this/ me vss all the true able2know mix/ ?>faget i don't kiss/i'm a true B-ball baller bitch/ on side/ i'm donkey winning hands full of chips bitch / still fking bitches and sluts and i never kiss em i tell em to stfup and dizz em / soon as i get horny and bonnie wake the bitch up in morning to fk my 12 inch lil homie/ to go against me ? / i **** them good + i teach em hood/ they always come back cuz my cock slowly gets the job done/ good/ i let them speak there feeling as long as i'm happy doing my business dealing onside/true story/ i only do lesbians

u can't go against me/ stupid i'm to hood i worse den chrs tucker mather ******!

why the **** u jumping for are u his bitch or just his secret whore / look fagets/ u both need to understand u fag and u get the bam/ what the fk is wrong with u fags/ like what happen to the days of the still fking ugly bitches with a bag over the head/ or a pillow over a bad breath /

No hate out of ten / what u guys think /
i new to this but i'm working for my future skills
nasty as fk ?

Looking for Future Crew

looking for true crew

Cheers for the Feed back ! Only thing I'm doing is blazing lad! And nah I don't take it as hate bro , I asked and got told , and yeh I lack a lot mate but hopefully I get better iv been told iv improved , my post was freestyle btw , and that's something I lack my words will be better next time ! Peace !

its always Freestyle .... except that there written


shits amusing, wrists slit an blood oozing
there like **** winning , cause like there girls they love loosing
virginity's , shirts an skirts
you cant use single syllable words in vicinity , its infiniti an beyond lightyears
write tears on the pages , crying out for the pen
9 rappers dieing outta ten
8 rappers lieing in jail waiting for bail to get up outta the pen
7 trappers 6 actors 5 fingers'll slap ya 4 formula's masterd
3 factors , 2 realitys shattered
only 1 emcee with a gun in his mouth ready to blast ya basterd's
with his LAST WORD

Who want battle?

I prefor robbery,
lirycly pure, no philosophy
If u survive my strike impossibly , like you hit a lottery
yo' rap is like a comedy, very bad quality
possibly, i put you in coma, gorilla niggas wathcin' me
safari psicchology, serv them like chef, understand zoology, biology
Yea you know I'm mobbin it, robbin it
I think you wanna be, high technology
but your just geting subconsciously dumber than your father is
rockin tihs, you don't know what problem is
word, Odd future, I'll be better then Rakim is
recipe is never giva a **** and rhyme in this
hard thimes, writing melodys
When I'm done niggaz fired up, commit felonys
cause of my rhymes go so heavily
I'm a team with good team chemistry
Coach carter trained me,
I'm eating, pussy is todays specialty
I work restlessly, thats why i have wide weaponry
rhymes sick like on ecstasy
the world is my enemy, so I'll rap till I'm dead or seventy

not bad ill give u a 6 between 10

Pretty good Nice rhyme scheme make sure you get some meaning whether it be metaphors or emition behind the words a rhyme scheme is nothing without meaning

You goin in depresion
I'm creatin compresion till your eyes pop and flip
you mad cuz I spit against politcian
others do to but I rhyme well like hop an wiz khalifa
then it looks like a fuckin chain car colision
I take head from niggaz
flip em like money so they scared of my gang position
searching for the realest niggaz
then brake their spine with my gorilla fingers
I had a vison, all the playas in the game got money on making decisions
but they cry like my baby sister
when I'm pretending to cut her hair with a plastic scissors
Ya'll ackt like a vicious competition but you harm me like a holly bishop
Like your bitch fake killer
She loves you, but i shoot in her mouth like reggie miller
she jacks my zipper, and I rip her inside harder than jack the ripper
she licks my nipple like I'm her pimp and like she rape me simple
wiggle my thounge inside of her like its a sort of strange sea crature
Check out my word seaqunce I'm known by my difference
My rap so god I can cause world war three instace
Hate for many reasons but you can't deny skill though
I don't give a ****, I try to rap for bucks and brake your heart like I brake car window

I'm trying, thx for the advice
to me it all makes sence, can you dig it? lol
it's a diss, you know, so i think it has a pretty clear meaning. to diss someone

Yeah that's what I mean hide the meaning so that only true hip hop heads will respect it it takes time in not even at it yet and I've been doin this **** for like a year rap is more than rhyming it took a while for me to realize that

OK. I'll try now one more time

I bring pain, bitches and narcotics
straight outa compton sounds so moronic
comparin' to my rhymes , I'm so egzotic
Ill like I need antibiotics
Try to dissrespect my town with your poor tacktcis
and you get beaten like Rihanna, Chris Brown
melt you like plastic, Speakers up so loud
Make a sword out of you like a blacksmith
You aint a ballar, neither is Bow Wow,
you fake like J.B. facelift
Tyler creators nose bleed, I got a napkin
It aint over till you start tappin
I started rappin as a little kid on the corner
now I'm saggin, all you hates can suck my boner
Yo rap is funny like that farmer in cartoons of brothers warner
transform your self rom female to man like a transformer
You ain't Lady Gaga, bench warmer!

It takes time

"mathematic rap tactics mcs get subtracted"
"you couldn't kill a track if u snapped a railroad in half"
"a spider on the mic devouring fly rappers"

I edited it just, lil better?
Ok, i'll see what I can write later it's enough of trying for today

Don't try man just let it come to u just keep doin what u doin

I'm comin with my mobbin'
you just a popcorn I'll be poppin
I'm at your window like a muthafuckin goblin
you live with you mum, Bunny rabbit copi
and she looks hairy like Bilbo fuckin' hobbit
conquer competiton like Viking
so good on this verse you can call me Micing
When I'm bored I just start writing
these punch lines like Jackie Chen high kick
I'm batman and his psychic
I'm white and I wipe this ...

to be continued