GJayPro
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 05:50 pm
killin' game like I'm Kemba Walker, my stains spot faster then helicopters, leave ya lethargic,
steal ya like Target, deal ya on the market, real it boy and park it, Narcotic poisons stupendous,
I'm chaotic boiling and reckless, don't mess with the best of the nest, or get pelted restless with ya pointers peckless,
I smash it, eye gash it,
leave ya body in a Gucci bag, bleedin' wit ya rookie swagg, never swing at the drug that always be killin' ya,
severed clean with the lyrics that be drillin' ya
I clean mean on the seen of disease like Oxi Clean, dream streams of the kings that try ta' be like me,
wana battle bout the round and I'm blow right thru, don't stagger bout the scouts and Narcotic too (wooooo!)

Narcotic is my real life rapper name by the way for those who didn't know.
GJayPro
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 06:00 pm
@theprofessor,
ty bro, and I finally found the true meaning of flow Wink
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 06:10 pm
@GJayPro,
No hate just sayin try to cut it down on the similes u usin the word "like" too much try to add other aspects to ur raps ur shits gettin better though I can tell ya that
samyboy27
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:02 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
MADE A WEBSITE EVERY ONE......................well i started it....BUT SO FAR ITS OFF THE beep..............HALLA
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samyboy27
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:06 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
give me your email man so i can make you moderater on my website......just dont **** it up bro......................
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samyboy27
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:09 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
you will have access to finishing the website,costomizing it,adding polls,adding ads,adding anything you can possibly think of.....i started with a white blank screen and a control panel.....did ALOT.....now it looks even better then letsbeef.com.....mine is called RAPPING-CITY....where things are fair
samyboy27
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:10 pm
@samyboy27,
its better then their stupid website and i aint finished YET.....haha
reasoning logic
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:24 pm
@adazah,
Yea honesty is great but without intellectual knowledge you can not have this!

Intellectual Honesty


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theprofessor
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:39 pm
@samyboy27,
yo sammy send me the link and make me a moderator too , u know im straight up about it... Milkboxkids2hotmail.com thats mine ....
theprofessor
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 07:40 pm
@theprofessor,
like i said before im a wiz kid when it comes to marketing holla at me if you want to get that site to show up on google. i know a few tricks ; D
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GJayPro
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 08:10 pm
Immortal, thru a lyrical portal, spherical evil, doin' pretty boy stunts on that evil Knievel sequel,
pussy don't push me, I drop rappers dead, call me cappers with lead, deadly, steadily make my aim,
straight as a train, takin' the reign, causin' other fools pain, pausin' they strain,
absorbin' like drains,
crack ya dome in yer home, body guards smack me like foam, if ya in rome, don't be askin' me for help,
cuz if u was ice I would leave ya whole snow pelt to melt, I'm clockin' these Glockin' chicken pockin' brats,
and if u was Pac I would say ya whole rap was so whack it got u shot, and I'm sure it was that! ... Psych u racist ass bitches (Gun Shot)
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Jow Capo
 
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Reply Mon 24 Oct, 2011 11:48 pm
Yea I sin,who the **** not
Drinkin' that gin,smokin' that pot
That mix thick in my vein,call it bloodclot
If life is a blast,I guess I got shot
Shorty got fed up,said enough is enough
Bitches on my head,they stuck like dandruff
They **** up my mind,might call it brainfuck
If flirt is a crime,I guess my hands cuffed
Excuse my charisma,I speak that man stuff
If you aint man enough,well you gotta man up
Tipsy in this bitch,yea I put the gang up
Once we in the club,we make the rain drops

Life is a bitch,life is a party
Live in the fast lane,like im on Ferrari

Get money and respect,I gotta earn them
Dad's a thoroughbred,that's where I learn from
Well I got some bad friends,they all from the block
Now Im the black sheep,stands out from the flock
But this is just me,I cant be what im not
I guess im a leapord,I cant change my spots
Cant judge me by the photos,even if you do close-up
You may not know im bleeding,if I keep my nose up
I've been through rock bottom,and that made me launch up
Now I cant see through the clouds,my future is a toss-up

Life is a bitch,life is a party
Live in the fast lane,like im on Ferrari
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Illustraight
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 08:44 am
I've just been voting battle after battle on letsbeef.com, giving rappers a minimum mark of 5. If the truth be told, however hard some of them brought it, most of the verses just don't appeal, and appear more generic than others. The only reason I'm voting battles is to get more credit to post some of my own stuff on there. Razz
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 10:41 am
@Illustraight,
U see are little feud wit the head text moderator lol

Me Sam and professor are makin a website aparently sams got it set up we still gotta add stuff and professor is aparently a marketing wiz and is gonna get the marketing out there
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 11:34 am
@samyboy27,
Aight here's my idea

We have 2 types of battles
skill battles-who spit the better verse doesn't matter who had more punches or who dissed the other person better it's about who had better structure who showed they were a better lyracist

Regular battles- who dissed better had better punches (like a classic battle)

There are also freestyles (like cyphers)

Voting system is 1 to 5 stars (you can vote anonymously or leave tips in a comment box)
1 vote gets you 1 drop (you start out with 5 drops)

If anyone knows how to we can get a payment plan if you want access to tournoments and we all split the money (samboy gets a lil more though since it's his idea) only these people would get to do audio battles we can call it a "true lyracist package" or somethin 5.99 for 1 month, 24.99 for 6 months and 39.99 for 1 year (it's a little less than let's beef so we would get better buisness)

that's all I got anyone else got some ideas!
theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 12:30 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
I think a 10 point system or a hunfdred point rating system would be more effective..... i think the 100 would give more voting flexibility ...
make every percent count .... naw mean Wink
and we want to be cheaper than other websites...
i say we give first 3-6 months exclusive access then they drop to basic , but if they get points they can stay on exclusive free ...
but we should make it like this 1-5$ 1 month access , 3 month access 5$ ,6 month access 10$ ,year 15-20$ make it pay pal accessible ....




as for battles if we have a audio section i can probally get my sisters boyfriend to help us he's a computer technician

we should have all the basics ,

Wordplay
Punchlines
Multi's
Metaphors
Originality


but when the person picks one of thee above items to be rated on or multiple

we have a description , of what they actually are give an example , then allow them to rate the battle with that acknowledged ...


not hard to put a whole bunch of free instrumentals on a site
I can get a few producers to make some for us ....

have votes an compliments shown in 2 seperate boxes

I have alot of ideas for this website ....

we can make it a lil like soundcloud .... so everyone can have there own page upload there own music for free an display there music .....

so we can get more people on the site everytime someone shows them there stuff....


aswell if we can have live audio battles like freestyle madness an Option to save them ... this would be the best hip hop site out there .,...

2 rooms

BATTLE
or
CYPHER

Hold Random Daily an Weekly Tournaments in those rooms .....

Have a once a month an once a year Championships

Writtens go by month ....

we can give reasoning logic a spot on the forums ... with his vid's an ish ....



theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 12:55 pm
I can get some t shirts an hoodies made up for the site ... an for give away's I say we give like Mic's an Recording Equipment .... I can buy a Good Amount of stuff for 800$ and that'll be enough to supply comps for the 1st year

weekly prizes -points an charachter bonus's
monthly prizes -t-shirts , hoodies , stickers , Mic's n cables ... etc ...
year prizes - Grand Championship title , exclusive access for 6 bmonths to a year and a recording package for the audio winner
iunno what i would want to give to the written winner

we should actually also have Producer battles have people throw up there beats on the site for ratings and have chance of winning Midi equipment and highlights on the website .....
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 01:06 pm
@theprofessor,
I say like 2 months free cuz by the time 6 months goes by they might be bored of it and wouldn't bother to Pay to stay on exclusive

if you get say 10 or 15 wins u get another month of free exclusive

voting gets you credits credits get you drops otherwise nobody will take time to vote

I think reasoning could have some spot say like a "knowledgeable feedback" you know feedback from an unbiased point of view and he can post videos about what's goin on in rap like the ones he's been postin here give people somethin other than that "gangsta" mainstream crap If he feels like it

I still think skill and classic battles should be available cuz some people who are amazing lyracists can't battle rap

Should we create a ranking system? One for audio skill, one for audio classic, text skill, and text classic then the top 50 each month get entered into a tournement or 25 or somethin and the winners of these tornoments get a spot in the yearly tournement winner of the yearly tournoment gets a year free exclusive while he rocks the title
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Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 01:10 pm
@theprofessor,
Written winner could get a decent mic so they could upgrade to audio battles?
Whitmofomonkysmugla2
 
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Reply Tue 25 Oct, 2011 01:50 pm
@Whitmofomonkysmugla2,
But some may not wanna do that so nvm
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