Neverending Rap Battle

thanks man that was well put

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ermm
i know i sux....Im new to raping and freestyle...i humbly ask help to u all..can anyone teach me how to rhyme? Please...

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what do you want to know about it
i'll do my best to teach anyone what i know about the art

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this is how you rap
this is how you rap

through speach,
you can teach,
new platuea's you can reach,
if you listen to this ,
its not all about dissen and spitin a diss,
its about useing what you got,
take what your taught,
an leave your page so hot,
its left in flames
forget about makeing a name,
if you do that all your lyrics will be the same,
people get bitter an you become lame,
its not about the fame,
its about the respect,
smash your face of the deck,
till your skin no longer connects,
to the bone,
i do this stoned,
i dont need a crew i do this alone,
on page or with a microphone,
i know people with skill,
that are so chill,
there words are called ill,
i ask them will,
you ever cut a deal
, the reply with be real,
i need to pay for my meals,
you have to be the best,
better then the rest,
have a golden heart in your chest,
mainstream forgot about the sound,
thats why the most profound,
lyrics are bound
, to the underground,
if you wanna learn to rhyme,
either commit a crime,
and spit well your doing time,
or read lots of books,
write hooks,
then disperse,
a multiple verse,
that sounds like a uzi burst ,
your verbal trigger will pull,
with lyrics full,
of multi-syllables,
topics like war,
gore ,
and the poor,
mixed with metaphors,
ok today,
your gonna learn about word play,
and punchlines,
combined,
with the force of a nine,
to your spine,
i think thats it,
use your wit,
when you spit,
make sure your intricet,
oh yea yo,
practice your flow,
be able to diss slow,
and fast,
then you'll know youve kicked someones ass,
when your shatter emcee's like glass,
peace out thats the end of class,

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Re: ermm

80proof wrote:

i know i sux....Im new to raping and freestyle...i humbly ask help to u all..can anyone teach me how to rhyme? Please...

im not saying i am better than you but here is my opinion brother.

we all have a story to tell, tell it.

dont tell a story that some gangsta wants to hear to make him feel tough.
Use your experience to mould a picture that YOU understand, soon others will see unless they are children tryin to act tough.

But then again sometimes we have to battle gangsta to filter out the dickheads that persist in talking **** they will never do.

And let me say, if you keep it real (and i dont mean that in some stupid gangsta term) you will naturally know what to say baceause you can "see through" there childish rants.

Maybe your reading this like that doesn't help me, like with rhyming words, multi's etc but it does not matter one bit if you make more sence than the other emcee..... say what you HONESTLY feel and naturally, over time you will come up with multis, etc.

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^^ Well put..

..And.. Wow, Proff you're diss was worth a response! I'll try and reply today if I can, Have some **** to do. One more final! so i'll try hit you back aight.....

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Be leave what you want mc'ing don't get your fame
Coz you alway have swag mc's calling out your name
So wishful thinking is all you can do
But if you get big then congrates to you
Congrates well done
But the bigger you get then more they hate you like big pun
Big pun or even tupac
Look how big he was and now he's in a body sack
So **** mc'in call my name all you like
But all i know is that i'm the biggest mc when i touch mic
Well big pricks small bar, that not clever
Calling out my name, well i never say never
But now i don't mc, i'm like well blud yeh right
Coz life goes **** and now i'm at the end of my teather
But i'm making you sick like your dad in tight leather
Well congrate to all the people that make it
But **** all the waste brains that fake it
Coz i know real people that hold the title
And i know the new people that are gonna go and break it
Now i've noticed how your all pissed at me
But these last bar are here to stay and are here for history
When i first started, i though i was here to stay
But when one thing goes wrong, the rest goes the same way
Well i was like lil kim and put the range in the rover
Coz when i stepped in the game blud it was over
Well blud this is my last verse and blud it's over
Now i'm looking to get shot coz i ain't got luck like a for leaf clover

over and out hope all you people make it big ****, all the waste brain that say you coudn't make it

Last time i'm gonna say this over and out

Dazza Boyz

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yo doc post your reply but lets squash our beef bro we were a good team before helping all the rookie's and im not denying you taught me some **** but there is some things that came natural and those skills cant be taught and slipperz bro you have a good mind on you if doc and you wanna collaborate let me know for over a year now the three of us have been the ones to prevail time and time again that must mean something

and dazza if you belive this is a waste of your mind i think your wrong it gives structure and form to our thoughts which we cant find another way to say

oh and on a side note i do agree with keeping it real so if you wanna know what i did to go to jail just ask dudes im no fake about that **** no need to be im fuked up in the head and i know that most of us probally have done something that would be considered crazy

oh by the way wanna hear something funny i was pushed out of an suv two days ago going 50 k i landed on my head and walked to the hospital were i got 13 stitches for a deep laceration on my skull im going to write about my experience that night soon i hope you all read it

and yo slippz people should write about there life and im going to write a few for you guys but just to let you know ive had a fuked up life just like most of you but yea thats it i guess peace bro's stick with it

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Word, I'll post my diss today, Replyin' to you'res.... After that, well see what goes down! aight...

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aight you gonna un-block me on msn dude

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lol.. Bro, You were never on Block! lmao, My msn has a Virus. lol.. I signed in, But it keeps loggin' me out.. So I dunno how long I'll stay in, So I've just never got up on it..

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DJ_Battlefield wrote:

DJ_Battlefield wrote:
Dazza_Boyz wrote:

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
You were my words at?
You see Dazza Boyz, were the birds at?
Yo DJ Battlefield you is a bitch...check

Animal crackers is what i do when i eat and mc backwords
ha ha, i got it, that's not fake rappers been spotted
DJ Battlefield saying i'm a eminem inpersonater...what?
I'm like eminem i can spit **** on the spot
So we like to **** any boy we can find
Come on DJ Battlefield your losing it, you had lost your mind
You can't spit real **** coz your minds on a restriction
Like pulp fiction
Yo i'll eat you like a big gulp addiction
Just shut up, while i just shine on this
Bitch, coz i'm be honest
DJ_Battlefield you try to step to this
You get beat like mc hongy and mc kris
1 min while i go take a piss
From laughing too much at your pityful diss
I start a fan craze when i start to blaze
It hits you like a punch leaving you in a daze
You need to stop and realise what you spit
You a joker bringing our mums into it
Abit like R Dub and all her **** chums
Always talking about slags and bums
Gotta admit you got some good skill
But come on i'm a 17 year old making **** ill
So i'm worse than R Dub so you say
Even though i ripped her just the over day
Anyway i'm done with rap
**** it!
Carry on with the whack crap have it bak

Dazza Boyz dissing back to DJ_Battlefield

MY TURN FOOL

Its funny how young bucks bow down by stating there age,
what you want me to say?????
your good for a 17 year old? get back in your cage!
your spits seem like a 10 year old seemie fainted
i wont stop till dazza girls gets exonerated,
your lost fool i got you walkin across the Mediterranean,
your thorwing fits makin noises like a tazmainian,
Dazza chicks spazza licks join the concrete with a faceplant,
nigga i was the one that kicked you ass down the stairs to the basement
what was you thinikin tryin to diss on me, no-way!!!
nigga ima take over as soon as i get the OK!!
doctors writin priscription for prozac dazza you sick,
and what the FU*K has mc hongy and mc kris gotta do wit this
let me eductae you on something you learn,
you mess around with me im like fire you get burnt,
i bring your mum on dis cause i no you can win, im choice
see i dont have a mum, me and your old man share yours!
its ok though dazza you had a winning shreek fot a bit
but now you need to back on trybin to dis me, your ****!
i gotta line for you dazza matters from ya boyfriend eminem munt
im knockin' a K to these punks, fu*kin' cocksuckin' pussy lips hatin' mixed cu*t!

DJ BATTLEFIELD SLAPPIN DAZZA'S MUM

Ooh ****
I've had enuff of this nigga
Listen up
I'm flow till the day i rest
You ain't gonna stop hearing me till u accept i the best
So now is were i put DJ Battlefield to the test
Alright nigga yo
Dazza Boyz and the mic is connected like your wrist and your hands
I kick freestlyes that have you pissing your pants
You not gonna stop till Dazza Boyz get exonerated?
Well Dazza Boyz ain't going know were! gonna leave you angry, frustrated
Carry on battling me i bet you fail
Trying go against me is like sleeping on a bed of nails
My lyrics are hotter then the earths core
I hurt more people then the first world war
You making **** crash
I've got more game then playstation and dreamcast
"What was you thinking trying diss me", dhats what you said
Nigga i'm leave your lyrics lame and going dead
My lyrics are full of hater, like a bull hates red
DJ Battlefield you want curse?
I sling you round with one arm like a ******* purse
**** it, Dazza Boyz getting sick of you
Spitting.. **** **** **** and thats all you ever do!
I'm the realist mc and your gonna see
That you or anyone else can't ******* beat me
My rhymes are hot like a radiator
My flows are more additive then space invader
I'm like darth vader
I use the lyrical rhyme light saber
So i'm waiting on a reply, **** you nigga

a line from my boyfriend eminem... i just don't give a ****

Dazza Boyz

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Bloods-Vs-Crips wrote:

Mr. Insane wrote:
i am here spitin the truth, about me, now locked up in a booth,
bein locked up sucks for the last time, my b!tch was killed speakin for her damn mind, whats with all the hatred goin through my soul, its probally because my daddys a drunk ass homo, my momma wasn't there half the damn time, she spent it gettin knocked up 14 different times, i was born and raised in kansas, flat lands of the indians, shotin arrows at ya like a baked up Jamaican, for my brother and sister, they left me for a mission, they had dreams of gettin out of this town of ambition.

the rest of my family didn't like me much, cause i commited a crime, shotin my dad 5 times, i told the officer that nigga beat me, the marks and bruises the dumb nigga gave me, he didn't believe me, this b!tch needs to get up and concede me, instead he sends me to jail, where i sat for many long days, cell breakin havoc every secound a mac hits, i
learned not to hit the floor every time my teeth click, and many life lessions i learned along the way, dont drop the soap, and you'll have a nice day.

as soon as i got out i sent out a letter, to friends and family to find home and shelter, i did to this day find some were to stay, my girl friend fu*ks and sucks me to this day, im just about done for this lyrical containment,
im done finished spit some sh!t bak at me...

You wrote that?..
thats some ill sh!t man........
I might stick around longer, there really are some people here with talent....damn

Mr. Insane.....I'm pretty sure you can do a reckless style of rapping..
can you show me?

lol yea dog just some ****, but if ya wanna learn some ill **** ask dr_eryk he taught me every thing i know... aight..

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Re: dazza boy

MC BLINK wrote:

yo yo
yo yo
yall here to see the show
this faggot just dont no
wot ive got in sto
so now ama expose it
amo throw u inside ur coffin n close it
wots up wit u fag ?
u snortin from a rag ?
u been here like 30 days
and alredy u been called more gays
than tht stupid f**kin willy maze
look at this its wot we got
we got insane battle b bok crisps
we got spittin rap and kiky (lisps)
yo got jack yo **** is wack
u gonna end up wit a nife in yo back
u got no frends
dont follow trends
dont quite fit in
evry one be hittin
but its no surprise
not to me no nu-uh
cos u momy spouce is her brotha
-------------------------------------------------------
yo yo insane battle b bok crisps spittin rap and kiky
yall got to see wots instore for he so put ur fukin hands up and follow me
spit me back tell me if u in

count me in...even know ill break that nigga baby bok up lmao

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MC. Blink u look like a chink, usin the sink to beat the sheets,
i gotta idea for ya, battle me, u will see, who be sneaky to win, like memphis bleak, for sure u suck, maybe in time, you'll learn how to rhyme, or betta yet illetarize, i can teach ya the basics, listen up so u can date this, humpty dumpty sat on a wall humpty dumpty had a great fall, fuk a humpty, that nigga looks like a monkey, thats what ur rhymes sound like, learn how to write sh!t that has some complecation, dont get mad cause if we battled it would be total domination..

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Dazza_Boyz wrote:

DJ_Battlefield wrote:
DJ_Battlefield wrote:
Dazza_Boyz wrote:

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
You were my words at?
You see Dazza Boyz, were the birds at?
Yo DJ Battlefield you is a bitch...check

Animal crackers is what i do when i eat and mc backwords
ha ha, i got it, that's not fake rappers been spotted
DJ Battlefield saying i'm a eminem inpersonater...what?
I'm like eminem i can spit **** on the spot
So we like to **** any boy we can find
Come on DJ Battlefield your losing it, you had lost your mind
You can't spit real **** coz your minds on a restriction
Like pulp fiction
Yo i'll eat you like a big gulp addiction
Just shut up, while i just shine on this
Bitch, coz i'm be honest
DJ_Battlefield you try to step to this
You get beat like mc hongy and mc kris
1 min while i go take a piss
From laughing too much at your pityful diss
I start a fan craze when i start to blaze
It hits you like a punch leaving you in a daze
You need to stop and realise what you spit
You a joker bringing our mums into it
Abit like R Dub and all her **** chums
Always talking about slags and bums
Gotta admit you got some good skill
But come on i'm a 17 year old making **** ill
So i'm worse than R Dub so you say
Even though i ripped her just the over day
Anyway i'm done with rap
**** it!
Carry on with the whack crap have it bak

Dazza Boyz dissing back to DJ_Battlefield

MY TURN FOOL

Its funny how young bucks bow down by stating there age,
what you want me to say?????
your good for a 17 year old? get back in your cage!
your spits seem like a 10 year old seemie fainted
i wont stop till dazza girls gets exonerated,
your lost fool i got you walkin across the Mediterranean,
your thorwing fits makin noises like a tazmainian,
Dazza chicks spazza licks join the concrete with a faceplant,
nigga i was the one that kicked you ass down the stairs to the basement
what was you thinikin tryin to diss on me, no-way!!!
nigga ima take over as soon as i get the OK!!
doctors writin priscription for prozac dazza you sick,
and what the FU*K has mc hongy and mc kris gotta do wit this
let me eductae you on something you learn,
you mess around with me im like fire you get burnt,
i bring your mum on dis cause i no you can win, im choice
see i dont have a mum, me and your old man share yours!
its ok though dazza you had a winning shreek fot a bit
but now you need to back on trybin to dis me, your ****!
i gotta line for you dazza matters from ya boyfriend eminem munt
im knockin' a K to these punks, fu*kin' cocksuckin' pussy lips hatin' mixed cu*t!

DJ BATTLEFIELD SLAPPIN DAZZA'S MUM

Ooh ****
I've had enuff of this nigga
Listen up
I'm flow till the day i rest
You ain't gonna stop hearing me till u accept i the best
So now is were i put DJ Battlefield to the test
Alright nigga yo
Dazza Boyz and the mic is connected like your wrist and your hands
I kick freestlyes that have you pissing your pants
You not gonna stop till Dazza Boyz get exonerated?
Well Dazza Boyz ain't going know were! gonna leave you angry, frustrated
Carry on battling me i bet you fail
Trying go against me is like sleeping on a bed of nails
My lyrics are hotter then the earths core
I hurt more people then the first world war
You making **** crash
I've got more game then playstation and dreamcast
"What was you thinking trying diss me", dhats what you said
Nigga i'm leave your lyrics lame and going dead
My lyrics are full of hater, like a bull hates red
DJ Battlefield you want curse?
I sling you round with one arm like a **** purse
**** it, Dazza Boyz getting sick of you
Spitting.. **** **** **** and thats all you ever do!
I'm the realist mc and your gonna see
That you or anyone else can't **** beat me
My rhymes are hot like a radiator
My flows are more additive then space invader
I'm like darth vader
I use the lyrical rhyme light saber
So i'm waiting on a reply, **** you nigga

a line from my boyfriend eminem... i just don't give a ****

Dazza Boyz

aight yo take a seat and listen, u white wanna be E with a wack ambition,
i didn't read half your last spit, cause the whole thing sounded like a pile of sh!t,
Dj_battle would rip u like i did u,open up your eye lids lookie what i did, i beat a with 1 little rhyme, im not goin to waste my time spitin bak at yyou every time u think u rhyme, but next time please sit bak and at least drink some of papas moon shine..

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Ok where these poeple find that nigga at ?
Coz Mr. Insane can't spit and go learn rap for god sake
i don't wanna battles you coz i get you choke so go play with little children

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Mr. Man

in the club lastnight..

didnt know where ii was goin, saw this baldie , took a right..

drinks pourin, straight flowin'... im liking his style - got damn he's straight..

ii start walking away, and he's beggin me to stay.

so ii paused for a second, and he came through

and for that single moment, it was just us two.

felt like nobody in the room, then ii snapped out of phase,

he's holding my face, moving me to a quieter place.

his boys straight staring, cant even close they mouth

trying to figure what im about

it's crazy :: how he amazes me

thugg on my level, physically and mentally.

he pulls me to the spot

he leans in closer and im feelin hott..

im biting my lip , his hand on my hip

wisper in my ear, then he nibbles it..

ii take a step back ,put my hand to his chest

second guess Mr.Man, if he is like the rest?

ii start at his shoes, and work my eyes up

pants creased like ii like it, i feel im in luck..

his white tee starched, and a beater beneath it

his head shaved smooth, ooh im lovin it..

persistent brown ojos staring into mine

guy like this , trust their hard to find.

so we walks out the club, and he opens the door

a thugg with class, ii cant even ask for more

walk up to his carro, 3 inches off the ground

hit the switches to lift it and he turned up the sound.

late night cruise, unsure where the road lead

ii layed on his shoulder and he's caressing my head.

our conversations insightful and real

im lovin how he is making me feel.

we pull up to his spot, got damn he's looking right.

stood under the lamp post, and he pulls me in the light

he's calling me Hermosa, and squeezing me tighter

coming in closer and his breath is getting louder.

im trippin on this thinking this shiit is getting deep,

just met Mr.Man .already on late night creep

ii feel my celly buzzing, my girls calling my phone

he thinks that im scared - offers to take me home

ii leaned for the kiss, we shared a few

his whispering, "Baby Na im glad ii found you"

things happened so fast, a few months down the line

so happy, couldnt even track time.

ii close my eyes, get on top...get mine =)

innocently acting like it's my first time.

he plays along, maybe he feels inclined? to be so kind?

id do anything to make sure he's only mine.

regardless his money or if he's working tha grind.

im staring at him making his wire rims shine...

seriously made up my mind.he's the one,**** the other vato's in line.

ii turn around and he's on his knees, he had him a ring

if i marry him, he will "feel like a king"

ii lay down that night, kiss him goodnight

wake up that morning to the sun shine so bright.

Mr. Man's not there, im trying to digest

trying to consume this pain in my chest ....

its my heart - like broken glass shattered

i cant beleive, he's gone like ii never even mattered.

a tear falls from my eye, then ii understand what ii feel

mr.man was a dream, he was never even Real.

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Re: this is how you rap

theprofessor wrote:

this is how you rap

through speach,
you can teach,
new platuea's you can reach,
if you listen to this ,
its not all about dissen and spitin a diss,
its about useing what you got,
take what your taught,
an leave your page so hot,
its left in flames
forget about makeing a name,
if you do that all your lyrics will be the same,
people get bitter an you become lame,
its not about the fame,
its about the respect,
smash your face of the deck,
till your skin no longer connects,
to the bone,
i do this stoned,
i dont need a crew i do this alone,
on page or with a microphone,
i know people with skill,
that are so chill,
there words are called ill,
i ask them will,
you ever cut a deal
, the reply with be real,
i need to pay for my meals,
you have to be the best,
better then the rest,
have a golden heart in your chest,
mainstream forgot about the sound,
thats why the most profound,
lyrics are bound
, to the underground,
if you wanna learn to rhyme,
either commit a crime,
and spit well your doing time,
or read lots of books,
write hooks,
then disperse,
a multiple verse,
that sounds like a uzi burst ,
your verbal trigger will pull,
with lyrics full,
of multi-syllables,
topics like war,
gore ,
and the poor,
mixed with metaphors,
ok today,
your gonna learn about word play,
and punchlines,
combined,
with the force of a nine,
to your spine,
i think thats it,
use your wit,
when you spit,
make sure your intricet,
oh yea yo,
practice your flow,
be able to diss slow,
and fast,
then you'll know youve kicked someones ass,
when your shatter emcee's like glass,
peace out thats the end of class,

Solid...!!! Mad Props

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