Neverending Rap Battle

Since so many people seem to like 8 mile on here let's see what we can do with the names Charlie here's my response

I beat you on the spot have you choke up like "papa doc"
You want the win but you can't have it
When im done I'll have you twitching like a "rabbit"
It's a bad habbit the win was close but you couldn't grab it
After this you'll probably shoot yourself like "cheddar bob"
The tension is rising and your like can the pressure stop!
Your whole life is a blooper 
just goes to show you have no "future"
I brilliantly spit and I beat you "lickety split"
Winnin this is more rare than winnin the "lotto"
Rarer than two whites makin a mulatto 
So just be a bitch and leave like "Alex" that's my motto

¿cómo es que no tengo un puto respuesta?
(how come I don't get a response faggot)

Why can't he just say he needs a lot to learn cause he does. He's disrespecting us when we didn't even do **** to him, hmmmmm. Think he's comin' back???

Of course cuz he thinks he's the greatest just like most of us probably did when we first started Even though we were actually ****

OK PEOPLE JUDGE MINE AND WHITMONKYSMUGLAS BATTLE PLEASE JUDGED ON WHAT I SAID PREVIOUSLY...THANKS

Charlie is usually un-beatable but.......
I think he still won with that sick first battle
Whitmofo is still the ****, his first one was sick aswell but it's Charlie, come on man you can't just say that he lost with a couple of battles.
Charlie, wanna' battle now?

I didn't think I was gonna win from the start anyway I just wanted to try to make it as close as I could

This dude wants to battle !?

Alright alright alright now listen
How about we cut the crap
I will blow your fuckin body straight off of the map
It will be so quick like *snap* like that
You may be a killer but I am Mac Miller
Scare your ass like a clown : "It" Like the thriller
I like your number "69"
Hahaha, you is gay as ****, your just a waste of my time
I can destroy any nigga in just 1 rhyme
Cause once I finish that rhyme they will fall down crying
Or maybe even dying, whining, dinner and dining
Living room, I'm lying, I got a the whole house, I'm shining
I'm shining like Football lights
Your a deer in head lights
But I wont stop and let you cross
I will fuckin keep on going and make you toss
All over the street
All those bitches you say you have, they've already met me
Fucked me, sucked me, all of them even tucked me
In bed, while giving me head, your dead
you've already bled before even choosing to battle me
Rattle me, shatter me. Its the coming of baseball, how bout you batter me
"Batter Up!" **** the batter, your time is up
Your probably reading this with your mouth shut
Well this freestyle is over, down to the last sec
Im sure you know the Hour Glass, your life is down to the last spec !

Don't get me wrong, you're a good emsee

Yh tbh it he came better than i thought and i gave me a bit of a run for my money but i think the Rebecca black and Bieber Lines kind of edged it my way, but good battle Whitmofomonkysmugla2, and bambino let me write a few random barz and ill get at you after that.

Yeah it did I was trying to spin it on you in some way but everything I tried didn't make sense

At least it wasn't a blowout charlie imma get back at you one day you'll see haha

I'll start it out

You're still upset cause your puppy died
That was me in the car, I missed you cause I wanna' battle you
That's why you're still alive
You know the sayin' you can run but you can't hide?
You can't do either, this battle is worldwide
**** a bodybag, for this **** buddy
I'll kill you and drag you out in a snuggie
I'll punch holes in you like a loseleaf
Lose all of your teeth
"All I want for Christmas is my two front teeth!"
Well bitch you don't get your teeth back
Smack you and lay you out on your face flat
I'll get your hole crew just a buzzin'
Grab you by the hair and skip you across the Hudson
I think you're hidin' somethin', come on outta' the "closet", bra
Are in or are you out?
There's a whole forum "room" here and you're the only pussy wonderin' about
I'm servin' this **** up like gourmet
This **** is gettin' kinda' hot
Sarah Connor thought you were "Fair Game"!

Kid, your not bad,
but man your getting smashed,
You purposely drop the soap so your arsehole gets thrashed.

Your like the busta,
without the rhymes,
I'll **** all over your lines.

I mean, what happened to,
Word play and imagery, what happened to the ability to spit a free,
to paint a picture visionly lyricly,
Mcees have sold there skills for a fickle dream,
**** the industry **** your favourite act,
no one will play you back,
step in native habitat,
we need style,
you can't even manage that **** the king of battle rap,
we need to bring the pashion back.

Peace out, from some 14 year old.

Haha, good try! But I think I have the privelidge to say you're not bad. You're actually pretty good, that Busta Rhymes line was good.

Bambino
Bam? Margera or Bambi?
Your still upset somebody died in your family (Ryan dunne,Bambis mother)
Since your Plan A flopped, Plan B will be Handy
SO **** RAP AND GO TO A COLLEGE LIKE ANDY (TOY STORY)
Ill give you two fingers, pull one down, push one UP
This guy is full of ****, like 2 girls, and ONE CUP
Numbnuts, lovestruck over young bloods with guns up
Asks to get fucked up because the thrill makes his blood rush
And bitch i aint running dawg, this **** aint no hide and seek
You talk a lot of game but inside your heart and mind is week
Smack a iron pipe violantly all you see is flying teeth
This is where the lions sleep so mind your feet coz i decease tiny feasts
Call my tyson no dont fight fair, mind your right ear i will bite there
So be quite scared
And bodybag? your a cocky lad so watch your back
To be honest man i dont do fists i rather Glocks and Straps
Pop a cap till you walk like you got a dodgy back
And Feed you to my dog..but hes dead?
WELL **** YOU BECAUSE MY DOGGIES BACK!
And bitch you aint kinda hot like diana was
I turn it hot like hell and it looks just like the Riots WAS

And im sad to announce this is Charlies Last Battle
I got bigger dreams to chase "LADE DA FAGG, TOOL"
This site turned me from a Novice to a closet of Knowledge
Ill still post on it with songs, honest i promise
I thank all you guys for improving my skill
Just when i thought i was losing the will
You knew how i feel
And ill end this with battle with the most stupidest thing
RAP WILL NEVER BE **** WITHOUT THE MUSICAL KING!


(rip ryan dunne and bambis mum lol)

Who wants to see my first ever post on here 3 years ago, (obv i bit eminem like everybody did lol) LOOK HOW I IMPROVED
"yo yall
yh i am white
so dnt pass me the mic
sike
yall i dnt wonna turn this into a racial issue
by the end of this **** yall gonna need a tissue
and i diddnt wanna have ta come down here ta motherfucking boast
yh im pale but yall look like ya seen a ghost
ur toast

i can tell by the way that ur posing
ur choking
u been doing to much of that weed ta weed smoking
and when im home wid my blade
you can tell that im paid
i been doing this **** since the mother ******* 4th grade

so its my time yall
yh its my time
to bust a ryme
so ill bust a ryme coz its my time
anyone think that im lying
but dont worry just keep trying

so cum on rookies lets dance
ill leave more holes in yall then sponge bob square pantsss
u can tell by my trance
that im only a teenager
but ill give yall a chance
so ill drop the mic now before the real force unleashes
and ill leave all of yall shattered in pieces
so im gonna turn around wid a great smile
and know none of yall will be replying for a while"


by a 13 year old could u comment on how good it was please

Well that was **** compared to what you are now lol no offence