be real wak ok or anything just a teaer 4 faded dat nigga smokin think he could beat me
rate mine aswell then
but yeah your's was pretty tight just extend it innit
Now TrickstR, Stop f***** wit me jus coz imma newbie iz dat da way u win ur battles battlin the UNexperienced 1z, man u not gon get n e betta like i was told u hav battle the best not jus all the rest now datz y im writin dis i aint dissin u im givin ya tips on how 2 be the best BUT ur so eazy to beat, ur so easy i took u off ur muvaf***** feet dis a freestyle u jus heard dis frm me DATZ JORDAN OG
AGAIN I JUS DID A QUIK **** RHYME
RATE PLZ
I EXPECT 2/10 @least lol
jordan the origanal how bout u battl me seeing a trickster is so easy 2 beat
NAW I G2G ND HEZ MA CUZ SO I NO HIM 2 WELL
with a rap like that your looking for the electric chair // wigger i heard better from tony blair // go back and getta major repair // say a little prayer // next time you wanna try me beware // make sure your aware // cos you just met your despair // and you and your raps no 1 givva care // any1 can take you like compressed air // i even seen better game in a koala bear // now **** of B4 i give you a bigger scare // and make sure you say your evening prayer
bitch all my lines were whack and i still killed you
punchliner ill battle you then if im so easy to beat go on then dawg spit 1st
MC TrikstR wrote:who da fuk is UnKnOwN sOlJa ????? hmm
UnKnOwN is that up and comin phenomenon, only 14 and suprisin every1. Im tha undavoca kid tryna earn respect, its all about tha street cred not who writes ur check. Im all about yall tryna rap, but dont ever act like yall ready to clap. Half of u all r sum str8 up pussies, talkin like u gon pull the trigga aint impressin me..Most yall niggas talkin bout fuckin eachothers girls, i bet u all neva seen a pussy in the whole world...back up and let the kid explode, cuz the rhymes im spittin will leave u frozen ice cold...Yall sum haters ready to front for nothin, im bout to cook yall up in my free style oven...now its a rap ima drop the mic, and yall best believe im fixin ta shine...
uhh like, 4th rap ive done in awhile lol...
kinda short
I got a radio, small and yet portable//Comfortable, with the sound in audio//Kickin, high hats just tickin
Spicy lyrics,// and words finger lickin.. good//But you know I could//Beat on steel, break tons of wood.. down//with a funky sound//Square mixer, the record is round//and turning, for the million I'm earning//Shock the rhythm//, and just keep learning//this, that is supposed to//Grab your ear, and have it move close//to you fake MC's, so you hear me clearly//I'm out yes, to damage severely
You're very far, and not yet nearly//expressing them, but you're messing them up//Your bummy rhymes, I'm dressing them up//for the battle win, like a snake I'm rattlin//The red ball with the wooden piece paddlin//MC's, stop the perpetrating//you try to swallow my raps // too gd for you to handle your regurgatating // my raps you should be acknowledging // copy them from me its the best you'll ever be a rapping // im on the prowl like a predator // to devour you a fake competitor // but punchline 13 // ill have my raps cut out your spleen // attacking you like a royal marine // cos im a killing machine // gnna get served up in the schol cantene // for your battling im the source // yes atomic of course // hitting at you like a 10 man rapping force // I'm like a merchandise, a customized item // Computer rapper for ducks who wanna bite em // Stand back, watch the man recite em // It took a minute a second for me to write em // type em and hype em and psych em, up // change my rythm before i get stuck in an altitude, beyong my own level // i smack rappers and send em to the devil // on a bus return em to dust // I start infections, reduce em to pus // you wanna step to my im easy to beat go ahead feel to try and defeat me
YO THAT TO PUNCHLINE 13
