Neverending Rap Battle

man your raps are plain as bread and mary go round more like mary give head your a over aged vergon i can beat u eny time with one rhyme if u think you stand a chance then u gotta anther thin comin cause when i step up time the mike i spit faster then rocky runin youll fall down faster then marry and by the you got the name wrong its relly harry and when u die no ones gonna miss u cause all ur friends imageinry

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Ever heard of the phrase "spittin' feathers?"

Many don't know but I spit feathers, would explain why I eat fly rappers

Spittin' feathers and usin' complex letters, fly spider Webster's

Anybody get this? Please tell me. I really need this line to make clear sence. Thanks...

ya dude thats tight i get it

Alright thanks dude, all I needed.

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This beat is like ice cream truck bells, while drivin' through hell
We'll barricade through your arcade and **** if we're playin' games
Insubstantial, part cannibal, animal, supernatural all is in part of my game
Gettin' head as I drive down the lane, swerve hit a man with a cane , I must confess
That's a bad example of safe sex
Spittin' feathers and usin' complex letters, fly spider Webster’s
Net's are for fish but in order to catch me you're gonna' need a Satan priest, bitch

Speak of the devil, I'm inedible to conquer sour murder your father no holy water, don't play around end up slaughtered, a lot farther insane than you thought process thought of

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I sorta got it care to explain?

The phrase spittin' feathers is what it's based around.

Complex letters which are in the Webster dictionary, so I compared the spittin' feathers into the word "fly" and then brought the spider 'web' into play but instead I used Webster's because of the "complex letters" quote. Maybe, quite possibly, my best I've written.

he's fly an spitting webs , n webstsers dictionary....

That's more of a simple way to put it, I guess I coulda' said that. Lol

I had the complex letter to websters part the "fly spider" part through me off

There probably shoud be a comma in between them two.

Yeah give it a lil pause right there

Yo man i should let you know and dont take it as disrespect as ive seen it in many rappers on here but for you its more prominant, obviously your a massive fan of eminem like myself and others, and you also take huge inspiration from him like i do, but ive seen you branch off of him a bit too much to the point where i can see it clearly when reading your stuff, and if i can see it when just simply reading, imagine how obvious it will be when your performing your raps, id say just tone it down, i know your finding your own voice which i am also and its hard, but you will be mocked and hated for even being pretty similar to eminem u see how every white rapper gets compared no matter what, for instance i saw you write a few days back you was trying to imitate eminems westwood flow with a bit of your own, well man you should just completeley make it your own or you will be mocked it happens all the time regardless of how good it is, if its the same flow as Eminems everyone will notice, and one thing i always see is words pr phrases in your raps from eminems songs/freestyles and the latest one i just saw was "Holy water"...."Acid rap itll eat these floors" lol sound familiar? im not hating man its good your progressing but you need to completely wipe away any lyrics which will connect you too him, ive actually wrote some stuff and then realised eminem has already spat that ****, we either think the same or it was subconciously in the back of my mind

Charliesforce "bolt the doors and choke the vocal chords of local whores"
Eminem "..I wont choke no whore till her vocal chords dont work in her throat no more"

lol no hate man just constructive guidance

Agreed, myself. I've noticed it myself in the studio. When I'm rapping my verses, I try too hard. But that holy water thing didn't come from Em. Holy water is to clease your body from any demons (as they say in my religion) and the line before I said holy water was about the devil/satan priest. That had nothin' to do with Em, lol. To be quite honest, my rap career is looking pretty slim considering the schedule I have coming up in the oncoming years. I have college and all sorts of stuff for a degree. I don't really see me being a progressive rapper, it ain't necissarilly my dream, but it is a thing that keeps me goin'.

I actually did a Stan cover live last week Tuesday live at a rap ball room. It was choriographed in ****, pretty cool but yeah there are haters and there are people who help. But that holy water thing had everything to do with the line before what I said, it had nothin' to do with Em, I mean any rapper can say holy water.

No hate either I notice that too ur lyrics are still preety sick I look for inspiration in other rappers myself like ills pen is mightier than the sword line I took that phrase and made a decent line that didn't even come close to his only thing I can say is widen your view of rappers granted nobody mainstream really raps like em besides maybe yelawolf at times try listening to underground diabolic resembles em alot in his rhyme schemes to me And look for other inspiration all around you
ex: "you could spit frankfurters ur rhymes still wouldn't be hot dawg" I thought of that at nathans lol

I have a wide range of rappers. That ain't the problem it's just I listen to him more than others. I listen just more than his music, like some people do, I look for his schemes and how he approaches his lines. This might sound really dumb but Lil Wayne approaches his punches really really good to be quite honest.

Yeah I actually agree with that it's just I hate the topics of his punches try lookin for inspiration in different places too

http://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/dusk_before_dawn NEW ONE ,,