mc slipperz
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 12:10 am
CREATIVITY: Eryk
MULTIS: Professor
PUNCHES: Eryk
FLOW: Eryk
VOCAB: Professor
WORDPLAY: Eryk


Overall Eryk took it... Came harder with his punches and his verse was less choppy. Proffs got better use of multis but did not come with near enough punches. Think it out a bit longer next time...
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tImE bAnDiT
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 01:58 am
STRUCTURE: Eryk
MULTIS: Prof
PUNCHES: Eryk
FLOW: Eryk
VOCAB: Prof
WORDPLAY: Eryk

VOTE: ERYK

Slipperz is right, DOC came harder and better.. PROFF had some g0od sh1t too, but he had to come harder. and there is no bias from me PROFF, i respect ya now man...

peace
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MC TrikstR
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 02:28 am
ya'll im judging this batle whether ive left or not ****!! lol but hey again ery 1 Wink lmao anyways....


STRUCTURE: Eryk
PUNCHES: Eryk
FLOW: Eryk
VOCAB: proff
WORDPLAY: Eryk ( to be honest i tohugh it was kindda whack but hes the only 1 dat used wordplay so..)
TRIPLES: Proff
MULTIES: Proff
META's: was their any ???? n/a

VOTE: Eryk
yo reason being:

proff's flow: absoloutely shocking...its good for a bit and then just falls...syllables all over the place

Erky's punches: ******* KO'd proffs ass!!

Proff's multies: really thats all proff's verses contain but hes good vocab must be said

Erk's wordplay: kindda weak but you were the only 1 to use it ( dont take that with any offence aight man i know u got real gd worpdlay so props on that but not in that rap)

^^ i tihnk thats all that has to be said ^^ but eryk killed you proff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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tImE bAnDiT
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 02:44 am
Fo-Realz wrote:

So this is for the self-proclaimed "Lyrical God" whose really made-to-hit,
Cause he's full of fake sh*t like a make-up-kit
So you saying that you-hot? Ha, I think-not,
I'll take ya rhymes and bounce them off this board like bank-shots
You may not have beef with me, but to keep this site going, I really don't give a f*ck
Man you must be star struck. What's unreal is how much this kid can suck
It's obvious my punches kill like I'm a lyrical grill,
He may think he's ill, but should get charged for life like a pregnancy bill!
How you come off thinking that was hot? More like cold.. Giving you a frozen feel
Cause beating me is like finding out that Michael Jackson's nose is real!

And Nah I didn't take ya flow the wrong way.. just there aint no spittin goin on so I decided to spit some sh*t


aight so you like to rip sh1t like that, aint that cute
FUK no, you dont know how to rip this sh1t dude
ima end this lil feud, watchin your lil ass on a pursuit
theres no denyin it, i can render your raps useless
my flows got you stressed, my rhymes progress
check my posts, they all indicate im blessed
s0o you like rhymin bout make-up-kits
watta b1tch, ill rip ya lyrics till you call it quits
fuk slittin wrists, wat the fuk are you? a gothic?
man in the world of hip-hop a gun can kill you quick
if your punches kill like a lyrical grill
than its obvious, my rhymes are too sick for DR PHIL
man beatin you i dont even hav to break a sweat
screw it, this lil battle ill just forget
ima close this case, your existance i should erase
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4merlin
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 04:49 am
time bandit u battlin ppl ownin them
but to me u bonin em
thAT AInt rite
i can whop this chump all nite
u rdy 4 a fight
no its getin late it past ya bed timeu had a big day flyin dat kite
it wouldnt surprise me if u were a runt
sry wat was dat i heard a grunt
o its just u havin gay dreams
dancin wit naked boys in water streams
go on trip one 4 a team
go say to mumy (y is he so mean)
i aint mean go pick ya nose and get a green
so i guess we back on da beef
cum here so i can noc ya teeth
go do it deep
wit one of ya peeps
man r u gona sleep
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4merlin
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 04:54 am
that wasnt to bandit
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 06:27 am
my death rap is attacking you,
your getting stabbed in the brain with a verble gun,
better watch ur step n show sum resect or i'll have to murder ur life.

peace
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4merlin
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 06:41 am
that wasa to u bandit
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 06:53 am
that made sence lol
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80proof
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 11:08 am
empsdall...
hey emsdal...you got big head but small brain...i spit rhyme magic like david blaine...am i insane? i dont know... look i dont even let my mom have my dick hold..cuz im 17...u think your the best..so im here to make a mess...test test test..ok good, sounds like my mic ready to impress....u call me 13... i call u white hunky skinny cold cuz your awnser sounds like your charming and bold...i have your dick sold...so i can earn more ice cream and gold....erm...17-13 i think your 14 years old...instead of giving me rhyme u give me ****...u can make a double album i bet wont have 1 hit. Im to good to get diss....i only listen to disk...no tape **** or from priest..5 words for u....BEFORE-I-GO-DRINK-THESE *PEE ON IMSDALLS MOUTH.....
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ImsdaL
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 11:35 am
haha. that was wack.

1 : i have never said im the best, actually i have several times said i'm bad.
2 : Your rhymes SUCK SO INCREDIBLY MUCH! I know for a fact that Eryk will back me up on this cause you STINK man.
3 : "I answer like i'm Charming and Bold" ???? What the f*ck man... how can someone sound bold?
4 : You're stupid.
5 : When i read your sh!t, i seriously think that someone at the age of 13 wrote it.. im not saying that you ARE 13, you just write like you are.
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mc slipperz
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 11:54 am
"L.G.. Lifes Good".. i got a fridge n dryer and i aint ever paid cash,
I'll "drive-by" ya house some time n give it sum free "stained glass"..
gay ass.. i heard you always tryin' on puttin ya tongue to your nob
lol.. ya avatar, i think ya confused what its like to put a gun to a "dawg"
God.. Lythic's in denial that slips ill spits is comin from the south
Lythic's in da "Nile", he got so much "**** running from the mouth" (river)
Bitch is gettin cursed as if he was prayin in a hallway with a dozen ghosts
Meant to go first but like a mailman on a holiday he just doesn't "post".

There ... 8 lines, **** all to match LG..

I couldn't wait...
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mc slipperz
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 12:00 pm
Imsdal chill the fuk out...
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Mc Risky
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 12:47 pm
yo 4merlin you up 4 a battle
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 02:23 pm
Imsdal
my death rap is attacking you
your getting stabbed in the brain with a verbal gun
u'd better watch ur step and show sum resect or i'll have to murder ur life
Peace
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 02:56 pm
dude your a queer and you look at your one inch in the mmirror
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mintsportman holymagic
 
  1  
Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 02:57 pm
so shut it
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 03:09 pm
yo man u wnat some **** bring it Imsdal
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 03:11 pm
man u guys haven't even seen my good raps yet i'll bust a ight one on him
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mintsportman holymagic
 
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Reply Thu 3 Nov, 2005 03:14 pm
Yeah, play times over ************
Spice 1's defiantly in motherfuckin' effect
You know what I'm saying? bringing it to you bitch ass nigga
So raise up and recognize, and understand that this brother is hard to kill
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