Neverending Rap Battle

That is a good idea Charlie the peace maker! It would be cool if you could include into your rap some of those powerful and influential people that you say exist in the world!
Samples of any recordings that you all have made would also be cool!

peace by a rap battle?

Intellectual info can be share by many means, "even by rap battles!

ESPECIALLY BY RAP!!!

Osama, this is how I feel!

Don't blame it on me
Blame it on the people
The stuff that's been thrown at us, it's gettin' deeper
I'm up to my knees in the ****
And it ain't easy
Bin is so cheesy
Destroyin' are families and a brutal coarse across the nation
Everything is compared to today's ****
Actin' like we're racist, it not how we
Discuss our thoughts, we can't get caught up in
The nation's ability so we can empower
Drive our figure of speech right into CNN's ass
Who cares who said what, when, where, or how
Let's focus on what the ****'s... goin' on now
I'm startin' to feel a rage, Osama, can you here me?
I'm shoutin' out loud
You're playin' with our minds, we can't think, this is Inception
Sent our citizens into depression, infected by
9/11
Now we're reflectin' on redemption
Think about our World Trade
You can't downgrade...the invasion
Tell me were you or not Bush, were you afraid?
Were you betrayed by the monster, the coward
He sent us into the depts of hell
We're rotten and shook by this
Dictator we call Bin Laden
He's just plottin' and watchin'
His plan succeed
Brain washin' others to do the dirty deed
He watched the news on his 40 inch screen
Plasma TV
In his murky cave in the hills
The mountains
Sourrounded by thousands of
Soldiers
Wantin' to be the hero
But I can't keep babblin'
Cause what's my opinion gonna' do?
Enough has been said
I wish I woulda' wrote this earlier
But you luckily, you're already dead!

My last verse on my collab with Aggression. Recording it on Tuesday, I've been writin' this since late April. Osama Bin Laden died on my B-day, May 1st. I had to go out with a bang on this scum bag. Get it? Go out with a bang?

Make Something Together

[Hook – singer]
I’ve been thinking about you, baby
‘Cause I’ve been feeling down and so lonely lately
It’s this emotion, that has overwhelmed me
What can we make from me and you? Please tell me
Oh, if you’ll be there for me
I’ll be there for you
If you share with me
Then I will share with you
If you bear with me
Then I will bear with you
Then maybe we can make something together
Oh, then this something will always be forever
Make something together

[Verse 1]
Likewise, girl – I’m intrigued by your appeal
Let me put my hand on your heart and see what I can feel
I can hear a (*heartbeat*) and a (*timpani drum*)
And I can hear you whispering to me, “Do you want some?”
Some of what? Some of this? Can I touch your mushy lips?
How can I refuse a sweet offer from such a lovely chick?
I’m like a teddy bear – cuddle it
Is it soft? Are you loving it?
It’s because of the fur on my skin that makes me comforting
I can be that toy that you keep with you all night
Throughout the midnight hour, right until the morning light
And when you get up when you get up, I’ll be there to say hello to you
I can be your diary book, baby, you got loads to do
Write a note about today
The day when you go out and play
Gaze around the shopping mall, the day you go on holiday
Keep me right here in your heart, never oust the flame
I’ll be waiting for the day that you shout out my name

[Hook]

[Verse 2]
They say beauty’s in the eye of the beholder
You can be my remedy when I’m drunk, every time you keep me sober
You offer me a shoulder to cry on
So truly you’re the one in the whole world I would die for
When you are away from me, I’d emotionally pine for
You’re someone who I’d ultimately put down my life for
You’re the medicine in my cabinet, you can get rid of this eyesore
And if I’ve made both of your eyes sore, then it’s my fault
It’s you I adore
No other girl even comes close to my specification, because it’s you that I want more
A godsend, an angel that’s sent down from the sky by God
Through the atmosphere
Man, you’re so fly like when kites soar
And that is just how highly that I think of you
Your beauty is shocking, like electric bolts coming from Pikachu
(*electric sound*)
Yeah, that’s right, I said it
You and I were destined to be together, and that is how I meant it

[Hook]

[Verse 3]
Lego blocks, Duplo, stickle bricks and assortments
They’re weak types of objects that are quick to demolish
You can knock them down, rack them up, stack them up
Build it up, knock it down
It’s delicate, even glue won’t back it up
But we stand a strong chance of surviving
‘Cause you and I are as solid as gold, platinum and diamonds
You’re the lioness to my pride and a blessing in disguise
Somebody plundered the shining stars and put them into your eyes
I can’t remember when the last time I had a relationship with a baby chick
We oughta get the love doctor to make a hitch
Because I reckon you and I could make a sweet couple
Express ourselves very sexually and watch the heat double
To a thousand degrees, as hot as a volcano blows
Strong as twenty tornados, that is just the way it goes
A house divided against itself can’t stand
We are forever, you and I can make something together

[Hook]

Hatred

[Intro]
It's fucked up to know it carried this far
Both of us know it ain't gonna' end
This is for you, ************

[Verse 1]
I don't think I've ever been so mad at someone that I just want them to die
I know he's a person of guilt and rage but I really don't think that he's a guy
He's a little faggot that just keeps comin' around
And pissin' off you and I
And believe me when I say I ain't kiddin'
There's no way
But this **** is gonna' blow up just like the 4th of July
I can't take the anger no longer
Imma let it out and make us all of us a bit stronger
Imma sit down and think and ponder of all the **** that's been goin' on
Cause this ************ thinks he knows me
But it shows that he's a nobody
After every stage he steps on
You're just a little parasite that I always seem stumble upon
And all I seem to be doing is movin' straight on just like a Pawn
But you're movin' backwards cause you don't even know the game cause
You're not logical or even smart
No respect for anyone, no pride for nothin' cause that's just the way you are!

[Hook]
I have so much mothafuckin'
[Anger...]
Imma look you straight in the eyes and tell you I have so much mothafuckin'
[Hatred...]
I ain't gonna' sit back and watch it unfold with so much
[Hatred...]
Just tell me if you want to go, I'll let out all my
[Hatred...]
Cause men fight like men and I'll show you my
[Anger...]
And I know I'm gettin' on your
[Mind...]

[Verse 2]
Remember the time you stalked me
Shoved me and locked me
In the fuckin' trunk?
You must've felt really tough
But then again you were so fuckin' drunk
I don't know if you were drunk
Or if you were high on some pills but
You were pretty fuckin' drugged
A couple words will come out of my mouth that
I probably won't ever regret to say
You probably think you're on my mind but
I care about you less more and more every fuckin' day
I can't stand you at all and never will cause
There really ain't no fuckin' way
As you can tell in my lyrics and in my voice
The topic of this song is about you and that is strictly my choice
I don't got a sidekick or puny ************
Like you got in your little studio
Look where I'm at, I'm in California, so let it go
I don't wanta' hurt your feelins' anymore
So this is my song it's dedicated to you bro

[Hook]

Beat to "Bully" by Eminem

**** u mommz and **** you dumb asss little watter gun an face my semi auto matic bich

[Riots, Riots

[*News report*]
“In the news today, rioting has spread across London on a third night of violence, with unrest flaring in other English cities. An extra 1,700 police officers were deployed in London, where shops were looted and buildings were set alight. Birmingham, Liverpool, Nottingham and Bristol also saw violence. The prime minister has returned early from his holiday to discuss the unrest, which first flared on Saturday after a peaceful protest in Tottenham over the fatal shooting of a man by police.”

[Verse 1]
Riots, riots, everywhere there’s riots
Fights in the neighbourhood, why can’t they be quiet?
Riots ignited, but I didn’t start them
Tell me why it’s happening and what the hell caused it?
Riots, violence, get the cop forces
Investigate the crimes, and where the main source is
There’s lots of unrest and people are frightened
Too much excitement, the streets are full of surprises
Riots, riots, this is Britain’s nightmare
We shouldn’t go to London, ‘cause there are many fights there
Teenagers looting, arson in the bright square
It’s quite scary, raging tempers flying as my eyes stare
Half the population gets trampled like elephants
Casualties spread, but the forces move relentless
An entire arsenal of fire marshalls arrive in the borough
To subside the fire until it dies down and the riot’s all through

[*news report*]
“Three people are being questioned on suspicion of attempted murder after a police officer was injured by a car in Wembley, north-west London, while trying to stop suspected looters. The Deputy Assistant Commissioner said it was a "shocking and appalling morning for London to wake up to".

[Verse 2]
There’s no sunshine where we live – no, not on these premises
Just a bit of peace on this Earth that our friends just miss - just tell us this
Why does the law take so damn long to clean up this mess?
And what the ****’s with all these new contingency plans?
Is this another way of burying their heads in the sand?
Gotta think of virtually everything ourselves, and it’s bland
And when we lash out, you lock us and let us kip in the van
You had no authority to kill that innocent man
Now he’s laying dead in the coffin, as young as twenty-six
And we’re all wondering just how it came to this
It’s evasiveness, partly because you won’t come up with a standard
I’m not taking sides here, I just want a good answer
Maybe there’s a reason for these childish riots
Remember that fight outside the college in which you didn’t pacify it?
First the fees go up, now a good man’s slaughtered
Not just by anyone, but the ******* Metropolitan forces!
It’s bad enough that you never brought that {*Somalian*} to jail
Over the altercation that I had a few months back in April
You couldn’t extract the blood from my jacket?!
**** that! There was the CCTV footage, which you could’ve just hacked!
I’m talking to BOTH sides of the community at once
Help each other out, PLEASE! Let’s show this union some love
‘Cause we want to be respected, and we want to be pardoned
Let’s do our respective jobs and work hard for a safer London!

[*news report*]
“Some 16,000 officers will police London's streets in a bid to prevent a fourth night of rioting, with the Met Police drafting support from 30 forces. Businesses in some areas closed early in a bid to avoid the kind of violence that spread through London on Monday. David Cameron has recalled Parliament for Thursday in response to the "sickening scenes", which prompted unrest in other cities.”

[Verse 3]
I’ve written too many songs about violence and warfare on the streets
Because I don’t think ANYONE is paying attention to me
I’m not the Mayor of London, I’m just expressing my opinions
Because all of this has to stop now, consider this diminished
Thrown off the record, forgot about, a thing of the past
Do you think it would help if I addressed them in person, came up and asked?
Probably wouldn’t; after all, you’re just doing your job
Now that you’re back, negotiate and bring down this mob
Mr. Prime Minister!
All of this happened while you were away
Look at our towns, look at the streets today, it’s a shame
Now every block, every street’s coming together to fix this up
All the mess that the looters made, but THEY don’t give a ****
Hell, why SHOULD they?
They’re the ones that caused it
They’re the ones that forced us to lock ourselves indoors
They quarrelled without a pause
Stomping their feet on the floor, causing the troops to just fall
We can’t make heads or tails of it, we can’t figure it out at ALL!
Stop these riots, riots, put down these ******* riots
Riots in the city, why can’t they all just be quiet?
Riots ignited, but we didn’t start them
Tell us why this is happening, what’s the problem? Huh?!

Back out of rehab, I just stopped using,
Now I beat the beat up, music is all I'm abusiin'.
Yall motherfuckas smoke kush if ya want,
but I'm allergic to losin.
I can't go one brief second without saying I missed every ************ who gave me props.
I'm glad to come back and see yall motherfuckers still climbing to the top.
And yeah, I got love for my haters too.
Mofo my wanna battle you pulled me through.
But now I'm back, my head is clear.
D9 Tap bitch, the new name to fear.

Rehab? Are you serious or what?
Luckily you went to Rehab because Amy didn't

But unlucky now that she's dead; the addiction got the best of her.

U serious bout the rehab? Is that why u been gone so long?

Yep. Personally I really liked the way she preformed and wrote. Intelligant, just like many other musicians but when drugs get involved you're goin' down the wrong road. Unless you're like some that just smoke weed and stuff just when they write.

i wrote a track with a chorus and a verse, still got more to write...but i really wanna know whats yall opinions? thanks

'Dreamin'

intro
beat drops
chorus-
im dreamin, im dreamin, i said i walk the pathhh
im dreamin, im dreamin, my wishes so appealin
im dreamin, im dreamin, im talkin wads of cashh
im dreamin, im dreamin, from the floor to the ceilin (1X)
i SAID im dreamin, im dreamin, im dreamin NOW (3X)
I said, i said, i said I'm NOW
yeaaaaaa -
Big houses, big cars and such big THINGS//my crib will soon be cover with 6 big SCREENS// see me flow around through the money bank RIVER// im talkin money soo deep at least 7, 8 FIGURES//
There aint no stoppin in me man, im shootin high to the top// come grab me a stack a weed man, im finna fly to the TOP// pussy poppin one another like a string of cherries// I keep the club poppin like these bitches name was MARY//
My flow sizzle when i spit so watch ya face get burnt// no need to compete with me, so put ya bacon up// them burnt marks on ya face man, go put ya makeup ON// ive only just been startin now so you can hate me ON!


too be continue...

I think you kinda lost it after the figures line I like the burnt line it was good but overall it's too simple multisylable words is the key to rap cuz any 3rd grader can figure out most of those rhymes just make it more complicated and you'll be good

yea ur right, thanks man, and what do you mean by "lost" it? like after the figure line, did it sounded like it was started to carried away?

Idk I just feel like you could have done better

ight ima keep writing to get better,
im willin to battle, not to see whos better but to get better nah mean?
so im down, just remeber in the end. its only a battle lol

Ah-Ha!!! Lets get it

I am the originee
you a trainee
The bell has rung
Ring ring
Leave ya lost in confusion like covered in bee stings
I am the king of this ring,
you is ace, 1, 2s all the way too queens
You still lower than me, cant touch me
you cant cut me, you cant slice me
leave ya rollin on this table like 6 sided dice
fucked ya girl and have her lookin kinda nice
but i figuered out that she had lice
So i smashed and trashed and kicked her out on the street and made her look like street mice
I've done beat ya thrice
Compare me to you? its nuttin but size
You is fat as **** and im buff and ill always rise
You will always deflate
You cant inflate
you have a hole in your balloon but at any rate..
**** it
there aint no rate, leave ya on the end of my line like fishing bait
fuckin worm, im in it like a germ
cant get me out, you should of knew this, DER~
im soft like animal fur
lyrically, shout out the words and make ya shiver sayin "Bur"
You worse than the words that Young Chris be sayin
Cant tell what he sayin
Once you battle me you know that I aint playin

**** it..hahaha