mc slipperz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:06 am
dr_eryk wrote:
aight for sure.... I like the feedin' off other's raps, it does show that it's not written.


the doctor and the proffessor could team up together/ and still couldn't understand the slippers brain matter/ im the games rapper who has never been defeated/ unlike your name which is slandered, almost deleated/ ive landed planes and drivin formula one cars/ why you can even figure out how to open candy bars/ i make you see stars as my punches hit so hard/ i no what you gonna play next cos i can see ya cards/
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:13 am
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
aight for sure.... I like the feedin' off other's raps, it does show that it's not written.


the doctor and the proffessor could team up together/ and still couldn't understand the slippers brain matter/ im the games rapper who has never been defeated/ unlike your name which is slandered, almost deleated/ ive landed planes and drivin formula one cars/ why you can even figure out how to open candy bars/ i make you see stars as my punches hit so hard/ i no what you gonna play next cos i can see ya cards/


Kid says "yo lets keystyle" should of just said "YO, I wanna bet beaten"
I dont' have to double team with proff cause you're style is like sleepin'
it's there but consider it dead, why would I want to understand ur brain?
if I wanted to know how a wack emcee thinks, I would go to someone with a 'wacker' name
so what you drive formula one cars, still don't understand the forumla of rap
I'm like DMX cause I never die alone, bitch 'excuse my back'*
since you attempted to keystyle agianst me, I thik it's only fair I do the same
slippers was hot for 5 minutes, then i posted and put out his flame

*Dmx is in a movie called 'never die alone' and in the movie he says 'excuse my back'
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:16 am
Yo, my bad about the time limit man, I kept clickin' refresh on the last page, and didn't see we were on the next page. so my bad.
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mc slipperz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:21 am
dr_eryk wrote:
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
aight for sure.... I like the feedin' off other's raps, it does show that it's not written.


the doctor and the proffessor could team up together/ and still couldn't understand the slippers brain matter/ im the games rapper who has never been defeated/ unlike your name which is slandered, almost deleated/ ive landed planes and drivin formula one cars/ why you can even figure out how to open candy bars/ i make you see stars as my punches hit so hard/ i no what you gonna play next cos i can see ya cards/


Kid says "yo lets keystyle" should of just said "YO, I wanna bet beaten"
I dont' have to double team with proff cause you're style is like sleepin'
it's there but consider it dead, why would I want to understand ur brain?
if I wanted to know how a wack emcee thinks, I would go to someone with a 'wacker' name
so what you drive formula one cars, still don't understand the forumla of rap
I'm like DMX cause I never die alone, bitch 'excuse my back'*
since you attempted to keystyle agianst me, I thik it's only fair I do the same
slippers was hot for 5 minutes, then i posted and put out his flame


Your attracted to my flame like a moth is to the fire/ then when you get to me i "burn" out all ya desire/ a quoir could sing a better tune than you/ and i do understand the formula of rap it equals fuc.k you/ does DMX stand slippers Done My Ex/ cos that poor little girl didn't realize how big a penis could flex/ if i had decks i would "beat you" to bits/ and i wouldn't even do a full song it would be other with a skit/ try to hit back with your phoney rhymes/ if you were a supermarket you still couldn't "design some lines"
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:29 am
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
aight for sure.... I like the feedin' off other's raps, it does show that it's not written.


the doctor and the proffessor could team up together/ and still couldn't understand the slippers brain matter/ im the games rapper who has never been defeated/ unlike your name which is slandered, almost deleated/ ive landed planes and drivin formula one cars/ why you can even figure out how to open candy bars/ i make you see stars as my punches hit so hard/ i no what you gonna play next cos i can see ya cards/


Kid says "yo lets keystyle" should of just said "YO, I wanna bet beaten"
I dont' have to double team with proff cause you're style is like sleepin'
it's there but consider it dead, why would I want to understand ur brain?
if I wanted to know how a wack emcee thinks, I would go to someone with a 'wacker' name
so what you drive formula one cars, still don't understand the forumla of rap
I'm like DMX cause I never die alone, bitch 'excuse my back'*
since you attempted to keystyle agianst me, I thik it's only fair I do the same
slippers was hot for 5 minutes, then i posted and put out his flame


Your attracted to my flame like a moth is to the fire/ then when you get to me i "burn" out all ya desire/ a quoir could sing a better tune than you/ and i do understand the formula of rap it equals fuc.k you/ does DMX stand slippers Done My Ex/ cos that poor little girl didn't realize how big a penis could flex/ if i had decks i would "beat you" to bits/ and i wouldn't even do a full song it would be other with a skit/ try to hit back with your phoney rhymes/ if you were a supermarket you still couldn't "design some lines"



sayin' you burn my disire is like sayin' you're better than me kat
which we both know i could beat you, must be blind if you can' 'see' that
a quoir is in better tune than me, i'll pretend I didn't see that weak diss
lucky were doin this online cause if face to face i'd leave you speachless
lmao slippers has a penis, now that's a shockin' statement
I "BET" you couldn't freestyle if you punk ass was in the 'basement'
you could write in a bigger font and still wouldn't get a second look
cuse the only time slips rhymes 'hit' is if you threw you're rhyme book
callin' my rhymes phoney? kid must be on somethin'
take my advice kid, quit actin' hard cause you'r just frontin
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mc slipperz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:30 am
your breakin the time limit
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:35 am
lmao yeah I know man... My bad man.. not doin' it on purpose.. Gettin' distracted, tryin' to catch the BET freestyle friday battles on TV..
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:36 am
fuckin' computers slow too.. so spit you're keystyle then i'll spit min after that, and that's it...
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mc slipperz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:39 am
dr_eryk wrote:
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
mc slipperz wrote:
dr_eryk wrote:
aight for sure.... I like the feedin' off other's raps, it does show that it's not written.


the doctor and the proffessor could team up together/ and still couldn't understand the slippers brain matter/ im the games rapper who has never been defeated/ unlike your name which is slandered, almost deleated/ ive landed planes and drivin formula one cars/ why you can even figure out how to open candy bars/ i make you see stars as my punches hit so hard/ i no what you gonna play next cos i can see ya cards/


Kid says "yo lets keystyle" should of just said "YO, I wanna bet beaten"
I dont' have to double team with proff cause you're style is like sleepin'
it's there but consider it dead, why would I want to understand ur brain?
if I wanted to know how a wack emcee thinks, I would go to someone with a 'wacker' name
so what you drive formula one cars, still don't understand the forumla of rap
I'm like DMX cause I never die alone, bitch 'excuse my back'*
since you attempted to keystyle agianst me, I thik it's only fair I do the same
slippers was hot for 5 minutes, then i posted and put out his flame


Your attracted to my flame like a moth is to the fire/ then when you get to me i "burn" out all ya desire/ a quoir could sing a better tune than you/ and i do understand the formula of rap it equals fuc.k you/ does DMX stand slippers Done My Ex/ cos that poor little girl didn't realize how big a penis could flex/ if i had decks i would "beat you" to bits/ and i wouldn't even do a full song it would be other with a skit/ try to hit back with your phoney rhymes/ if you were a supermarket you still couldn't "design some lines"



sayin' you burn my disire is like sayin' you're better than me kat
which we both know i could beat you, must be blind if you can' 'see' that
a quoir is in better tune than me, i'll pretend I didn't see that weak diss
lucky were doin this online cause if face to face i'd leave you speachless
lmao slippers has a penis, now that's a shockin' statement
I "BET" you couldn't freestyle if you punk ass was in the 'basement'
you could write in a bigger font and still wouldn't get a second look
cuse the only time slips rhymes 'hit' is if you threw you're rhyme book
callin' my rhymes phoney? kid must be on somethin'
take my advice kid, quit actin' hard cause you'r just frontin


I ain't frontin at nothin all my rhymes are sayin somethin/ unlike yours which seems like ya mouths has a sock as a stuffin/ stop all your bluffin you can't freestyle a multi/ it shows in all your last rhymes so we now no this g is faulty/ if i threw in my rhyme book it would make you suicidal/ either that or you will turn to the bible/ you prefer idol chit chat with emcees over this site/ it's like once in a blue moon i ever see you write/ aight you really did try your best/ but the **** your spraying should inflict a federal arrest
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:46 am
Yo I don't write alot cause I'm not always on the computer/ this bitch is so wak you should invest in a rap tutor/ I perfer to idol chit chat? not my fault people see me as an idol/ like eminem, i'm you're role model. so 'do exactly as i do/ **** nvm you can't bring the same skill level/ cause you're **** is more messed up than a christan toyin' with the devil/ and kid, this isn't even my best/ I had to stoop 'down' to you're level, like I do to the rest/ it'll be awhile to see someone that can cop with what i spit/ unlike all you wack fucks, eat toilet papaer cause you spit '****'/ if i'm over the time limit...**** it/ I just fuckin' hit this 'goose' you should of 'ducked' bitch/ slippers you're nothin' every verse you 'slip up'/ even you addmited it, every verse i write i 'rip' up/
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mc slipperz
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:50 am
respect man..
that should shut anyone up who doubts me or you.
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:52 am
yeah for sure man. that right there proves we dont' pre-write our ****..

Yo, I have to admit you had some 'hot' lines in you're verses.damn... props on that man..
Respect..
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 12:50 pm
yo slipperz cause you earned docs repect you have some of mine i took a sabatical before i was useing the same **** too much but i took on four of you at once and i won that battle you at least have to admit that and would somebody please shut up ibi he cant rap he shouldnt even be on the site he uses rhymezone to battle us
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dr eryk
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 01:09 pm
lol Yo proff I don tknow how slippers is gonna take to that,sayin' you won that battle. I'd have to re-look the raps for me to juudge, but anyone has a problem agianst losin', might take it or might now.. takes a real mc to admit a loss.

I'm out..
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UnKnOwN SoLjA
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 01:40 pm
UnKnOwN SoLjA wrote:
I aint a crab dawg, but i got a "snap" 2 my wordz,
n i aint a blood, but i bleed red when im cut by u herbz//
Rarely im touched by u nerdz, ud b lucky to conquer dis superb,
ive been around to observe n witness u wanna bz shrink 2 barely obscured//
U think wut u heard wuz dat heat? well like nelly i aint aimin for #3,
when i spit a key, u niggas quick 2 flee cuz envy get u high like extacy//
flex-wit-me? trus me when i say u-cant-g, most u catz cant stand next-2-me,
let alone mess-wit-me, test-me-b, and watch me leave u in da dirt left-2-bleed//
Yes-i-succed, at wut i do cuz i im rawer den flesh-2-teenz, im da best-it-seemz,
yall diagonal like base-ball-seamz, cuz i dont need 2 stand on a hill 2 proove u less-den-me//
im still da best-2-be, up-2-date im a "war vet", call me da "purple heart" da way i top-da-hate,
stop-muh-fate? impossible...im tha day after 2morro n trus me ur doom-awaitz//


rate it


rate it
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 01:50 pm
a couple good multies metaphors were half assed and no wordplay 5 out of 10
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 05:29 pm
I'd give it a 6.5/10 if you wanna know why lemme know. then i'll explain, I've seen you do better.
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 09:42 pm
im split in half
my thoughts are takeing different paths
one side causes a blood bath
the other wants peace
but the first wants humanity deceased
the second loves every beast
put together my thoughts reach from west to east
createing a masterpiece
on one hand i want everyone dead
i dont get angry i just always see red
im just telling you the thoughts in my head
sometimes it just needs to be said
how you feel
its just being real
if you murder rape or steal
you might get caught
if you rape you will get shot
take every chance your givin its the only one you got
i have a plot kill all you mutha fukers an watch your bodies rot

rate it dont i dont care

this one is not to anyone inpeticular its just cause im pissed letting off some steam
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mc slipperz
 
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Reply Tue 4 Oct, 2005 02:41 am
I liked it all proff, but the last line, it didn't really go with the rest.
It was creative..
thumbs up
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MC TrikstR
 
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Reply Tue 4 Oct, 2005 04:18 am
damn damn DAMN!

i aint gnna bother battling bum bandit and who ever the other wanker is their wack as fuk!!!!! and they know it which makes it 10 times worse...i aint gnna bother my lil paragraph was ******* amazing compared to thei whack ****..and eryk proff keep that ill sh*it up mang's some ill shyt coming here lol damn im at school so catch ya'll l8r

~peace out~
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