Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Sun 24 Jan, 2010 05:24 pm
@theprofessor,
thats kewl but can you keep up?,

Now this is time for a story about a kid named Cory
He was a little native who was pretty creative
and he wanted to show the whole globe what he was made of
but his life took a turn
he crashed and burned
found himself curse with an addiction
far sronger than anybodys prediction
a rebeliouse teenager with a fucked up ambision
walking a corrupted road where every turnes a rong desision
started writing violent lyrics so sombody would listen
he had that ability to shock evertime he starts spitting
rapping his heart out
fiending for that unstopable reconition
but the pain exploded inside him it felt like a demolition
pain like the selfish neglection he got from his mother
or the rist slitting hatred that he built for his fauther
but all the rediculouse misury only made hime grow stronger
he used to believe in angels that fell from above
now he believes that tourching metal and glass is the only way to feel loved
he tried once or twice to accomplish changing his life but every time that cory tried
he got stabbed in the back like a knife
petheticly feeling safer with his lips on the pipe
untill one day he whent back for a girl who seemed like the love of his life
she incoureged him to quit
and he thought that maby he might
he told her shes all he needed and kissed her holding her tight
and to him them two together was the only thing that seemed right
but the devil came knocking on his door just after that night
the devil said just one more piece
just to stay on your feet
and if you sniff some of this it will give you relief
you know who you are Cory now come on and dance with me
he took the convincing oppertunity and took a dance with the devil
fighting for his life and that high
and burning his lips on the metal
he fell silmutainiously and there was no one to stop him
digging himself deeper and deeper and getting close to the bottom
He finaly got to the point that he was ******* sick of the crack
he lost all of his family and only wanted her back
he missed her smile and her beutiful hazle blue eyes
the type of eyes that stop your heart everytime that she cries
but all Cory ever did was tell her pethetic lies
evertime he cried out to her
it only did him more harm
sinking the blade deep till blood leeks
carving LOVE in his arm
you see the fucked up thing is
that Cory fell in love with the rush
the drunken nights he cant remember
he couldnt get enough of the drugs
a life full of quick days and long nights
looking for crack in the rugs
he whent and bought twenty
then sudenly one hundred
did twenty in one puked on the rug
and still loved it
he smoked until his pupils popped out his eye sokit
trying to find his last piece
smoking the lint from his pocket
one day Cory said **** it
im sick of this life ****
i lost the only girl that i loved
i just want my rists slit
his friends listened and agreed to everything he would say
street kids alone for the night and alive for the day
he looked back on those beautiful summer days
just sitting back drinking liquer soaking up the sun rays
he pictured those hazle blue eyes that once loved him
he looked up with a grin at the sun shining above him
he smiled and laughed
and made the hardest desisision to walk away from his past

When it comes to Cory's story this is the beggining of the end
Cory ran to a better place with a message to send
this is the full out truth
i dont got time to pretend
i ran away from that ****
cuz i got a life to defend
i can relate to Cory
because we both got beliefs and we mean it
we took a long run with crack
but we had to walk away and just had to leave it
so let his lifes story sink into your brain once again,
i dont spit this kinda **** for no ******* money or fame
i wrote this song for me and Cory cuz we're one in the same...
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Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Sun 24 Jan, 2010 05:27 pm
@Lunatic-def6,
check this out,

Now this is a story about a kid named Cory
He was a little native who was pretty creative
and he wanted to show the whole globe what he was made of
but his life took a turn
he crashed and burned
found himself curse with an addiction
far sronger than anybodys prediction
a rebeliouse teenager with a fucked up ambision
walking a corrupted road where every turnes a rong desision
started writing violent lyrics so sombody would listen
he had that ability to shock evertime he starts spitting
rapping his heart out
fiending for that unstopable reconition
but the pain exploded inside him it felt like a demolition
pain like the selfish neglection he got from his mother
or the rist slitting hatred that he built for his fauther
but all the rediculouse misury only made hime grow stronger
he used to believe in angels that fell from above
now he believes that tourching metal and glass is the only way to feel loved
he tried once or twice to accomplish changing his life but every time that cory tried
he got stabbed in the back like a knife
petheticly feeling safer with his lips on the pipe
untill one day he whent back for a girl who seemed like the love of his life
she incoureged him to quit
and he thought that maby he might
he told her shes all he needed and kissed her holding her tight
and to him them two together was the only thing that seemed right
but the devil came knocking on his door just after that night
the devil said just one more piece
just to stay on your feet
and if you sniff some of this it will give you relief
you know who you are Cory now come on and dance with me
he took the convincing oppertunity and took a dance with the devil
fighting for his life and that high
and burning his lips on the metal
he fell silmutainiously and there was no one to stop him
digging himself deeper and deeper and getting close to the bottom
He finaly got to the point that he was ******* sick of the crack
he lost all of his family and only wanted her back
he missed her smile and her beutiful hazle blue eyes
the type of eyes that stop your heart everytime that she cries
but all Cory ever did was tell her pethetic lies
evertime he cried out to her
it only did him more harm
sinking the blade deep till blood leeks
craving LOVE in his arm
you see the fucked up thing is
that Cory fell in love with the rush
the drunking nights he cant remember
he couldnt get enough of the drugs
a life full of quick days and long nights
looking for crack in the rugs
he whent and bought twenty
then sudenly one hundred
did twenty in one puked on the rug
and still loved it
he smoked until his pupils popped out his eye sokit
trying to find his last piece
smoking the lint from his pocket
one day Cory said **** it
im sick of this life ****
i lost the only girl that i loved
i just want my rists slit
his friends listened and agreed to everything he would say
street kids alone for the night and alive for the day
he looked back on those beautiful summer days
just sitting back drinking liquer soaking up the sun rays
he pictured those hazle blue eyes that once loved him
he looked up with a grin at the sun shining above him
he smiled and laughed
and made the hardest desisision to walk away from his past

When it comes to Cory's story this is the beggining of the end
Cory ran to a better place with a message to send
this is the full out truth
i dont got time to pretend
i ran away from that ****
cuz i got a life to defend
i can relate to Cory
because we both got beliefs and we mean it
we took a long run with crack
but we had to walk away and just had to leave it
so let his lifes story sink into your brain once again,
i dont spit this kinda **** for no ******* money or fame
i wrote this song for me and Cory cuz we're one in the same...
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Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Sun 24 Jan, 2010 05:52 pm
@hailthetiger,
ok its time to roast some tiger,

so your the beast, well then be ready to be roast beast, cook you on 650 degrees, after your well done i will serve you to me and YOUR girlfriend then have some fun.., her legs in the air and were sittin on your favorite chair, after a good munch, im not talking about dinner.. now its time to introduce the winner, criminals living their fucked up lives to the motherfucking minimal. Visiting churches and trying to pray for a miracle and wrap silver and gold crosses around their neck attempting to be spiritual. It was never my fault that i was born so twisted. As i grew older i got all of my enemies listed. People started hating on me because I'm lyrically gifted but i get lifted every ******* time that i spit this, so close your eyes and listen to the way that i kick this. My name is Lil' Corruption and i can give a **** about nothing i keep my speakers bumping so i can feel a little something. I cant cope so i smoke some good dope and fill my lungs with a little hope. I never tried to provoke any beef but it provoked me im only a G spitting out my souls harmony. But a part of me is so pissed off rediculously people keep hounding me because of my lifes corrupted history. Yea i used to sell dimes and comit crimes criminalisticly but realisticly I'm just sffering through juvenile deliquentcy. I never picked this for me all of my happiness turned into misery suddenly its been feeding off me turning me into some kind of rebelious G. So i said good by to all the good times and little chuckles and hello to the tech nines and swullen nuckles, four finger rings, switch blades, and belt buckles. Got my enemies left twitching in their own ******* blood puddles. So damaged in the brain, can you feel my pain? take a listen to my rymes and get a taste of my rage. And you can watch me as i vertically slit all of my veins. Because I'm so ******* sick of it pouring every time that it rains.
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DJBattlefield
 
  1  
Reply Sun 24 Jan, 2010 06:07 pm
@theprofessor,
chea porfessor im down. wats that site you were saying you freestyle on live?? i need to check that out.. and as for this Lil-Man-16yrsold.. tight lil man you gots the goods son, finally some awesome talent!!!

post post post peoples..
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whitetrash001
 
  1  
Reply Sun 24 Jan, 2010 08:22 pm
okay okay okay

you say ya 16
well really im 15
you weak im strong cause i take creatine
ya **** is kinda nice
but mine is just mean
you achieved
and i overachieved
put my mind to it
you said i couldnt do it but even ya moms believed
i stole you because im like a thief
im happy and you sitting there in greef
like man what do i say i aint got no more beef
call my little white
but my raps is still tight
like that pussy i was in last night
that pussy i eat
oops then i beat it
**** ya girl so hard i got that **** bleedin
im running this **** call me AP
i run so good 300 yards daily
my facebook is blowing up with friend requet
1 man 2 men ope here come the rest
you dont know who you ******* with
you ******* with the best
dont bother shootin me because i always rock my vest
but nigga you cant rap with a bullet in ya chest.... BLOAW







Kid Beat
 
  1  
Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2010 01:42 pm
@dovlaking,
I'm from England, I'm 11 and a girl!
Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Tue 26 Jan, 2010 06:58 pm
@whitetrash001,
here i go,

shut up and stop what your sayin,
your beat now you better start prayin,
my lyrics wake up spirits, hide your self because now im slaying,
stupid ******* kids thinkin they have flow,
shut the **** up and put your face on the floor,
curbstomp you and your teeth and jaw will be no more,
i never rap like this, but now this is it,
feel my rapping you cant compete with this ****,
i will come at you in a parking lot, cops or not,
snap your spinal cord 36 different spots,
then just 4 fun riddle you with 9 mm shots,
a full clip empty'd into your body,
your safe if you dont think wrong of me,
your white and your saying Nigger,
wuts up with you your nothing but a Wigger,
your jealous because your girlfreind knows my dick is bigger,
DONT **** WITH ME DONT MAKE ME ******* PULL THIS TRIGGER!!,
white trash makes quick cash from selling his ass on the corner,
you wanted to rap but im burrying you 6 feet under,
its not my fault that im sick with this,
scare you so bad you have to take a piss,
IM DONE WITH THIS RAP BULL ****,

jkjk im not done with it lol but reply back. White

Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Tue 26 Jan, 2010 06:59 pm
here i go,

shut up and stop what your sayin,
your beat now you better start prayin,
my lyrics wake up spirits, hide your self because now im slaying,
stupid ******* kids thinkin they have flow,
shut the **** up and put your face on the floor,
curbstomp you and your teeth and jaw will be no more,
i never rap like this, but now this is it,
feel my rapping you cant compete with this ****,
i will come at you in a parking lot, cops or not,
snap your spinal cord 36 different spots,
then just 4 fun riddle you with 9 mm shots,
a full clip empty'd into your body,
your safe if you dont think wrong of me,
your white and your saying Nigger,
wuts up with you your nothing but a Wigger,
your jealous because your girlfreind knows my dick is bigger,
DONT **** WITH ME DONT MAKE ME ******* PULL THIS TRIGGER!!,
white trash makes quick cash from selling his ass on the corner,
you wanted to rap but im burrying you 6 feet under,
its not my fault that im sick with this,
scare you so bad you have to take a piss,
IM DONE WITH THIS RAP BULL ****,

jkjk im not done with it lol but reply back.
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Wed 27 Jan, 2010 05:01 pm
@Kid Beat,
sex got nothing to do with it hun just ammo for your competition Wink
theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Wed 27 Jan, 2010 05:03 pm
@theprofessor,
freestylemadness.com an letsbeef.com if you wanna battle live Wink
theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Wed 27 Jan, 2010 05:18 pm
@theprofessor,
here's 'the rateing system '

all on a scale of 1-10
we pick a panel of three random judges cant be the two ppl contesting though!
the rappers are base on these things !
metaphors: if you need a description look it up in a dictionary
punchlines: comedic attempts , stabs at the other persons character
multi-syllables:linkin similar sounding syllables ;ie ur spit-lacks-skill u cant write scripts-fact-filled!
topic:make it potent an be original thats it ! if u use what the other person says against them all the better !
n flow : in an audio battle this would mean melody , in written it means structure
theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Wed 27 Jan, 2010 08:24 pm
@theprofessor,
turned up the speakers ,burned up the sneakers ,
leaveing gumshoe, on every obstacle i run through
leaveing one two's , on every optical i unglue
from the bottle what you sniffin
**** u Listen
you think if enough you diss him , you'll stop his mission
i'll make it in the industry in the sea to drop the fish in
an serve it up in gods kitchen,
only frauds snitchin , homie put you in flanders field with maude bitchin
simpson ur whole family sippin on oj
walking through my grenadefield you'll be tripping on toe tags
getting blasted in the morning
getting caskets inner forming ,
filled
your either getting casted in my next snuff flick , or dinner for bing
my revolver nicknamed problem solver
the collar around your neck aint cause your a threat
you aint getting paid respect or cheques check ya self ,u cant pay ya debts
and ya hollering make a bet , make it 5 my's well make it 6
six six six
**** **** ****
spliff spliff spliff
lift lift lift
open ya third eyeris
put dope in ya third eye lyseric acid
put hope in the words i spit , get high u get blasted
cut open the worlds eyelids , round 11 the bell rings no telling if the swelling welling will go down smelling salts for that gold crown go through hell to be a king , melody rings in your ears , fight your greatest fears, nobody telling me , protecting yourselfs a felony , up the river my lawyer selling me , a go with the flow misdemeanor , saying go with the flow this the greener pasture , im going with the gold , rhymeing smoking weed getting plastered , im going lift the fold that blinds that rope that binds , that rope that twines the boundries of space n time , giveing homes to vacant minds , live in the microphone you'll never feel larger , live in the cyph the zone , livin the life you know ,livin at the crack a dawns light got a blunt rolled practiceing flow , practiceing the act of listening to your soul , practiceing the act of crissening a bowl , well practiceing dont do the backless thing the christian thing you know! double cross me, bust a double impossible , u thought i could'nt possibly , but look at my record of how many emcees lost to me , back when empty's tossed to me , i had more sense to recycle , ive been impacting for centurys enemy's come upon me my flow hydro tsunami i'll be holding the title, waving at u calmly , launching nukes b4 you could bomb me commi suddam me commonly my impact hits suddenly but lasts for hours like sucking suds on e after the bowl of hash u just devoured,



theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Sat 30 Jan, 2010 07:23 am
@theprofessor,
I know where it comes from , but ? where the **** did it go
the corrupted critic show at this stage is critical
doin a page a day is minimal
supersayin subliminal
it's super saying to superman im the original
king kong ape
a shave an a mother ******* cape
a cave where i drag yea motha ,
to smother deep undercover call it fuckin rape
the door aint locked yea moms a whore she loves the cock its her escape
soon as it hits her clit it splits an gapes
pussy supposed to be like wine getting better with age , she spittin grapes
hitting vap's off my bong nicknamed schlong
bitch only game u gots risk , an you take it everywhere you go
im done with this childs play , only way this go down if merry-go
round
mary's gold
marry gold an cover here in diamonds
brother were rhymeing , breaking your words hymans
takeing you to the world im in
breaking on cardboard ,travel the world signing ur girlfriends titty's
well her n ur girl's friends try to get wit me
now don't try an get whitney wit me cause i got a texas micky
vexxed without sticky ,
got my bobby brown with a laser X if ya mouth about to get lippy
you about to get skippy , then bounce ,
im out to get skippy n bounce
no ounce of evidence left on the scales of justice '
im keeping a balance , oh but whats this ?
couple magnets under the judges gavil attached to his money clip
who the fucks gonna judge this battle ,
who the fucks that wanna slug this battle
slurring spitting sluggish babble
babble on , tossed out a babylon
flowing up the river styx with ya paddle gone
coming to the waterfall as slaughter calls , tormented agony the pain
draggin me again washing away sins
open my eyes after the last hangover say hey today again
today the dragon chaseing me , got my mouth on fire
tommorow i'll be dragging it paitently to hells furnace an set its house on fire
an when its spouse on fire i'll piss in her mouth
an maybe try to put her cliterous out , on the street
on ya feet , bitches
only time u shoulnt be on ya feet is when ya making me riches
highspeed cameras takin these pictures
making these mixtures prof on da mic
get off on the mic
get lots of insight
of how to truck **** somebody or jack a hoffman bike
some bloody corpse well ur hear someone screaming back off mike
lightsbeaming bout to blast of tonight
at every concert in the world
u can hear the fans screaming pass prof the mic







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Lunatic-def6
 
  1  
Reply Sun 31 Jan, 2010 03:16 am
@Lil-Man-16yrsold,
.....

Im mean they say im the illest nigga chyea,
but im ready tah kill ah nigga fast, and put ah nigga past..
any heaven pull you back and catch whiplash,
while i'll be chillen wit mah mag, and putcha body in ah bag,
or you can watch the shotty melt ya torso, now watch it sag,
general style i already got mah badge,
still steady flowin, i gotta put the money in the sack,
hurry fast, find ur dad,u should have the ransom all in cash,
yea,
So Hotter than december, and stay Colder Than July,
U should watch this nigga fly,
Mixin up mah style, like Kfc does tah Birds,
I can teach you Verb, or u can Wait tah lose Ur turn,
Have ya chick workin wit sperm, Newbie u something like an intern,
Funny u should learn, u fuckin wit ah Letter located after the F,
Choppin niggas up, Flow Rippin Thru mah guts, Is that even Enough,
Now thats the recipe, lets see wat the chef is cookin up,
Dj battleKneels tah give blow, And u the one cleanin it up,
These cats need tah stop actin up, Bein Tuff, and im'a react like mah back is bein touched,
The Champion is here, the reast collectin Dust,
U can figure this ah must, cuz winning aint much,
but it's better than losing to ah nigga thats butt...

trash.
DJBattlefield
 
  1  
Reply Sun 31 Jan, 2010 02:47 pm
@theprofessor,
so whos up?
theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Mon 1 Feb, 2010 02:21 am
@DJBattlefield,
lets do it haha

if ima spit , its the kinda **** , gods digest , ambrosia my flesh , im the **** , rhyme a spliff so you can get my drift , watch my car bounceing on hydrolics when i drift ,through ya iris , an ya'll wonder what i is , ya'll under what the sky is , no wonder im the flyest

peace yo Smile
Lil-Man-16yrsold
 
  1  
Reply Mon 1 Feb, 2010 02:44 am
@Lunatic-def6,
ok..,

i throw dat five up as i blood strutt
run up, get fucked up by a knife cut
im studded wit diamond cuts,, be pullin sluts
imma big dog you one of da mutts
come an get mauled up by an unleashed beast
cuz im all bout tha feast tha **** that i realease
can increase that heart beats of tha deceased
i'm cold so this is wat im proposin
when i hop on dis mic it gets frozen
and if you sleepin on da game needa stop dozin
ta hustle you gotta be awake and alert
thats wat it take ta make ya wallet hurt
by makin it expand,, so swollen tha size of tha hulks hand
gotta closet full of duffle bags
hang one over ya shoulda your arm bound ta sag
puts a stag in my swag,
when i go shoppin **** tha price tag
i be hittin da nights laid bak in a jag
walkin out da alcohol depot wita brown paper bag
and i dont meana brag,,but ya biggest luxury is a rag
im sorry to say this but you have no flow, the lyrics you spit sound slow,
like a gucci mane wannabe, show you some good sense and how you
oughtta be, put you into place like a boxer in the ring,
knocked you once in the face and you bow down like im the king,
luna im starting to think your really def, your lyrics remind me of this bitch, her name was steph, and i changed her life around just like the rest,
now yours seems to be coming out negative, have you so scared you **** yourself like your on laxetives, running your mouth like you have diareah,
i line your **** up with defense's in the area, red dot sighting got your ass running like lightening...

**** ok im done for now lol
DJBattlefield
 
  1  
Reply Mon 1 Feb, 2010 06:31 pm
@theprofessor,
sweet, i havnt had time to go on and type one out yet ill try come back on and flip 1 later
MCSLICK
 
  1  
Reply Mon 1 Feb, 2010 08:53 pm
@Lil-Man-16yrsold,
ya mic ya use gets frozen cuz yas a cold one
yuz tryin ta figure out how to play with yaz mom
she looks at messages and says figure it out
you look and shake ya with with doubt
ya freakin out cuz me MJG113 blastin off
flyin way like big moth
ma wallet dont hurt les i spend big cash
look at ya gettin a buzz off half a gram of hash
this guy blazzez 24/7
he prays every night ta get inta heaven
this guys got duffel bags left and right
tryin ta take cova and get outta sight
knows hes suspisious but he dont care
startin ta think this is his dare
grabs a gun from his pocket
trys ta shoot but he aint cock it
bullet aint flyin through this place
man betta leave cuz yaz a discrace
look like he screwed up with his ****
now we know why hes bit by bit
bud otta try one more time
mabey this will bust out ya a rhyme
talkin bout people with **** and diarrhea
tellin people dis is ya area
not no more it aint ya fucked
guess ya shouldnt have panniced and sucked
next time have it cocked
cuz bitch my gun is always locked
aint need fo red dot sight on a 9MM
i take it like they do to smash on em
aint no time for playin around
gotcha so fast put ya head 2 da ground

MJG113 you know who i am! had to make another thing cuz forgot my password AHAH
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Mon 1 Feb, 2010 11:38 pm
@DJBattlefield,
listen up
got a battle in the streets enlist them up'
god a battle,in the pit of don't give a **** streets of hard knock speach
how the prof was taught to battle
brush my shoulders off an lots of scrabble , lots a cattle , lots of livestock
lie lots , zombies keep walking an talking as ya eyes rot
see your life pass before your eyes
as ya clone walk in front of you
your sci fi fantasy comeing true
trek across the stars war's
is it about the tech ,respect ,the cheque , or my effect
causes wide effects of side effect's gonna have a hummer beside the jet
am i a threat , to the ones who set the bar im curling it
by the time we get to the bar your leaveing with ya hurling bitch
i'll break ya pussies walls like im on some berlin ****
whirlwind spliff whirling spits an some merlin ish
some squirrel with ya miss this is nuts
fisty cuff, after the spliff we puff ,
im not a strap on or a hermaphridite i don't uck with these fucks
got heavyweight's on my belts you wanna lift these up
only grimm the reaper an marijuana lift these up
this is a decleration of independence in the remnants of the fallen ashes
after the phoneix crashes
at the zenith , everyone's seen it
the fall of a god , it's all a mirage , going through withdrawl's when my words aint with ya'll if all you do is bitch then you aint **** you living in gods toilet if you think you saint **** ima draw you a picture pen some ink ta paint with
rhetoric metaphoric before historic knowledge recorded, one of the life supported aborted fetus's saved by his ambillical cord kid when oxygen shorted locked in the vitamins absorbed it came out a short kid fighting with a sword dick , heard your girls a sword swallower from all over , she'll cum all over it ,



 

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