Neverending Rap Battle

u have 5 ppl on it...

wait, 3...LOL

sry ma haha came out like 6 times

oi soljas what you talking about 5 and 3 members bro :S im totally spun lol this shits getting crazy lmao im out l8rz bro's

idk but i wanna battle 2 practice my multis

a yo this for quick

a yo why this guy runnin his mouth frontin like he can rap//i read all of ya **** and all of it was crap// so find out who you messen wit nigga// cuz my raps aimed at you and im bout to pull the trigga// i will admit some of it was good// but i coulda swore i heard the good **** from J hood// i see why ppl say you steal your rhymes// and how you gonna talk about killen me when you couldnt kill time// so lay back while my rhyme aim to please// i got your mom and your sister on their knees// i aint talken bout braces when i say i put the metal to ya grill// or pull out the switch blade and watch all ya guts spill// ask ya sis i got her sayin my name// talken like you got a gun when the only peice you got is hangin from your chain//i swear your moms and your sister a whore// cuz they be loven my meat like some type of carnivore// to beat you i dont need to spit 50 barz// but to beat me you need to steal J hood lines you fraud

yo we straight now i'll let you pick the judges

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it dont matter


pick

ill judge, if needed

aight mc hope you can judge

yo, i just wanna try this.. see if it works out

introducing a new MC
BLINDside, this skill didnt come easy
take you back, to were it all started
life was easy initl i hit teens and almost departed
life with parents was rough
fightin over pointless stuff
theres six of us kids and we had to stand together
still do and nothin parts us no matta the weatha
friends of mine dont come to often
one even ended up in a coffin
dont get me wrong i have my group
just the others were there, then went POOF
now those asswipes can **** themselves
theres one thing ive learned, go with nothin else
trust nobody, you gotta be independent at times
dont get me wrong, friends are fine
just do they understand my ever secret
hell no, half cant even keep it
but my possy and me, we got each others backs
seems like my only perscriptions rap
cuz troubles come and go
what do i do? get a paper and pen and flow
let it all out, calm these nerves
im waitin for another battle, last boy got served
i speak the truth, and nothin but the truth
like the drunk guy at the bar, in the back booth
40oz of pain, takin away in a swig
cuz BLINDside will never be stopped
i keep walkin, even through gun shots
keep trudgin, keep goin
dont make BLINDside stop this flowin

tell me wat you think, i need sum critisism...make me better

aite, what do i base it on again?

here's the voting structure

Voting Structure
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Structure:
Multies:
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Metaphors:
Punches:
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Enjoyment:
VOTE:
Explaination:

Now what fake emcee did tha game bring today?
Green chronic aint nice, mor like childs play//
i kno i can beat u so y do i bother?
cuz im like Darth Vader, "CHRONIC I AM UR FATHER!"//
im bout to smoke this kid green chronic,
no wordplay mayb u shuld check out hooked-on-phonics!//
Kid claims hes a hard-hard-hitta,
in my eyes mor like a weak-weak spitta//
This man could neva `hustle and flow',
kidz a dog, he needs a `muzzle and bow'//
all talk but when it comes to rhymin tha bitch lacks,
all i think when hes spittin is that he needs sum tick-tacks//
Dont try to stand here and act buff,
cuz all tha chronic in tha world couldnt make u mor tough//
u cant beat me so jus stand back and cry,
swat ya ass out tha air like a annoyin fly//
kids so poor he had to move 2 brazil,
he could sit on ice and still not b chill!//
dudes as FAKE as WEAVE, u lost this so TAKE ur LEAVE
this dudes fatter then tha CAKE u EAT!//
now this jus 1 of this soljas diss track,
if this kid thinks hes good then he needs to drop tha crack//
no rhymes, no flow, and deffinetly no balls,
ill throw ya ass in tha water and chomp u up like JAWS//
dude couldnt get a girl if he was Kam-ron,
ill sneak in, slice ur throat, and dump u like james bond!//
Ill throw punches that will make ur knees-break,
then slice u up like a piece of cheese-cake.//
Well im done with dissin this fakester,
kids no good, hes jus a wanna b gangster!//

ok, im in. i just gotta no what multies is.

yo i need some critisim. thanks everyone

multies are sentences with ryhmes in them somethin like :quik ryhmes slick and has your girl beggin for the dick.ryhmes within the sentence

dudes as FAKE as WEAVE, u lost this so TAKE ur LEAVE
this dudes fatter then tha CAKE u EAT!//


thats a multi