Do you guys have your own little rap community going here? Everything is moving so fast.
I would really like to learn the composition process of rap. Would someone be kind enough to walk me through?
I do consider myself to be somewhat of a gangsta.
Yep I gotta go...
Hendo Yo
"Rap you later!"
"Crack you later!"
Well your avatar clearly depicts that you are straight up gangsta!.....hmm...jus playin man...
ask DJ_Battlefield or someone to tell you about it....but not that B Vs C guy wat a black azz!
p.s. Bloods-Vs-Crips is a black azz!!!! lol ....
wat a little azz smart that Trick-Master...
up to his tricks again...whoooo boy!
I'll try and tell you what I know....
Well first you need to click on DJ_Battlefield's PM link then type in the message box: " I would really like to learn the composition process of rap. Would you be kind enough to walk me through?
p.s. Trick-Master is a black azz....
Thank you for that, Bloods-Vs-Crips, and, might I add, I find your nickname and avatar quite appealing.
yoyo!!
,yo trick master how u do that thing..ya know... that flow.....--------HENDERSON----- kinda...yo my man..can u teach me?
yo yo my man. Count me in too.
ok i'm out catch you up later...
crack you later!
Hey Gus, I'd like to see what you come up with. Here's some basics:
http://wiki.ehow.com/Write-a-Rap-Song
dazza
Dazza_boy aint noting but wack writer,
spending time thinkin makin 1 damn long line sentence which is not worth,
Dissing avery niggaz wont stop till he got his damn respect or some sort.
Look u cant even make a perfect rhyme,
i can defeat u repeatly cuz i can reverse the time!
Dude wht u tryin 2 do man wanna get some fame?
Well forget it people dont even know ur name..
And yeah ur rhyme need more ingredients...
Which is wack,smack,bullshits,crap and smelly onions..
Theres no body here who good at cheap talk except u,
U think u win the battle becuz u havent face the real crew.
So what if i say ur rhyme is so out!?
Shoot me with ur laser beam gun?
Forget it about freestyle just work properly and start produce some daughter and son.
Trick-Master wrote:DJ_Battlefield wrote:weird ****, its a reunion
Yeah and you know what else is weird...most of us in this thread are from NZ.....YEEA!
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SoUtE aUcKiLaNi----- represent
Ranui----represent
true dat!! hahaha where you from B n C?
im in paru Ch CH... south islander
Re: dazza
If you dipshits were bankers ya's still wouldn't make any cents (sense)
come on girls.. admit it, you's shock less than an electric fence
and ladys, halt the **** talk b'4 slipps comes back onto this cypher
yu's bight more than dogs n thats why you got rabies n no-one likes ya.
I'll type yas a quick death and ya all can act like ya's didn't see this
all i see is more bitching than menopause comin from three chicks
stop eatin dicks and being parasites, ya all need to quit
slipperz is much more advanced and will make ya skulls bleed in bits.
tossers
[size=yo rate this this is a doc diss
Verse 1
hey doc ever been on block 1,
cock my gun,
lyrical gold like myans ,
glock to your dome,
like rock smoked through chrome,
whack, was a term used before wigger a white kid trying to be black,
doc who you kidding thats you thats a fact,
gats impact your back,
like a bitch with a fat rack,
got you bent like bubba and clark kent, in the pc-unit,
doc your rap more basic then 50 cent, an g-unit,
Hook
doc was lieing trying to take credit, for what ive said-before,
the way i spit and my metaphors,
doc lacks commen-sense,
spits whack comments,
doc aka verbal incompidents,
every time you hit refresh,
you'll see me ripping through your flesh,
well im spitting on the mic your sitting behind your desk,
blind to the fact im your death,
im worse the crack mixed with meth,
this battles more one sided then race wars an a black ref,
verse2
if you didnt notice, i dont need to swear,
to diss, and get my messeage across the air,
next week im going to compete , in a compition,
,doc there's a seat, for you if you can withstand my dissing,
if cant then can be found missing, this week,
for you opening your beek ,
you got no technique
u can get shot with my tech and your dome will leak,
every rhyme i drop,
causes your heart to stop,
ripping through your optical turning you to a cyclops,
crack a mop in two,
and shove it through the back-of-you ,
my lyrics beat you black-an-blue
Hook
doc was lieing trying to take credit, for what ive said-before,
the way i spit and my metaphors,
doc lacks commen-sense,
spits whack comments,
doc aka verbal incompidents,
every time you hit refresh,
you'll see me ripping through your flesh,
well im spitting on the mic your sitting behind your desk,
blind to the fact im your death,
im worse the crack mixed with meth,
this battles more one sided then race wars an a black ref,
verse3
the lyrical alchemist
alcahol mixed with fists
falling dropkicks and spinning wrists
is the reason im winning this
i taught the devil to hate
built gods gate
im the reason guilt can alter your fate
bring your mind to an alternate state
i look into the past
through the hour glass
watching the hours pass
cowards cower as guns blast
to fast to be called quick
to much of an a**hole to be a prick
to fatal to be sick
as my skill grows
ill flows kill those
fake emcees with pillows
colouring your bed red
from the hemoglobin in your head
Hook
doc was lieing trying to take credit, for what ive said-before,
the way i spit and my metaphors,
doc lacks commen-sense,
spits whack comments,
doc aka verbal incompidents,
every time you hit refresh,
you'll see me ripping through your flesh,
well im spitting on the mic your sitting behind your desk,
blind to the fact im your death,
im worse the crack mixed with meth,
this battles more one sided then race wars an a black ref,
verse4
im this weeks enthusiast,
my technique's like uzi's-an-fists,
after the slashed wrist,
my words leave gashes,
so hot i turn emcee's to gases,
then burn there ashes,
doc couldnt be a con,
this kid lives in saskatchewan,
now i could be wrong,
he's the type to rape his mom and wear her thong,
cause his dick is 2 inches long,
grope her boobs,
bounded in rope playing with her fallopian tubes,
Rate this i wanna here your opinions
peace from the proff
and if anyone else doesnt notice doc writes a rhyme a week maximum most of us others drop 2-3 a day
to be honest proff, you have improved.
i think you ripped doc up then.
you are really good at syllabolically sound rhyming, n i respect that.
dude, don't let eryk piss you off, he's good but not that good...
on this site it is more about wordplay n punchlines than anything because people have time to read what your sayin and figure it out, unlike a battle in real terms where it is more about sounding good and making sense that is relevant to the opponent you are battling....
i think thats why you got paid out so much, because you lack wordplay and punches... e.g.. YOU COULD STRAP YA NOTEPAD TO YOUR FIST AND STILL WOULDN"T "PUNCHLINES" (just an example)... but obviously it is near on impossible to do that with every bar you spit freestyle on stage. even eminem can't do it, but where he prevails is in his multi's and the expression and sound of his voice... and what he says is spot on even if it is not a pun (look pun up in the dictionary if your not sure).. puns are good here though because you have time to think them up.. if you cant think up puns then maybe text battling is not for you but real live battling could be. You know what im saying?
respect
