Neverending Rap Battle

Wiki him him and his partner basiclly brought up eminem

Yeah I just did mad research on him. I'm kinda' excited to be on here now, I don't wanna' go to work. Lol. Crazy stuff bro.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bass_Brothers

yh i got that, i hope this aint a scam or something i need this.

Start writing oh here more give him somethin to work with

hey who on here has facebook? add me
http://www.facebook.com/#!/profile.php?id=1045645513

Yh i know man definantly, like wtf i dont know what to believe because ive been doing this so long i have had soooooooo many emails/messages from people claiming to be somebody or in high authority and they are always lying. ima get to writing.

It's better to take the chance than miss what could have been

Stay positive in your writing. Stay the same way you were before! All you guys are good. Just don't try to hard. Write on my "The Originals".

Yo everybody pick a subject and we can write to it i think this is the way forward with the forum rather than rapping randomn **** pick a topic and we all drop verses on it.??

An old style Em freestyle, As the World Turns type ****.

Can't wait, fella's. You guys seem pretty dedicated so far to the fact that I'm gonna' be readin' what you write, just stay the same as you were before though. Like "Bambino" said.

but only eminem does that **** so its kinda cliche lol anybody ever rapping about being chased and eaten by a fat women will be brandished an eminem imposer lol funny **** though, serious topics is what im looking to do..

you got me hyped man, if this really is one of the Bass brothers ill tell you now this is where the best talent resides over the internet so keep locked im going off on some next level **** now.....

Try writing an alliteration verse try to get as many words as possible to start with the same letter it's a really hard challenge but is awesome if u can do it with style

Love the enthusiasm! Yes, this is me. It ain't that hard to believe, since I ain't the BIGGEST producers out there. Yes I did produce "Infinite". I'm just saying right now, all I wanna' see is talented writers, I ain't look any further, YET.

Ok i gotchu man stay tuned....

I'm gonna' write on my pad tonight and come up with a dope song. As for Charlie, let's do a verse on the rap game. From Tupac and Big L to the game now. How muched it is diverse and how much it has changed, that's what I'm doin', dog. I'm writin' right now.

I'm gonna' throw a verse on here now.

Wait For It To Drop

So much anger is built I'm tryin' to fill
Lyrics in my mind, nothin' come to terms but I'm still doin' fine
A little heart felt but that's all the anger I grind
But it's time to spit a verse bitch look at the time

Messages sendin', web heads I turn and I spin em'
Heard em' before, takin' a hole mouth of venom
Take a bullet to the brain, right to the cranium
You hearin' my words dear, can you hear em?
I'm talkin' striaght and full of hate to yell at em
A bad background, no? Where the **** you think I come from?
A good home to live and eat that's all I need before I get to the spot
The spot to succeed, I spot that I need
No drugs, no alcohol, not even weed
Hell and that's all I guarentee
The words I wright, what you expect I'm only a teen
They aren't gonna' be the prettiest not the most stunning
But what I bring to the table ain't the pepper or salt
Clever words a flow and that's all
I rhyme the words that are predictable but they make sence
I have you on the edge of your seat, full of expense
Mean nothin' the words I spew, if I do I'm sayin' now, no offense
Sittin' on the otherside of the table the attorney defence
Hence the sound of attorney and make a quick guess
Not a guest appearence nothin' was sent my way
And to this day I still stay calm and cool, am I not?
I got nothin'! I'mma stop now for I blow up your spot!
Wait for it to drop!

Song I had on my computer for about a month now. Just a taste of what I write, not too suprising but it's something to start

Good, good. Do you got a beat to this rap? I see you got a studio, do you use that often? This rap seems like a demo rap, such as something that would be on a mixtape. If your studio is something you're in all the time, I encourage you to drop a mixtape or an EP.

I like your rhyming scheme in this specific rap, you put a lot of words together that I don't see much. Weed, guarentee; teen, stunning; defence and guess. Good job on that rap, would like to see at least 2 verses and maybe a hook. Do you have anymore songs on your computer that you can just throw on here to give me more taste in your style?

I'm writing down your guys' style so I can compare and contrast your guys' art.