Neverending Rap Battle

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and help with finishing it ok?...........

BUILD MYSELF
(A parody of the award-winning song "Lose Yourself" by Eminem)

[Intro]
Alright, look
If you had one chance
To prove to the whole community
That you’re not as retarded and stupid as they think you are
Just by addressing it to them
Would you capture it, or just let it slip?

[Verse 1]
This autism’s getting, a little bit strong and heavy
These other brothers always berate it, underrated
It’s crazy, even though I’m looking calm and ready
to take them on, but I keep on forgetting
how to throw down, the whole crowd blows me down
I open my mouth but the words don’t come out
I’m stalling, how? Every day they call me out
They approach me now, knock out, over, pow!
Snap back to the past, my moments of adolescence
Oh, this mad pressure that’s thrown for bad measure
I’ve gone on another level, my whole foot’s on the pedal
I’m going up to the maximum
Control me? I won’t let them
Oh no! I should just tell them to hold!
They walk all over me boldly
I feel gullible, but I mustn’t let it happen
It’s, bad for my sanity, yo! ‘Cause I’m a man, you see?
Better adapt a new flow before I go bananas

[Hook: x2]
I need to build myself before it’s too late
And I get committed
Throw these restrictions away, hey!
‘Cause this is my one chance
To get myself heard today
This opportunity’s mine, man, this is my time!

[Verse 2]
Trying to blend in, with all this social warfare
But they don’t seem to know me at all here
I’m all queer; an unsung hero, within the people
Who’s constantly treated unequal
This league of evil’s making low comments, invading good progress
Made by this sole minor who may be so modest
God made him gold-hearted
Which makes him so important and praised among others
Raised by a lone mother who gave her two sons the best that she could muster
Escaped the days when she endured pain from our father
Two decades later, I bear the same from my brother
He painted me into a corner, with no courage
This goes to show how much emotion
we can hold or expose to the point of bawling
With no choice but to bottle it all into our stomachs
And no, we don’t love it
But our lives go on, I suppose it’s all **** it!

[Hook: x2]

[Verse 3]
No more waits, I’ll make it like the Olympic games
Because I got what it takes just to win this race
I was shy at the beginning, that timidness changed
I had a slipper and a snowball chucked in my face
But I’ll keep fighting, and keep rhyming ‘til I’m kinda
99 years old, dying with my life done
Lying in my hospital bed with my light on
Reciting lines off Fawlty Towers and Monty Python
Visage is all withered away and my eyes are tired
Making loud noises just like a typewriter
Lose half of my mind and can’t remember if I had a
house or a job or even a nice wife
This life is so trife, and it’s getting even trifer
Trying to transform my whole self into a really keener fighter
But right now it seems I’m stuck in the middle between a minder
and an independent yearning for some success
My feet is on the ground a lot
And I pound a lot
Keeping my head to the sky like I just downed some rock
I conjure up a plot, get skills and round them up
I gotta grab this chance right before it vanishes, now or not
Mum, I love you - but now I’ve got to go
I can’t stay any longer, ain’t allowed to rot
So here I go, it’s my shot; kick this autism out
Walk right up to the top of that hill and shout out loud!

[Hook: x2]

[Outro]
Don’t let anybody bring you down, man

Just got done recording. It went pretty well. Messed up a couple of lines everyonce in a while. But I got a rough verse done. To an older early 00's beat.


I got pointed out though by a rap recording artist. He said I sounded like the Eminem from the Infinite album. And said if I was going to rap like that, rap like it but change it up a little bit. That made me happy that someone noticed that. He said "I had a very mature Emcee voice". Peace!

I like what we have so far but we should get the "this is gangsta rap" pic out cuz that's what were trying to avoid were trying to focus on lyrics not who has tge biggest chain and the baddest bitch

I got a pic

ok cool

you saw it????/

Change the battle catogories to classic and skill

i was editing it while you were...look at it now

and how do you put on the screen from the control panel to make the people battle?or cypher?

I have no clue it says we can have weebly designers design it themselves? That might be better

that cost 449 dallaors.....HELL NO....we are doin good so far....hope that proff can help with that

Ah **** nvm idk

PROFESSOR WE NEED HELP

Don't forget to put in a password bar in sign up

oh ****////forgot password bar......

Put a confirmation bar too to make sure people don't mess up on tge password

yo skilled = cyphers , know what i mean ???

i'll help anyway i can ...

and yo were representing hip hop ( gangsta , cerebral ,revelutionary, death murder , thug , old school , new school , hardcore , underground , weastcoast , east coast , dirty south , swag rap , drug rap ) etc... the whole shebang.... thats what we want the pic to rep

If you don't mind me asking - considering that your idea of a totally fresh battle forum is a decent one - what are you planning on naming the website? Let me know so I can sign myself up. The only problem is, I live in the United Kingdom which means I wouldn't be able to get a premium package, since it's in dollars and not pound sterling. I'd have to remain a basic member.

I've just tried to log on to it, but the server's directed me straight to a Domain Advisor.

IM SO FRICKEN HAPPY RIGHT NOW! I just signed up for 2 freestyle/cyphers. They'll be on camera too. Me and 4 other dudes.

First one is on December 2 which costs me $250

Second one which is gonna' be big because it's gonna' be preformed with an audience, January 13 $675. 10 participants in that one. Can't wait. Peace ab2k!

SIGN UP ILL....if you do i can put video and new stuff on the website i couldnt before....it says......if 1 person signs up for your website you will unlock....video...i forgot the rest...but DO IT