Neverending Rap Battle

wanna battle? I'll start a discussion, go to my profile and enter lyrics

yh i think its pretty obvious you one them all, a few good punchlines and good flow aswell, but others guys are improving on here could get competitive in the next few weeks, ima battle you for the first time in years lool............

secret for ya charlie im holding back ....

I never battled you though? If u wanna battle start it up but I think we all know what the outcome is gonna be

I know this is a battle site but my bro is trying to make his own music and Is about to drop a third mixtape he's not the greatest but I think with some tips from rappers like you he could get better
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=leEEJeAIEoo&feature=youtube_gdata_player
I think he needs to get more complex rhymes and some metaphors and similes in there anything u guys can add thank u it's greatly appreciated

That'll be a good battle. You got some good **** dude.

Thanks bro u too just one tip if u got writers block don't copy just try to fight through it cuz as u can see from some of the copiers on here like qwerty it gets u a reputation u don't want but either way big ups man

Thanks man. Yeah its hard not to copy the best but I need to stop. Good luck to you in the future, you got some good stuff.

I've seen the **** u acctually write and if u can keep that up there's no need for copying even I've done it before not on here but I've stolen lines to get me started before yo could u check out my friends video up there I'm tryin to help him as best I can but I need other opinions if u get time

I posted a response to you ... u just didnt respond ...


and if we know what the results are going to be ! then doesnt that prove my point ?????


I think I said this already , Everytime I start battling you guys wont battle me ......



so next time u talk smack stfu .... its getting really annoying .....

Go to my profile and battle me then, you didnt respond

Alright I'll look at it

Sorry man I never seen u rap so I thought u was just bein a bitch but I saw ur verses and I can tell u deserve to say u the reinin champ sorry if we got off on the wrong foot u wanna settle this with a battle I'll go my hardest and we'll see what happens

And sorry bout not respondin u never directed it at me so I thought u were just spittin for the hell of it

Im at that stage as a rapper, Ripping out your page in this chapter
Its blatent you act the greatest because your ashamed of the fact ya
Taking cock everyday from more angles displayed on protractors
Im raging with anger
Stop lying about your life, you should be on stage as an actor
Get on the plain to the UK ill be here waiting to slap ya
Cheerio. cheerio with my rotten old teeth
Your squash our whole beef coz you gotta nose bleed
Watch me blow trees as i rock this whole beat
You aint a proffesor youll never holded a flow degree
But im cold you see, make your body freeze below degrees
Flow like open sea's.
Your OUT OF ORDER like a COKE MACHINE,
Your OUT OF ORDER, thats why you live at home with OCD
Your SICK TO YOUR STOMACH because on the mic your choking G
Your SICK TO YOUR STOMACHthats why your head looks like a frozen pea
I dont know you, and you dont know me
But i know you know your a lonely phony with homies so blow me slowly
As truth said
Ive already won this battle, your in denial
Like Em when he found that proofs dead


LOOOL PEACE, i liked my "OUT OF ORDER" BAR LOL
if you dont know what OCD IS you can ask but im sure you do haha

Everybody once PROFFESOR replies CAN YOU RATE OUT BATTLE PLEASE? THANKS.

I'll rate it but u guys are both mad good u should prob go back and forth a couple times

you bitches don't know how to rap,
the **** you spit is shittier than crap.
now all you might say I can't rap good
but I can still do do better than you ever could.
i make stacks of bricks while ur sucking on racks of dicks.
I know this rap is short but it will slap you in the fuckin face
my raps will kill you makin it a murder case.
yo ass runnin away hoping I won't chase
cause I will make u feel like u were hitten with a fuckin mace.
I'll leave you missing without a trace.
u think I rap good only because of my race
but imma have u tumbling like u hav a messed up shoe lace.
so all you bitches, hop of my dick!
I'm sorry than all these other rappers can't do the trick
ur a fuckin doormat, I walk all over you.
I'm like the fuckin Hitler and you r a Jew.
so while all you niggas using raps that ar already used.
all my raps always stay fresh and new

im spittin fire harder then anybody
im freestylin you can call me Kidd Cudi
and im not slim shady im not even white
my hops so black im not even in sight
i spit in the mic yeah other rapper aight
im killin the rythem like trees to a kite
like a shark in the water grab me a bite
when it comes to my swagg my kicks be tight
dont come and pick a fight with the mighty
you justa wussy wearin whities and tighties
ill have lyrical explosions with my mind
stay away can you understand my lines
when its dinner your just a dish and i dine
and im a sour patch kid cause havick anytime
and i never spend time with best of the game
they may need mental help cause they feelin a shame
I spit some lines that fucked there day
found this wana be mc and his name was ray
found out that he sucked had to keep makin bucks
kept blabberin crap like bills on a duck
and if i give you a knock yer door falls down
i knocked enough bars to go and run this town
my rhymes are like really wet weather
spit on a cloud it couldn't get any wetter
spittin faster then an ak-47
yall niggas are junk workin at 7/11
and im so 2011
when you me hear me rap you may be in heaven
unless yer against me like lb james
you'll never get rings just glory and fame
and thats why your so lame
that should be your last name
your an arrogant lion that could never be tamed
if i played you for money it would be really funny
cause dooms day would come it would never be sunny
you would loose your eggs become the easter bunny
now im done with wastin my time
i'm just givin to many lyrical lines
want ya'll "best" rapper to know
I'm a 50 cent pice ya'll just nickles and dimes

ya i got borderline disorders the sorta vocal swords take out your aorta
out a order like a coke machine , ur out on the corner like a coka feen
i actually smoke the green , ur pissd off ya souls latrine , ur a joke ta me
it ain't OCD , it's ODD ,you OD , from to much C.O.D , u know me , still listen to O.P.P
spliffin OZ's , ain't sniffin no G's, young enough Gangsta to listen to O.G's
u can't knuck wit me , you still look up to me
, I aint pussy , why u always trying to **** wit me
u aint got a penny of sense , till i give ya a buck fifty
rhyme wit ease , hip hop an prof , siamese , ya stuck wit me
blades or mic
stage or fight
day or night
slay your life
spray forthright everyday with more then the force aight
sword a cyph
sorta hype ? gun , pun , or a knife !
ya'll talkin dollars an aint lived a quarter life
im about to slice, scythe, grab a mic , an record the swipe....
machine gun tounge aka Motor Mic!




still holding back