Neverending Rap Battle

lmao ****, that kinda sucked ass!

"kinda" ... hahahah

anyone on?

Time Bandit, Dat was sh*t I had just read and sat-through
It's obvious you haven't elevated since the last time I spat at-you
Ya verses suck, Only time that's clicking is when u sent it
I ain't even trying and you can see ya introduction has ended
You would think with that many posts, he'd be better right?
F*ck man, capitalizing and putting ppl's names in doesn't make you tight!
Structure of ya bars more like u just stacked-shame
Mailing me a videogame is the only time you send Max Payne (pain)
I got fillers that smack this b*tch and crack-nerds
I burst bars that 'Peirce ya chest' like 'Paul's jersey on backwards'
Ya sh*t rhymes clench my fists, One of ya bars cause me strife
Do me a favor - slit ya wrists, And dammit - I'll supply the knife!

Seriously.

Iight, New rappers lately haven't been showing much skill ya see
Aka.. 4Merlin named after the lobster in the Little Mermaid movie
Already you come on and you start to bore me
Wait, Isn't this a rap forum?.. NOT FOR YOUR LIFE STORIES
Stupid kid, takes up a whole page writing about his pubes?
The truth will sooner come out like yogurt in Go-gurt tubes
Like how I got skill and create more-fates
While you ain't an artist, you just have poor-traits (portraits)

MC Slippaz Rebuttal:

I'm mad cow disease so you don't want no beef with me/
Take away your dental insurance cause you are left with no teeth you see/
You speak to me, but recently it's only through a fat lip/
Like a lubricated pussy, I'm fukin' up that cat Slip/
I'm that hip, a shining star more than the Big Dipper/
Didnt want my feet dirty that's why I'm just usin' Slippaz/
Call me out and I'll flush your hopes spiriling down the crapper/
Your 'presence' is made of newspaper, that's why I'm rippin' through text rappers/
My rhymes are running you down, and you're stuck in the pit stop/
All the sailors think nobody can **** with Slip, (K)NOT!
I'm coffee with real sugar, because you know there's no Equal/
So give it up now and try again in the sequel/

neva ending
im da mista da diss'd cha ane no turnin back u just got jacked n cracked by da crookedest nigga u ane hear wait naw imma spicca nigga ready ta pull da fuckin trigga i dont give a **** if u throw a fit cuz im sho to spit something that will take u out 1 HIT no reason to stay cuz u keep pressin play tryna find a fault in my line while im steady chokin ya wit cha own spine dey iz no rewind n u bout to find a AR-14 shootin up ya spleen bitch im mean i spit lyrics dat make ya whole body turn green take tha hardest bitches u kno times it by 10 n u still wont have a killa like me a nigga of da shadows cuz im steady walkin witta demon while u scream OH PLEASE DONT TAKE MY LIFE!!!!! look in to my eyes bitch u see dis dull ass knife rippin ya gut str8 out cha butt so fuckin wut u think u cool u jussa a pawn daz gone be killed dey iz nutt'n but time no light nothing but dark wha lil heart i had i tore it apart cuz imma sing sing killa gunz movin just cockin my 9 gone str8 at cha im da brick wall cuz wit my lyrical verbs be bustin out all kinda wordz deyz no stoppin a nigga daz choppin mow'n ya down wit my fully auto packs at my side steady rollin down da west side no ya gots no play to reside when i come ta ride

Hahah you cats make me laugh with your run-on sentences. My suggestion is to write so people can read it...just press the return key after each line...it will make me want to actually read it. You don't want it to read like,

Yo, I spit all day I mold you out of clay, rhyme so round like a roll in the hay, I leave you in dismay, to hear me you better pay, like your girl when i lay, your style is gay so hold still while I play, etc....

Where's your hits?.. fuk bitch ya remind me of a chick with glossed lips
watch this snitch "vote herself up" as she attempts to "box slips"
What bitch!?!.. you callin yourself a girl in a catholic school?
that "punch fell a little short" just like ja rules
ya fool, girlfriend jokes are "old" news like penicilan "mold"
ya couldn't "run with some hot ****" if ya had ten villians souls
listen yall., chech out her syllabol "count" on her last bar
they just dont match up like grannys drivin in fast cars

**** that will do, you sucked man
if ya gonna use wordplay, don't be all vague about it.

lol, yeah you "crushed" me man.. haha..
You're just a kid.

I mean, i suck but you STILL managed to lose..


Votes .

You say i lost, so what...

you just trying to influence everyone here...

i rhyme, don't like all this reverse psycology crap.

Imsdal, im not a kid.....

goodnight

mc slipperz ran all ova ur ass ..............................................dr eryk ur a ledgend n ur a fuckin awsum rapper """respect""

lol I wouldn't go as far as callin' me a legend, but thanks man.

lamest rap ever..
yo man all you bitches with hairless bones...stfu up ...emsdal? u stfu..dont think these is your show...dont expect us to have your lead follow...my rhymes make u swallow some of my flow...then u **** it out in your ass and blow... think your the best ever?...talking **** is not a way of clever..your rhyme and skill is low level...whatever...your rhymes need a flavour...cuz i dont fill it...your rhymes are failure..betta quit raping and freestyle or later your name will forever never ever in these server:)

yo man all you bitches with hairless bones...stfu up ...emsdal? u stfu..dont think these is your show...dont expect us to have your lead follow...
i dont?

my rhymes make u swallow some of my flow...then u **** it out in your ass and blow... t
you 13 years old or something?

hink your the best ever?
i've said i suck... so no.

...talking **** is not a way of clever..your rhyme and skill is low level...whatever...your rhymes need a flavour...cuz i dont fill it...your rhymes are failure..betta quit raping and freestyle or later your name will forever never ever in these server:)


that was so weak and pointless than even you grandma was embarrassed. But keep workin.. Maybe you can get better.





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Eryk is a "legend" on a website eh? haha. cool.
[sarcasm]I wanna be legend on a WEBSITE too! [/sarcasm]

votes up. eryk, go! =)

btw spikes, you can't vote if you're 13 years old or younger, so back off. =)

You cant hack ****, i can't be bothered with you bro...

calling 80proof 13 and then saying spike can't vote n sayin he's 13...
What you playing at.... ya some kind of dictator?

you gonna cry now?

dude i bet that dude is 13 so what hey still a noob he has to cry let him, fine w/e he sucks alls to it

yo dont anyone remember that me and eryk had a battle and we asked y'all to judge that
if you can judge it
peace