fukking hell solja or punchliner does it really matter shut the **** up or il spit for ya or even maybe at ya
lol
HAHAH **** dont make me laugh ill battle you 2 now me and ruthles and you 2 but man you 2 went on like couplea bitches going on 4 eva bout who gnna spit so me and ruthless we'll give you a 2 on 2 hopefully it'll shut you up
lmao but hay man i aint hating so peace out
yo it dont take no motha fuckin skill to do this ****...fuckin stupid ass u can sit there and re-read ur ****...actin like u a legend, the **** r u
fuk it solja lets battle ill spit 1st bro
MC TrikstR wrote:fuk it solja lets battle ill spit 1st bro
do wtf u gotta do yo, like i said this bull **** prooves nothin...see me 1on1 in reallity, ill have ur ass lookin like kirby..whole face turnin pink and red after the battle...fagget ass
yo, what's poppin' everyone, damn you guys write alot, **** I woke up and theres like 10 pages to read, I was like damn..... anyways you guys are ratin' peoples raps thats koo', wonder if I should spit and have you guys rate it... hey, Does anyone wanna battle me?
think bak2 finish you is gone. lmao..
if you wanna battle here are rules:
1. 2 rounds each
2. unlimited bars
I'll even spit 1st aight.
yo, ruthless and trikstR good battle man! guys did good! I give you props on that!
nah im out tho...bout to go sumwhere...ill hit yall up lata...PeAcE
theprofessor wrote:verse 1
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most of you die
on the first line
cut your vital signs
with my venomous spit
im gonna end these scripts the way there started
makeing you retarded
lets step it up one more time
a gore filled ryhme
my pages made with land mines
dislocating your spine
no nine needed
a lyrical's cuttin you in two has you bleedin red
i won your done defeated
verse 2
verse 2 i disperse on you worse than the first
im cursed with a bloodthirst
turn your spleen green till it bursts
you like last verse
i'll kick your ass
your jaws made of glass
i was made to administer sinister gases
to kill the masses
in water war im a battleship
i rip off youre loose lips
with scripts that paralyze
realize im your demise
angers on the rise
im like a buddist monk wise
a man stabbed 20 times in his eye's die's
verse 3
verse this ones free
from me the omnious mc
go ahead and cuss me
im omnipedent
you fa*gots are impedent
you cant get hard
what are you dumb retard
this is the **** you spit
your looking for that 1 hit
im make them in every script
when you strip the truth bare
it might be a nightmare
but death is in the air
but who cares
i dont i wont its not my worry
death is commin im not in a hurry
i spit in a flurry
you doc can you cure me
naw thats ok
my jaw sprays unique ways
i dont see white or black its all gray
say what you feel
if your greedy steal
if you wanna be real
dont change no matter how strange
im deranged rearrange you like a rubix cube
were your dick should be theres a boob
i spit with no lube
it rips apart from the start
this is from my heart
my raps parralax with facts that impact exact with no time to react with a comeback
my three piece masterpiece
u know how to rate do it up
Flow: 8
structure: 9
metaphors: 10
word play: 2
creativity: 8
consistency: 8
enjoyment: 9.5
best line: verse 2 i disperse on you worse than the first//im cursed with a bloodthirst & you doc can you cure me ( lol funny)
over all: 8-9, it's an overall good rap, you did it up with multies, flows nice, good job man!
rate 1-10 except for best line write your favorite 1
yo, that's only my opinion though bro...
I'm gonna creep pon the riddim like a spider //nuff of the mine // yeah finish u of minor //I'm a cold rider // girl finder // now I'm gonna hit her with a sixtyniner // draw for my niner // bet you thought I was a first timer // Iam the roll deep ryhmer // I allways said I was gonna be a chart climber // my raps none sublimer // but solja this is too easy // who cares if your from the NYC // im rapping for the mutha fukking GB // **** ive heard better in a bee G // step to me there's none braver // but i read your 1st lyric had me cracked up like the show frasier // ill be killing you have you scream out mercy // but ill keep kicking your ass back to nursery // but now im spitting out monoxide // more poisonous than hydroxide // i could just change to acidic // flow with action packed more than the 'chronicle of riddick' // but look at the sedistic // im going ballistic // this spit simplistic // but if you decided to hit back at least make it realistic // anything you hit back // ill make it sound wack
yo eryk man we got cained in that 2 on 2 look at the result man the only we got was just the 1 from me lmao shiit but now i know not to battle you
and that spit was to solja man solja thats justta loadda **** i posted but still i bet ya cant even hit back but yeah it was a gd battle eryk and quick bro but 2 times in a row **** eryk i aint ever battling you again HELL NO am i making it 3 lmfao but yeah safe bro's it was all gd
yo and eryk TRUTHEFULLY all thses spits ive hit are a loadda bollox and everything u name it lol bt **** man i dunno what to improve on or how to you got any ideas man safe and id real appreciate it
well bro, yes it was a good bro, and I told you I'd beat you agian, lol i'm just playin' bro, and what you need to improve on, nothin' man just keep spitin' you'll get better, my only opinoin is, spit what you know! keep it real then it wel hit hard.
just a freestyle. rate it playas
yo, battle 2:2 or one on one
I spit on line, and you know your done
like black and white my styles clash(clash of the titans)
my rymes stick to you like a fukin' rash
my lyrics rock-a-fella, I spit and you dash(Damon dash)
I bust kids in battles like a baby bash
still waitin' for a battle, who's up
already killed lots, but that's not enough
you hit me, I only spit and cough
and come harder than charman, I'm the opposite of soft
all the females on your family wanna have sex with me
I could teach you a few things, You otta be standin' next to me
but bein' caught standin' wit you, only ruins my image
cause your weak like pop eye without spinach
your layin' on the ground before my raps finished
so anyone battle? I'm waitin' for a respond back
lil miss b had no ass, just a long back
last bar, then you can rate this from one to ten
anything below 5 i'm fukin' you up friend
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lmao, just playin' with the last bar, ya'll rate this aight, since you guys are ratin' raps, from 1-10. just playin' bout the "anything below 5" give me a honest answer aight.
yo i respect that man all i need is like another 2 weeks and ill be better lol hopefully ^o) lol yeah and no need to be playing cos you killed me AGAIN and easily would AGAIn lol so im out peace bro
lol my freestyle was kinda weak, just woke up playas so that's why it's weak..
**** fuckka 2 on 2
either way ill put you through
even another 1 on 1 ill have you done
**** lets havva clash
yeah ill end up witha rash
but muthha fukker youll B fuckked up like you been in a car crash
have you crying like a bitch make you go home and give your wrists a slash
**** ima kill you claim my cash
the only people you can beat are kids
but now im here landing skids
ripping it outta you cos your just another flid
and when im down taking you with me to the ground
have you down B4 me all you need to do is listen to my sound
ill have you restrained wont be able to rebound
ill be running circles through you round and round
**** i hit back have you confound
ripping your flesh like a wild hound
cos that **** illl give it a 1
cos it deserves to be printed and wiped up my bum
and ima stop here B4 i get fucced up by eryk lmFao you know i was messing eryk im just bare bored bbut naw id rate it bout 7/8 lol soz bout my rap tho
hey nice rap i give u props, concidering just yesterday u found out how to match your sox//this man dont even know his 1st name, i dont need to rap he puts himself to shame//now cmon kid u kno the truth, u dropped outta hishskool as a youth//you a dumb piece of **** with no education, your free style was the most obvious demonstration//back up close your eyes never let me see you cry, cuz ill wash u up with tidal waves and hang you up to dry//dont try to act touch wit a keyboard in front of you, cuz i bet u cant even beat lil romeo dude//dont try to cover up the fact that you got down syndrome, **** your momma the only one that thinks u look handsome//retarted ass standin up here actin coo, you aint ready for this mc foo//dont try to pull them bs games, cuz ill slap u cross the face harder then rick james (AHA)//now what you tryna do now, who you tryna b now, what you gonna do now//you gonna choke up now? you gonna smoke up now? you gonna hold up now?//this battle was over before it started, of course i can beat a dude that keeps his hair parted//can u smell that cuz im the ish, im ready for the big leagues u jus side dish//nigga you aint ready for this risin mc, you gon need mor then a ladder to even SEE ME!// NOW BACK UP AND LET THE KID EXPLODE, IMA DROP THIS MIC AND LET THIS BITCH ERODE!!!
**** u son...pussy ass lyrics, the **** outta here...itsa wrap..
^^^TO TRIKSTR
lmao, yo I'mma let that slide, cause you know what I can do. but yo bro that was uncalled for, spittin to my rap, its like your sayin' you want to battle agian! all I asked was for you to rate it bro, not reply to it. so now I'm wondin' if I should let is slide or have another go at you bro? what you want?
