dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Wed 13 Jul, 2005 10:37 pm
yo, I'll rate your **** bro, I'd give it a 8/9, your **** flowed really well!Kept it real which is always good! good job man!
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 01:16 am
yo quick that flew of the hook
**** id give that bout 9 near enough 10 outta 10 that was tight man respect for that bro now some 1 rate mine plz
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 01:28 am
Well I'm sonically, high bionically
for you dummies, ironically stupid
What are you, Cupid?
You steal my rhymes, and then you loop it
Wrong! Back this way
Follow me now, head this way
into this, while I rap on through this
For many germs, who never knew this
switches, upside down
Turn around, look in the mirror
You rap catchers are makin a error
Every inning, I'm back to the dugout
You on the field, I'm ready to bugout
like a manager, smackin up your team
Male or female, ducks who dream
of takin me, on the mic and makin me
rack up, MC's I stack up
Foreign precinct rappers need to back up
quickly, I'ma rip your brain off
Throw it down so the blood can drain off
my hands, while I wave to a fan
I'm Kool Keith, not a Bill or a Dan
but a General, equal to a mineral
Pushin a crowd, to keep on dancin
Now I'm back, to continue my verses
I'm never screamin loud with any curses
Rougly, that a child can learn
I teach kids, and ducks that burn
with a flamethrower, and how do you show a
a grass rapper, cut him with a lawnmower
Twice, into golden wheat
Ground the rest into moldin meat
and cook em, til they all well done
They not ready, they don't smell done
like fish, it ain't my favorite dish
I grab a steak and to battle I wish
a Coke MC or Pepsi I'll sip up
Drop your face and bring the other lip up
Watch, while I stun and amaze you
Kick out lyrics that truly'll daze you
I'm your boss, the one that pays you
Nine to five, all ducks are hired
And when I come MC's are fired
No pay, no way today
You're an employer with nothin to say
But I can say, one thing for sure
I think it's pitiful, that you had taunted me
Your girl sulkin, she wanted me first
before you was thought about
Back in the days, when I taught about
science, the real construction
No other solo team or production
did that, or got with that
I play brain ball usin a bat
to your skull, smack it out the park
I rhyme bright, and you're in the dark
with shadows, hallucinating battles
To compel, the capital T, as in Triky
Combined in trikstR
Rap metal is terminal chief
and joy, squashin the beef
on time. and my mic will stay on
For any roach or germ who wanna pray on
a weakness, but my uniqueness
has a way to show that I'm slicker
Creating rhymes, you have to be, quicker
and versatile on the microphone

yo rate it plz especially eryk / quick / and truth yo thanks bro's
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 01:37 am
yo Id give that bout 7 or an 8 bro, you used alot of multies, that's good man, once you master that then you'll be movin up.
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 07:39 am
yo **** i may be sounding dumb here but ive not been rapping for ages ive been rapping for not even a month and i dont even know what multies punches or what everything else is
some 1 tell me plzz Sad
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TheTruth 2
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:28 am
multies are when you rhyme more than one syllable at the end, like: instead of rhyming sick and dick, rhyme like f***in sick and suck my dick...and punches are punches, idk...
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:34 am
oo ite cheers bro but **** thers more **** which i need to know :S fuk it now i know what multies are i can improve on them and **** i dont even know what idk is i aint heard no 1 english ever say that lmao yo but cheerz man
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dj quik kid
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:39 am
yeah i give that about a 8 trickster u comin up keep doin your thing
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 09:40 am
cheerz bro but **** i need to be at yours and truth and eryks level man im far of it so ill just do my own thing for the mean time
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 11:04 am
**** man this is BOORING any 1 wanna battle ??? just spit at me and ill hit back who ever it is peace out
and ANY1
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dj quik kid
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 11:05 am
yeah i'm lookin 4 a battle 2
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 11:12 am
quik u wanna battle ? if yeah you spit 1st
peace bro
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 11:51 am
Now with the temperature rising, the beat, is just driving/The wizard on the mic/ is fully emphasizing
Red Alert,/ goes bezerk,/ make you jump and jerk/
Hydroplayin relayin decayin/, and it work/
Every second captivating,/ your mind, body and soul/As the chairman of the board/ hip-hop, and just totally/set to protect, send right, or do reset/
your justta nother sucker in the way / no stoppin /no running East or West / Best gradius remains,/ with more/, I have a fade/
that'll stay to amaze/, for weeks, and many days/
on the mic I'm always ready/, my job, is to destroy the wackest / you i set to devestate
With TrikstR / , I stop, annihilate / raps feeding to give you bait / I'ma sniper, when unloadin my gun
I got U the sucker paranoid / and your on the run /
to the next corner,/ while I shoot up a forest /
out of nowhere, bullets coming your way /Just duck, grab your girl and sway /I'm aimin, I'm searchin for the brain / that I need to destruct any lyric combined / as well as designed / to behold, and tell the untold / I'm crazy, destructive any radical / I love static, I got a automatic / If a sucker don't believe,/ touch my pocket / padding, just feel the steel barrel / Please look out, and watch your next cookout / while I stake out, and find a person to rust / rubble you up to goldust / im causing irritation / spilling and poisonous like radiation / im eating you up like a licourish stick / this isnt magic it aint no magic trik / im just hitting at you dj quick / if you hit back make sure your sick / rapping im new to this / im already sick rapping have you dug under in an abyss / and when i kill ill be gone asif i never exist


yo u dont have to spit back bro im just bored and no disrespet or anything quick safe man
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dj quik kid
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 12:12 pm
aight here's my first rap

after this battle you gonna be covered in scars/i bust at you more than porno stars/i run your house,your block and your apartment/leave the rap game cuz this aint your department/my ryhmes make you sick like they're toxic/your girl don't love you she gave me her locket/afraid of real gangstas cuz they hold the metal/at your funeral you get nothin not even a flower petal/i'm from the place wit the collapsed world trade/i drop more bombs on you than the Blue Angel air raid/don't come here cuz i'll kill you on my block in the hood/but if you come if you don't got a bulletproof vest it aint all good/to beat me your gonna need more than guts/you gonna need the eye of a tiger,the heart of a lion,and king kongs nuts/you get off the subway and get assaulted/i'll have u jumpin fences like you pole vaulted/i'll leave you bleedin in the street or the dirt/you so dumb you met a hooker and started to flirt/you need to learn to look before you leap/my time is money your talk is cheap/you been cut and lyrically slammed/change your name to phil cuz u been viva la bammed/i'm from nyc so i'll throw you off the brooklyn bridge/i make you freeze up like you got stuck in the fridge/you got nothin so u try to stay hood rich/i got people to kill you and people to dig your ditch/why you wanna battle me is a mystery like the smile of mona lisa/when your mom aint doin me she just another skiza/you can respect me and if you don't bite me/i had your girl sayin just do it like we was doin it at nike/i have shells droppin on you so u think it's rainin/from this battle what are you gainin/in my glocks i got more shells than a beach/winnin this battle is out of your reach/i controll you like your a puppet on wires/you need a polygraph test to prove you aint a liar/stay in england get protection from buckingham palace/i'm a star so u'd think i come from dallas/u just a little kid shakin in his pajamas/your lost here like a penguin in the bahamas/i put u in the hospital surrounded by nurses and doctors/this is a test for you so i guess i'm your proctor/i put a cast on your ass like a brooken foot/you can't teach me how to rap cuz i wrote the book/i hunt you so u wish you were in the slammer/i took your mom to Saint Louis so i could Ram her/you coulda versed any other rapper but it's me you chose/i'll rip you from your head down to your toes/i hit you wit bullets so it's like your holy/i'm stoppin you from reachin your goal like i'm a goalie/i have your girl exhausted and sticky/when it comes to suckin dicks you aint picky/i'll have you so hurt you'll need a neck brace/then knock you to the ground and crip walk on your face
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dj quik kid
 
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Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 12:12 pm
yo just a friendly battle man we cool aight peace
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 12:17 pm
yeah sure well all cool friendly battle cos we bored lol well ima spit back at yours now
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dj quik kid
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 12:29 pm
aight
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dr eryk
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 01:48 pm
trikstR you battlin' quik, good luck man! you'l need it. lol.. no offence,....well im out,, just checkin' in aight playa's, well i'm out
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MC TrikstR
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 02:06 pm
in your 1st line you said something right / me and your mum like it up tight / in your mums bed is the only time im covered / up close and personal together we smothered / whilst your spitting out toxic im spitting out acid / burn your skin away way only cos my flow is placid / and another thing you are making me sick / slipping and tripping over your rhyme like a slippery dick / but your name should be changed cos you aint dj quick / i seen faster with a man on a walking stick / but take my bitches locket / she justta ho so stick it in your pocket / her looks are disgusting, take out your eye sockets / i have more fun with your mum in out i insert my rocket / here i am ripping it outta you line by line / as i shine and twine / its called beauty devine / elite MC and sweet rhymes we combine / no 1 can refign / and i rise from dead pick up the red rose petal / cos i killed your 1st rap put em to a slumber settle / give you the petal / cos the only thing hard you pack is a baby's plastic kettle / you live in poverty thats why you come from the fallen trade / your in need of desperate aid / but your wasted material ill just finish you with my lyrics hitting with an impact bigger than a grenade / im hitting out these barz ina fleet better than the crusade / now it need to be heavily laid / your raps i just evaded / now you i just invaded / dropping bombs like the angel air raid / then what you just said you expected to be a disaster / fukk it ill patch it up with a sticky plaster / mow it down in my combine harvester / there you go done / but my rhyme only just begun / if you thought you were already severly outdone / then think again your only outrun / when i entered your pussy hood / i killed every1 of you bitches and still stood / no cuts or a scratch / you met more than your match / cos my rhymes dismantling ya like a wrestling match / had you running reaching to the safety hatch / but i dragged ya back / hit you up but this wernt an attack / it was more bombs hitting you than in iraq / and i never needed the eye of a tiger i hadda eye of a hawk / i watched ya from all angles far and close walked over your rap asif it were babytalk / but you gotta admit it was small talk / you think your **** was an assault / ive turned you around and now you've faulted / your rhyme all fukked up and defaulted / take you and raps back and get sorted / and i lay on the floor / but what for?/ so you say i was bleeding / when im the 1 here succeeding / your failing and exceeding / but anyways ill be killing you proceeding / just keep reading / you say your from the NYC / you put yourself to shame im from the UK and giving you the 3 degree / you will be beaten i guarantee / you may disagree / but half way through you were taken down like a bomb to rock structure 'debris' / and im hotting up / throw me in fridge i need cooling down / ill be standing here watching your blood flow pouring into the death cup / you have shells falling as its raining / but im here still remaining / bitch dont stand there and start complaining / fucc of and go do some training / and i cut the wires attached them to you / your my puppet / and i realised you remind me of the fat pig from the muppets / but look i think i ripped your verse too much / this battle in my hand i clutch / but now im outta reach to you im outta touch
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dj quik kid
 
  1  
Reply Thu 14 Jul, 2005 02:40 pm
yo second spit after this we need a judge

i'll rip the vocal cords out of your throat so u stop spittin ****/quik gave your mom the dick now i got pictures of her clit/you cheap so u buy shoes that are creased/i can kill you go 2 jail then get released/you reach into your pocket 2 shoot me and like an unfinished puzzle your missin a piece/i move ounces and you move grams/this is like paperview on WWE cuz u got SummerSlammed/on bad rappers like you don't get me started/you spit hot air out of your mouth like your head just farted/i take shots at you like i'm reggie miller/your mom is attracted to me like bannanas to a gorilla/you versin me so now the bar is raised/it's like i'm a dj here cuz u were Just Blazed/its clear from your frantic **** your mind is crazed/i'll have the crips on you like they see a blood/then take the blood that spilled and cause a flood/you just took my rap and flipped it/all the **** you wrote look like it's scripted/that grenade you hit me wit you forgot to pull the pin/i'll cut you up dump your body in different trash bins/i stand on stage and rip mics out of your hand/only thing you master of is the killed rappers land/i'll lay you out like i did bak to finish you/right now i got one purpose to diminish you/you remind me of gonzo wit the big nose/speakin of which thats the only thing you blow/u don't pop **** spray it or dump slugs/you just get stepped on by my lugz/don't worry your mom will make it better wit lots of hugs/quik kid makes you skid so u need butt plugs/eryk said good luck and u gonna need it/your mom aint home cuz she takes the dick and eats it/as for your girls locket i didn't keep it/ i pawned it at my local corner store/he said where did i get it i told him i got it from a whore/i told him who it was and he said that whore is a bore/i'll make you dodge bullets like your playin hopscotch/i don't gotta say anything and your mom is already at my crotch/i don't gotta pay her she does it for free/you whiter than the snow people use to skee/she says to me your dick is amazing/my son can't get any so he does online dating/i saw you in my hood lying in an alley/your last verse was like your grand finale/are you gay like you came from cali/cuz i saw u in the back of some guys denali/can't battle alone so get your friends/i know your worried about how the battle ends/will you win well it all depends/if the judge of this battle isn't wearin his contact lense/and can't see straight so he can't tell who's the victor/i got you beat so i'll send you an autographed picture

yo truth and eryk judge this battle
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