reasoning logic
 
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Reply Wed 2 Mar, 2011 06:48 pm
@theprofessor,
Ok I do understand that you are religious and believe not in neuroscience?
theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 12:33 am
@reasoning logic,
im not religous , quite presumptious , quit attempting to put words in my mouth , I didn't stutter , ur just trying to play dumb an in a result showing ur ignorance !


Prashant Shady II
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 10:11 am
@charliesforce,
YO THIS IS A FIVE ROUND BATTLE.

FIRST ROUND - You Won.

SECOND ROUND - I'm sure I whipped ya ass.

THIRD ROUND - TheProfessor has to decide.

FOURTH ROUND - HERE IT GOES...WAITING FOR YOUR REPLY...


Ya Punchline Rap ??
My lunchtime nap ...

You a rider ? Rev up to my step/
Lone survivor ? Step up to my rep/
Ya an evil spider...tangled in MY web/
Mangled by my ebb/
of flows so expensive, ya die in DEBT /
Oh so intensive, kill ya 'fore "timely death"/

When I sting, BLINDFUCKS BLINK/
I MINDFUCKED SLIM ! /
Don't think hard 'fore I wet paper with ink/
Caped Crusader thing/
Finishin LIGHTN with ING/
Dose of my flows, BURNING up the ICE RINK/
Fuckin SKUNK, t'was I who made ya STINK/
CHAMELEON, kneel 'fore ya minion/
With shame I'll make ya PINK/

Pin ya down for a 10-sec countdown/
Knock ya DEAF till ya HEAR THE SOUND/
Resonating with a DEAFENING pound of punch/
Sendin ya knockin off to Hell's Gate/
Break ya HUNCH/ make ya stand up STRAIGHT/
Lock ya lunch/ Ya gettin bounced bad mate/
Munch his cock/ The fat bouncer's ya date/

A backstabber/ with a casket and lyrical dagger/
Shatter ya BACK TO BACK disses/ Baskin' in swagger/
MY RHYMES SO CHILL/ I'M JACK WANNABE RIPPER/
YA RHYMES SO "LIL"/ THEY WON'T FILL MY BODY ZIPPER/

This battle ain't a FRIEND vs FOE
This battle like a FIEND vs A HOE
**** ya DEEPER THAN THE PACIFIC/ then bomb ya weary/
ass so quick, after THIS DISS FLICK, Paranormal Activity AIN'T SO SCARY/ ( Hahahahaha)
Finishin this faggot quick/
Who this mouse I'm battling ? I'm TOM finishing ya JERRY !!/
Charlie never saw a DICK until he sucked TOM & HARRY...


TheProfessor, Illustraight , Tic Tac Nic...PLEASE RATE THIS AND THE PREVIOUS BATTLE BETWEEN ME AND CHARLIESFORCE.

AFTER HIS REPLY, THE FINAL ROUND STARTS...!!!
Prashant Shady II
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 10:17 am
@Prashant Shady II,
This was the best Punchline Diss I have ever written. Alright it may not be as cool as Professor's or **** but still...Took 30 minutes to write it.

In never write Punchline disses...You gotta think a lot...So I just freestyle normal disses in 10 minutes. This my first take at a Punchline Diss. So please review it...

PEACE .
charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 01:32 pm
@Prashant Shady II,
Well this si what im talking about this is 10 times better than everything else you wrote, honestly i think i won the first two rounds because you MORE OR LESS HAD NO PUNCHLINES OR METHAPHORS OR MULTISYLLABLES,
So this will be a tough one for me to win, you finally stepped your game up!"
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charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 02:40 pm
@Prashant Shady II,
And i will reply tomoro as i need allot of time to reply to that, so i might aswell take tonight to create some lyrcis for my mixtape released next year
Tic Tac Nic
 
  1  
Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 04:26 pm
@charliesforce,
For the truth to be told I'm still wonderin' how ya'll do that bolded letter and big letter ****...
Illustraight
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 04:30 pm
@Prashant Shady II,
Okay, on a scale of 1-10:

Punchlines: 7/10
Metaphors: 6/10
Multisyllables: 4/10
Flow: 5/10
Structure: 5/10
Hook: Hmmm, then again, it IS just a freestyle verse. LOL

Aggressive but quite commendable.
I'm sure, however, that theprofessor or Tic Tac Nic can rate it better than I can.
dj killin it
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 05:15 pm
@theprofessor,
theprofessor

im just trying to figger out
if ur the one to attack
or the 1 that just plays an ack
madder of a faked
i dont give a ****
ill just **** ur girl and see whats up
bust a nut in a slat
kick her out the house and call her a mut
let her kiss u when she hops in the truck
hows that **** taste
to kno ur girl thinks ur a ******* decrease
to hide behind a rhyme
no 1 lied
u r jekyll and hyde

hahaahah come at me B
dont Fuckes with the kid
charliesforce
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 05:26 pm
@ Tic Tac Nic,
lol i just press caps lol
0 Replies
 
dj killin it
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 06:18 pm
@reasoning logic,
**** was that spos to be a spit
men u just a dumass bitch
try and rip
and not wright it like its a scrip
try and come at me
u cant see me tho F.O.G
ur just a dum S.O.B
u r new to the R.A.P
this ant no call of duty
im the first to strike
u can handle my might
thats wright

haahh dont fuckes with the kid bicth
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 06:38 pm
@dj killin it ,
Dj aint killin it , this mic's jsst like life you have to be real in it !
im ill n spit ,ryhme to make a meal , rhyme to make a mill ,
then when its time take the bill's , n make a billion.
u pen n spit rhymes fake, don't really have what it takes
it takes some brilliants .
ressilliants .
heart an soul , drip a pen in the blackhole ,
when doin a verse
the universe
starts ta unfold ,
oragami army's of emcee's , there ain't enough room on the earth
for 2 crew's
so it's either us or **** YOU
you ain't got enough coin to buck , a joint ta puff , or even a point ta ya stuff
so how can u act like you at the pinnacle ,
when ya half the criminal , never even took a bath in minimal,
ya not original can't even make us laugh its pitiful ,
subliminal submerged subterrain subject to ya brain left in critical
so what were u saying?
slurred or spraying words ,
ud get served everyday in the burbs
,ur as "Disturbed" as ur fav "rock band" ,
homie u think ur as old school as my walkman
I leave you crying tears for years like a Pac fan,
ur fat as Roxanne,im PHat as the Ph balance in lsd Tox-an's
got a Phd in R.A.P., I ain't trying to beef with ox hands
I use speach, **** this bitch queeffd !
I told you this pussy stinks..... PEACE !!!!








dj killin it
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 08:58 pm
@theprofessor,
in what part of my rhymes
or my line
did i say i was a criminal
is it bc i sound black
is that ur facked
to call me a prison rat
it always amasses my to see raises
in all this wight faces
i tout barack obama changed all ur cases

u say u make mills
to pay bills
so u oun ur oun property
in real life not in monopoly
some body stop me
bc hes going to call his crew
when i thot this battle was between me and u
it could be 1 on 5
i wil be the last to survive
1 on 4
just knocked ur heavy hitter to the floor
1 on 3
the odes r getting better 4 me
1 on 2
its time to back down doed
1 on 1
sounds like some fun
u will be the last to fall
CLAP thats all


haahh dont **** with the kid
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Prashant Shady II
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 09:52 pm
@Illustraight,
K not as much as I expected..haha..
I didnt think of addin Multi syllables in it that much...

While you're at it, if ya got the time, please rate the SECOND battle between me and Charliesforce in the previous page...
PEACE.
theprofessor
 
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Reply Thu 3 Mar, 2011 10:02 pm
@Prashant Shady II,
anyone wanna rate this battle between me an dj killin it ????
Prashant Shady II
 
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Reply Fri 4 Mar, 2011 04:06 am
@theprofessor,
HAHA... I guess all of us should start rating each others battles from now on...

Hey Professor please rate the Second and Third round between me and charliesforce. We are currently in the fourth round.

That was foolish asking who won between you and DJ killin it. The answer is obvious...You don't have to RATE it. You just have to READ it...
DJ Killin it's rhymes are 'kindergartenish'...and I think in the first diss he confused "disgrace" with "decrease"...No offense to him though. I'm just voicing MY opinion on the battle.

And the 2nd and 3rd round between me and charliesforce are both on Page 540.
Please rate it if ya got the time
.
Illustraight
 
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Reply Fri 4 Mar, 2011 04:41 am
@Prashant Shady II,
Round 2 = charliesforce
Round 3 = charliesforce

Out of pure honesty, Prashant, charliesforce brought it the hardest.
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Fri 4 Mar, 2011 05:02 am
@Prashant Shady II,
on a scale of 1-10:

pranshant shadys verses charlie forces
Punchlines: 4/10 Punchlines: 7/10
Metaphors: 5/10 Metaphors: 8/10
Multisyllables: 6/10 Multisyllables: 7/10
Flow: 8/10 Flow: 7.5/10
Structure: 5/10 Structure: 8/10
Overall 5.5 out of 10 Overall 7.5 out of 10




shady u need to develop punchlines more thats all nice flow though!

charlieforce u know what areas u need to work on , but good stuff homie u had some nice punchlines an ur structure is great!


charlieforce wins !



u]hey guys copy n paste my format for rateing the battles it'll be easy an we can keep using it [/u[/size]

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HELLFREEZEOVER
 
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Reply Fri 4 Mar, 2011 09:53 am
All yall oh so weak
what pipes busted that caused yall to leak

0 Replies
 
charliesforce
 
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Reply Fri 4 Mar, 2011 12:45 pm
@Prashant Shady II,
Your get Rapped like a Mummy
Take away a "P" Your get Raped like your Mummy lol
Haha
Dont hate because im Funny
Haze got me hungry So ill eat this Waste for Munchies
Call me Baby, i crave for these Dummys (You)

Ima Real Nutter
I Got my eye on you - Big brother (Tv show)
Ill have you Rushed in a Hour- No Chris tucker
Your a lil kid, Sucker
I can tell by the way that your L..L..LA Lips Stutter

Ill slap your Clothes back to front like your Kriss Kross
You got hoes, but your still a ****, like Rick Ross
Im the Big Boss
So its Game Over
You might pull beside me in your Range Rover
Ill let the Hummer blow you over till a Truck Toes Ya
I dont give a ****
Ill takeover your Millhouse,
Put the Maggie in your Marges Face and Punch Homer

Done in 15 MINUTES








 

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