Bambino
 
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Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2011 06:56 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Use that phrase itself, train of thought. You could do alot with that.

My brain cells are off the tracks, now I'm losin' my train of thought
Bambino
 
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Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2011 07:02 pm

Here let me hop in to this ****
America is about to fear me after this ****
I'll show you who belongs in this ****
This ****, is a gift, a fire burnin', not lit
This is my wick, this is your face
This is Hilary's tonsils, bout to blow up when I'm on stage
Performin' yellin' out rage, mistakes, not mey, pull out a glock on that dike, let it go bang
When the shots rang, feef fo, tic tac toe, this is how slow, Imma' bout to go so
Hold tight, ask me a question and I just might pull a
Herman Cain, pause, whup, that sums up America
Whup, hoop, crockashit, this is hysteria, Michelle can I please, oh please, marry ya?
Uck all ya'll, uck my ick, will ya?
ick my ss rack, shoot it out with Whitehouse body guard
Yellin' out "who is that?" You remember who belongs, now
Tell the President to put me on top now
On top of Mac, that's where I belong, put me there now
Put me there along with the rest of the crew
Allies, Automatic Weapons, let Mas join too
Fee fie foe fum, can I stick my weiner in your buns?
Can I have some fun, with the way you get down son?
Son, I met daugter, pass the water my throat is now parched ah
And just remember, oh, just remember, who belongs
Not Trey Songz, Allies and Automatic Weapons

Me and some of highschool friends are gettin' together this weekend for a studio session, I got the last verse for once. To the beat of "Rap Game" I love this verse. Took about 2 weeks. The Hermain Cain line. Check it out. Sunday is the last day I have back in my hometown to record with these fella's. Me and two other friends put a group called "Automatic Weapons together our junior year and some other guys I never met, called "Allies" aswell.

Oh and Prof, just to let ya know, this is kinda' cool, a guy from this group "Allies" calls himself Proffesor. We'll see how he spits. I wanta' get this recording on here. Peace!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6KShnRl8niA
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2011 07:16 pm
@Bambino,
I already used train of thought that's why I'm looking for more this is all supposed to be added on to the few lines I had earlier I was just using that as an example imma use parts of the brain (cerebral, medula oblongota, nerve cells etc) but I can't think of any more phrases like train of thought to play off of or even just anything about the human anatomy could work too I guess
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Bambino
 
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Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2011 09:01 pm
Not only am I spittin' in the present, but I'm also gifted

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MrGzy
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 12:57 am
@Odd Socks,
If i spit on you, you wouldnt do ****/thats why everynight im fuckin your bitch/ if u thought u could beef wit me, well then no ****/ cuz i aint scared of a rapper who cant spit/if i ate from your plate you'd sit and watch/thats cuz all you fagots do is the lower notch/kick this bitch into high and we gonna go/to **** up your day and watch ur tears blow/so sit yo fat ass down and eat them chips/read these lines,im fuckin ripped/ur gurls pussy fat and she need a damn treadmill/just tell her to leave me alone, thats if she will/she dont know who she date cuz u scared to meet her/thats why i fucked that ass.... utill she seizured/i take my mower and make that ass chop/cuz like your weight problem, ill never stop/so if you see me around i got one thing to say/get to close and ill make yo ass pay/i dont like to be cheated so lets make this fair/so i will go crazy, and prolly throw a chair/i make my come backs short cuz i dont need excuces/now like ur moms ass/this beat got executed.
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Illustraight
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 04:28 am
@Bambino,
"Uck all ya'll, uck my ick, will ya?
ick my ss rack"

I'm not being funny, but were you trying to use pig latin here?
Bambino
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 07:52 am
@Illustraight,
**** all ya'll, suck my dick, will ya?
Lick my ass crack

Makin' fun of rappers that don't use cuss words, homie.
Illustraight
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 08:28 am
@Bambino,
Alternatively, you could rephrase it like this:

"Uck-fay all y'all, uck-say my ick-day, will ya?
Lick my utt-bay ack-cray!"

LOL
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WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 01:16 pm
Mind games

Tryin to play mind games 
tetris in my brain to give me migranes 
but I'm not phased or sane
 so shut off the console or it's game over cuz I'm not playin 
I'll break the tracks in ur Brain to derail your train of thought
Travel through your sinuses take a shot 
and ram the fuckin train through your boyfriends cock!
I'll piss in your stream of conciouness 
Take back all the compliments 
(but my life is so hard)
shut up bitch! this is my time to vent!
Phew better take a breath or better yet 
Go get a kinect to attach to ur cerebral 
So I can play these mind games too maybe get a few people 
I'll play mw3 with medula oblongata whoops I died and u did too sorry Arnold 
I guess you were right these aren't children games
But to me it's childs play I know ur miles away  
But the termiator terminated this bitches situation with one spray
of the spit I lay it down quick I'm huffin up lugis they way I spit sick
**** I'm goin a little off topic better stop it cuz this verse was supposed to be about me makin a profit off this bitch havin a fuckin cock in
her throat and she said I'm the one who's gonna choke?         

How's this verse guys I feel like I'm making a comeback tell me if you get the Arnold schwartzenegger section
 
Bambino
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 01:49 pm
Pants hangin' over his butt
But that doesn't make him an ass, ya see

Get it?
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 01:53 pm
@Bambino,
Check out my verse I need to know if it makes sense I'm startin to get back in the writin groove
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Bambino
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 03:09 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Good. Keep workin' on that. I didn't get the Arnold Swc. one.
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 03:47 pm
@Bambino,
When Arnold was governor of Cali he tried banning violent video games cuz he said they were bad for children cu he said they were causing children to have violent out bursts and I played off of that

Make sense now?
Bambino
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 03:53 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Oh yeah, makes sence. Are you saying he's playing video games and you killed him in the video game? Cause if your not, I'm gonna' use that.
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 04:12 pm
@Bambino,
Nah u can use that like the entire section is one metaphor the kinect for xbox is the thing where u are tge controller I said I'll hook it up to her mind meaning she is now the controller then I will use her medula oblolongata (the control center of the brain) then I will play mw3 a game not suit for someone my age as far as ratings then I die in the game and since she is my controller making her die too meaning Arnold was right these games bring nothing but trouble it's a long complicated metaphor that takes up alot of the verse which us why I needed it to work
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Bambino
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2011 10:50 pm
Yo, comin' hard
Off the top of the head, forgot where you mom was, she's dead
Parked two wagon cars, two clips, up in arms, the whole set of movies of Austin Powers
Still forgot the start, still forgot to put the car in park, till rolled down into Central Park
Fog arose from the dark, paintin' a picture, not with paint, but words it's art
I keep seein' this family reunion setting
While the whole family is on the hillside it's just about to start, with a blanket sprawled out
Till someone pulls a glock and whips ones out, now it has started
The whole family starts runnin', as one kid drops down and
The kid shootin' reloads another weapon, pulls it out of his bag and
Let's three more shots go, this is what my brain restores
Everybody knows, this is how it goes
These scenes are catchin' up with me, it become real life to me
One of these days, I'm gonna' be in jail for three
Notice me, sittin' on TV with both hands in my lap day dreaming
As I'm gettin' interviewed, reading, two suicide notes, everyone starts screaming
Whip out a bottle of kerosine and another of gasoline, she's stopped laughing
Yells cut to the camera, but then I pull out a gun, point it at him
Told him to keep this live and then added
Pointed to the pitch, that I had in
A headlock, with this glock, pointed right at her
I yelled out to the set not to panic
I was just playin', little did they know I had a bomb in my lap and
Counted one two three and blew up the set and
These are the settings, I think about daily, I maybe
A little bit more crazy, then you thought, but maybe, just maybe
You mis judged me, I'm actually tame ya see
This isn't even the demon inside me
This the devil outside of me
This is what happens when you put me on a beat
I kick this ****, with my mouth not my feet, tell me what you think
AM I CRAZY!!!!?




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UflZo_tucqU
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WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 18 Dec, 2011 09:51 am
So u wanna make a facebook status about me? Fine just get out of myspace before I tumble(tumblr) you over the talking roulette table(chat roulette)

make sense?
Bambino
 
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Reply Sun 18 Dec, 2011 12:04 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
Kind of. Might want to tune that up a little.
I'm writin' a new song today. Tell me this makes sence please

It's drivin' me nuts, worse than these Planters in my cup
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 18 Dec, 2011 12:27 pm
@Bambino,
Yeah u mean planters as in the peanuts try involving a car or something since it's driving you nuts idk if there is a car that rhymes with nuts but that would work better

Or maybe
"this is drivin me nuts like the planters leavin my steering wheel stuck
or
"it's Drivin me nuts worse than the planters in the back of my pick up
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WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 18 Dec, 2011 12:32 pm
@Bambino,
What you mean by tune it up, like more aggression?
 

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