dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Sat 17 Sep, 2005 06:53 pm
lmao marshall that kid bit it off a song. Patently waitin from 50cent and eminem, if I rememeber corectly, almost his whole verse he bit!
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theprofessor
 
  1  
Reply Sat 17 Sep, 2005 08:29 pm
ok i admit my spit is ellicit scripts that strip your bone bare till you showing no hair like you bald im apald half of you called yourself mc's sorry your never gonna win an emmy you cant condemn me im forever open i have hope in places that leaves faces covered in tears ive had enough of queers i dont mean gay lets get this clear who when they diss dont hear there peers you miss what they got to say you got faggots who play with you in homosexual ways sorry im drunk i dont give a ****
your body wil make the cap of my truck im done you suck
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Detox
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 03:43 am
man that just means he cant rhyme dawg

can u or someone rate my verse for me

respect


dr_eryk wrote:
lmao marshall that kid bit it off a song. Patently waitin from 50cent and eminem, if I rememeber corectly, almost his whole verse he bit!
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Detox
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 03:45 am
eyo professor i dont mean 2 be dissin u cause im not but in that verse like there wasn't much hard punchlines like no wat i mean it was good dw bout that but it wasn't hard punchlines and like yeah

respect aight man


theprofessor wrote:
ok i admit my spit is ellicit scripts that strip your bone bare till you showing no hair like you bald im apald half of you called yourself mc's sorry your never gonna win an emmy you cant condemn me im forever open i have hope in places that leaves faces covered in tears ive had enough of queers i dont mean gay lets get this clear who when they diss dont hear there peers you miss what they got to say you got faggots who play with you in homosexual ways sorry im drunk i dont give a ****
your body wil make the cap of my truck im done you suck
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Detox
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 03:53 am
hey dawg i just listened 2 it it was third verse word for word


dr_eryk wrote:
lmao marshall that kid bit it off a song. Patently waitin from 50cent and eminem, if I rememeber corectly, almost his whole verse he bit!
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Peti MC
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 04:26 am
detox battle me
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cuttz
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 05:42 am
**** detox,peti lets make it quick
atthe end o the day im nuttin but sick
cuz the UK come ram that **** up ur arse
we jam packed with lyrics like cars to car parks
**** an interview nigga i get into you nigga
enuf hearin bout what u wanna do nigga
007, rest in heaven what the **** u tryin bitch must be 11
no **** that ur probably 7,u ainnt a rapper,not from london,more like u from devon
im seizin that no.1 spot,and any uk soldiers too
i eat the beef from humans like i was cannibal
bring it like an earthquake or volcano
so hot u could mistake me for kano
peti wonder y cuttz blowed him out
next time ************ better close ya mouth
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Sizzle
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 09:38 am
To peti MC

yeh all i need is a dollar production
i'll still blow do lid off da street
i'll giv you a $100 production
you'll probably spend it all on weed
how about you think b4 u write cus you'll save yourself a lot of time
u aint no challenge to me ur a flippin' peti MC- ur a crime
this webpage aint built for peti lames
i swear on da terms n conditions it said no gays
so how about you scurry home b4 some1 turns you in
go back home or where ever you live
n throw your lyrics in da bin
cus they embarrasing to this lyrical G
yeah i may look weak but i flout like a butterfly sting like a bee Twisted Evil
-----------------------------------------
a dollar production- $izzle
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Mc Risky
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 10:42 am
yo $izzle u wanna battle me agen feel free
u spit first
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 03:20 pm
**** bro you already battle him, don't need to battle him agian right after him! what are you tryin' to prove, yOu wanna battle someone, battle me!!!
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 03:21 pm
lmao detox, I know!
Post your verse agian, and I'll rate it aight!
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GTO
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 04:10 pm
Mc Risky thinks hes hot but he better take a seat,
Grab a pen and paper bi--- cuz you about to be beat,
You think you a warrior but you gotta get a life,
I show up with a nine you bring a butta knife,
Im ridin Es-co-lades while you ridin little Tykes,
I be hittin up the hoes while u hangin with the dikes,
B---- go home n watch Oprah with your mom and pap,
Cuz when you and sizzle spit rhymes no one f---ing claps,
While you and him are havin ur little fight,
I be home with your moms all f----ing night.
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killu
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 05:09 pm
GTO=WEAK
im battling a ho
yeah you know his name...GTO
i DONT know what that stands for
but i can tell you one thing
Gto's the queen and im the king
hes a b--tch talking about rollin in escalades
when last night he called me up and said he wanted to show up in it
to the next ten gay parades
and wave out the window wearing his moms favortire dress
this little kids a mad mess
hey yo this dude is the biggest wanksta
makin the backstreet boys look like scary gangstas
im tellin you ho no one can feel you
talk back b--tch and ill f--kin kill u
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johnny j
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 05:19 pm
sdgsdfg
last night i was with yo mother
ill tell u one thing shes a good fuker
got her on the bed table couch and flo
i fucked her again and i fucked her some mor
then i thought of sumtin theni siad dang
this bitch(u) came outt the same pussy i just banged
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Fo-Realz
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 07:11 pm
how the **** are you goin hand out advice/
nigga put a hole in yo life with a 5-inch knife/
im bout to gamble so dont scramble/
if i win you goin be man-handled with a sandle/
you aint gotta hood unless its on yo jacket now hack it/
you'll be killed by every mc here especilly peti mc the faggot/
**** the cops im the one callin the shots/
my evil plots that rocks/
i live my life fuly throught this hip/hop
leave you hangin and bangin/
ima break it up like a paper-cut/
your mums a slut but so what she still suckin on my left nut/
i dont give a **** what yo peeps say anyway/
that's the beauty of gruesome violence/
I'ma loud-mouth nigga but my ruger's silent/

Iight Detox.. I know u can do better most def. But this is actually coming hard compared to whoever that kid u was spittin at ahaa. You should come more with some wordplay and metas.. add to creativity.. Id rate this 6.5 I guess.. I dunno I dont usually rate lmao
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killu
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 08:02 pm
fo-realz is wack
i knew this fa-gg-t mc who used to battle in high heals
im pretty sure his stage name was fo realz
hes talkin about takin a life with a 5 inch knife
but he came to battle me wearing a dress from his wife
talkin about "hey does this make me look fat"
embarrassing nigga every night takin candlelit sponge baths
this dudes bout to get hit with my lyrical slugs
me beating him is for sure like him givng cops hugs
hes got love for the man cuz he sucks it to get it
his moms and dads in the crowd hiding like f-ck our sons so pathetic
so if you want to mess with this mc made of stealz
i gaurantee ill serve you on the mic everytime...fo realz
b-tch
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UnKnOwN SoLjA
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 08:05 pm
yo who wanna battle me? im bored yo...
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killu
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 08:05 pm
ill battle wimp
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UnKnOwN SoLjA
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 08:09 pm
lol ight....unlimited barz....drop wheneva
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killu
 
  1  
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 08:17 pm
i have no other option than to treat this dude like my girl
he raps like my little sister but she dont use her fingers to do hair twirls
like thisdude does
he never had or will get a buzz
no one knows him
his own friends force him to blow em
they like in order to hang with us we must disrespect you
they said jack us off now you were like show me where the tissue
i dont even wanna battle you its like battling a corpse
this dude takes his jean and cuts em to make them daisy dukes shorts
so when he goes to the sperm bank he can offer a service
he hopes and prays to god 10 dudes there sayin please unkown jerk us
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