Neverending Rap Battle

Lol sup prof
Nice work Ill

All that **** about me being ghetto
Non of that's true so here the **** talker medal
You get me pissed off take it like a man
I'm not mad cuz you rap you just think that you can
But can't, your whole **** is farfetched
How can you assume that I'm crypt thats such a far stretch
throw to you a plain frag then watch it rain fag
Of your body parts so I put the words shitty lyrics on your name tag
Cops askin me questions On your ashes so I plead the fifth
I point to a garbage can n say THATS WHERE SHITTY LYRICS LIVED
I told them your backstory n every thing you did
I told them you can't get girls when you were a little kid
Then I came to moms house to honor your death
I fucked her so hard I got her hooked on crystal meth!!!

eyes of steel still what they got they eyes on
beating the war drums untill life gone
check it run tracks without nikes on
mean muggin aint a track my face aint nice on
i dont write psalms, right wrongs, write songs
over ya head , light on. lice gone . lifes don
with his mic on ... go up on stage might bomb or blow up
atlas my whole world i hold up , Hold up ,roll up smoke um like a hold up
smoke um like no mo dutch
giving to many fucks .. get ya treated like a slut
talking **** make you look butt
but ifs ands... aint got no excuse ...I dont know the booth
no john wilkes ... just know I flew the coupe never c L's
flows the truth .. temper so hot cooking frozen food
ima potent dude poking you with a potion through intervenous
inner pheonix burns
more brains in ma penis then in a genius
ninja sneakers running up walls since i bin a fetus
bare foot , in nike , in adidas
till im trippin in some cleavage
rather watch drew carey then the cleavland show
rocky in the meatlocker ,cleave um cold
leave um froze , beef for sale...
met fail he was frail ..
trembled when he said I couldnt prevail , beats for sale
leave um vegtables they edible now they beets for sale
im sellin my beats for bail ... tired of the nights id sleep in jail
now my bars twice as hard then cocaine charred .
like M with an AnR ,K like AK spray going to make its MARK
aerosol in the artery's of artistry spraying heart
get the picture ??? they start ta see .... word to TRAPJESUS
if they think they can marytr me ... this is apart a me
got this on lock till they pardon me
pardon me .. they always charging me
why they shocked... by the battery ?
assault the cults that try to mathers me
making every rapper see
king shits and majesty's
I only fret over guitars
stratocaster strategy of the stratushere
wrestle with these thoughts like trish stratus rear
u can kiss my ass im outta here

You can teach me how to stunt while wheezing on a blunt
I'll still be a better rapper than you
You can screw a hundred cunts while putting up a front
I'll still be a better rapper than you
You can stomp on my umbrella while singing a Rihanna acapella
I'll still be a better rapper than you
You can be the best rapper and appear on the X-Factor
I'll still be a better rapper than you
You can pimp some thick fatties and thug it like Trick Daddy
I'll still be a better rapper than you

You're on crystal meth, I'm on Emerald Hill
I'm getting those super gems and diamonds on the real
Because I've always shone, Sam, you just corrode
That's what happens when too many brass balls are exposed
And considering that we're STILL rapping in stormy weather
I wouldn't be surprised if there were holes in your Armani leather
I couldn't pull broads when I was a little kid
You couldn't grow balls because you're a sissy bitch
You're spineless, so I guess that makes you a flop
If I said the word "dick", your whole face would just drop
I can erase your entire presence in a second
You "plead the fifth"? What, are you begging to a weapon?
You're just like Robin, a little too Thicke
An overzealous MC with a minuscule dick
And that's why you always have trouble looking up
Because Ills is such a hard-on, he's just fucked you up

is this punchline good?

you mothafuckas can never shine,you are not even in spectrum

It's quite good if you're talking about reflection or light.

RESPECT LOL

I'm not beggin for a weapon even if it was "Ill"
Teachin you a lesson on why you ain't real
First off,my lyrics are more clever then you
I don't have do nothin n I'll still be better then you
I grow balls all the time like 4x a time that's all it takes
Y u singing in the beginning? Who are you? DRAKE
im jeyson so "I got my eyes on you" n cut your head off at crystal lake
Ills wouldn't give you a hard on if you took pills get a hard on
Oh my bad drake, I forgot you were exposed on "I'm too far gone"
When you get those diamonds I'm stealin em is there a problem?
You "started from the bottom"n bitCH YO MOM SHOULD OF USED A CONDOM CUZ YOU STILL AT THE BOTTOM
Wingin it as I go

In qoutes are drake songs

in my Lyrics ,i use

syllable rhyme (2,3,4 or five)

worldplay (just started to use e.g black and/blackened white,amen/vitamin

cuplets,duplets etc

metaphors,similies

punchlines

alliterations

Is there anything im missing?

better then I ever bin
told me , Id never win
severin veteran lettermans
douse in accelerants
some propellerant
run tell ya friends
satens waitin im going to hell again
when ? W.I.N.
teach um to spell again
6sense and the 5th Element
I got 5's I sell fer ten
tens I sell fer twens
friends mail from pens
Hoes with no elegance
foes wit low intelligence
these rats think im an elephant
in fact im the cat that sees pussy as irrelevant
still waiting on weed, jeeze might have to sell again
**** a loss i'll never blaze a L again
**** my job
**** my boss
im a ******* BOSS
watch how you talk i'll crack ya melon in
leave you blacker then melanin
in the back a black acura Yellin when
did u crawl outta social development

Why you yelling im right here
WHY YOU YELLING in my right ear
in a flash i'll whoop ya ass faster then Light Chea
Im Bright dont go loosing Sight , Neow
it wont take a Light year
and you Getting Buzzed without the Lite Beer
im spacing , thinking is there life here ?
yelling in my face, n i got a Knife right here
u want your cut , alright slice slice , ear to ear
now he bloody might hear ...
my ass walking off stage when i drop the mic CHEA Cheers

keep it tight

off the top, I might off a cop, Off my pops , Pop and Officer for talking SWAT , swat a fly for buggin me ...pop the top an pour more drugs in me ... cut out my heart pour out pac .. if you think u thuggin me , ive got enough Ug Mug in me..to throw bowes with mugsy and Bugs Bunnys Hoe ... Peanutbutter Gutter stutter and Space Jam samwhich ..... Praise Trap Jesus ...God Damn It ...

I cant explain it , the type of **** my brain did... anxious to put a face on my fears so i can look into the eyes of demise everytime i get high ,,,, I wanna put an ass on my past so every time I walk passed i can kick it .... docs gave me a liquid enema I knew i was on some sick **** ... conflicted .. you can come get it .. im right here ,bin writing for light years .. one day the darkness will read it .. this my word heade it or kool keith it .. everytime i get heated I just wanna get baked .. believe it u wanna know MY SECRET peep this im not fake .. will not wait to develop patience ,paying penance every drip of blood that run through my tendons ... tension to keep attention . im reinventin ventin .. locked in detention after being kicked out school ... did i mention my dimensions an invention of devine intervention , im playin accension fighting zombies ... wanting nothing but peace every piece turned into a army ... this aint checkers , chess or risk ....check your wrists .. that chip implant got yea head spinning Exorcist ...executive orders signed ... like my Head psych when i tried to ride a bike to america saying i was border line , im bored a lines . my sorta rhymes , aaorta sword'll shine excalibur ... lets cut the act.. or i'll cut your ass n cut the crap ... im outta hurrrr ... end scene ... soon to be heard my WORD

Honestly when i first started I looked up to you
Until you said " **** a loss"'then I lost total respect for you
Yeh n you are a boss, the top boss of faggets
Gay men attract you like two opposite magnets
Ills like" i don't like females I like the fat males"
A girl comes with a story of 2 fat guys" omg tell me the details"
I'll deep nail you on a steep rail, for christmas I got you a coffin off of retail
Your words are like eurene but thats cuz you got a piss mouth with a tooth gone
You went to a store to buy a dildo" i got a 10% discount with my tranny coupon'
Lol..your garbage IM cutting YOU open like a draw bridge I'm the steak knife n your the petty sausage
Raw ****,

LOl. Good job tho ill

M I doin well I'm freestylin it took me like 15 minutes tho

Battle you?
I'll wrap you like a bandage and crank you like a hand-made Tutankhamen mask
and use a hacksaw to hand-craft you
I'll shank you and stab you from wide angles
from your packed abs to your thighs and ankles
until you're battered like the Jesus Christ statue
It's samyboy and Illustraight on another tee-off
Competing against each other in a round of team golf
You got your eyes on me? Leave off
You couldn't have them on me if you stuck them on me after plucking them clean off
You're a jack-ass at rhyming, so hi, donkey!
A child junkie who's high on weed - you want to fight, honkey?
Do the honky-tonky, shake a leg, dance a jig
Step it on your two-hind legs just like a prancing pig
If growing balls is murder then Ill's a manic anarchist
While your ass gets THAT ass kicked like a sadomasochist
Think my mind is seedy? You can't even imagine it
Even if you sunk this deep in the Atlantic
you still wouldn't find it easy to fathom it

Autistik, kicking it like coaches in sports halls
A Cavalier rolling and blowing like Novas from Vauxhall
**** a hospital, I run my own mental section
I'm mad enough to bounce from different vectors and pick up bodies like a bee collecting nectar
You can't see me, I don't belong in your circle plus you're all blind
Too busy dancing to bhangra on TV
I don't know how to beat a drum or wave my hands in the air
Go to clubs, pull sluts, cruise, ****, or match a good pair
You can't crack my codes, your imagination's not there
You prefer materialistic guys with shades and cropped hair
I'm numbed out, pooped the **** out, and dumbed down
Singled out, I'm backing the **** down, what now?
Hit the Hut, get a slice of pizza with some croquet salad
This ain't a rap, this is a motherfucking sombre ballad
So hoes, don't get mad
I'm just pouring my heart out like hot chocolate
but every time you drink it, you think the cocoa's bad

The matrix is like a nightmare, a Twilight Zone night scare
Travelling through this fucked-up vortex in my Nike Airs
Crazy like a rapper with dyed hair
who's been given strange looks by tentacle creatures with eye stares
That's what my story is like, full of topsy-turvy's
Whirlpools, merry-go-round's, flops and curlies
No, I haven't been puffing marijuana
Chasing the dragon, playing in the snow or guzzling anacondas
My whole life I've been cut up, just ask my barber
My autism is fucked up, just ask my mother
While I sing in this rapping song
I'm kicking ass and chewing rappers like a bag of bon's (bon-bons)
and hitting them with makatons
Pictures and words of simple objects
I picture things and word them often but people take them out of context
This is my concept
with complication and impact mixed together, so you can call that **** a com-pact

read this rap verse please,tell me if its good



(do you know?)
yall don’t know how’s it to fight to live another day
when no feeling of living is left with in you…
to try to pass a skin thick grin at ya mothers face
when your inside is too much amply that it pisses you

(and do you know?) hows it to feed your sisters epitite
when you got your own stomach empty.
In your mind you had an art gallery to picture happy life
but your reallity left you with dumbfuck mentality

(do you know?)yall don’t know hows it to fall flat from the grace,straight
to the place where you cant stand the pace,
where you race against the time to save the face
of your family but you fail

.In the day your shadow and in nights lonliness drives you insane
you inhale in the air but you feel no the oxygen to the lungs

(do you know?)yall don’t know how’s to work 9 to 5 to feed
the cravennes of your mamas daughter
and than to see your friends buying the designers jean
and prada products

(do you know?)yall don’t know hows it to spend every day in sorrow and pain
Than to sleep at night even knowin that tommorow again the day’ll pass in the same way

(Do you know?)
Yall don’t know hows it when the pain starts to pare ental pieces of your body,
When it begins to penetrate into your soul,yall don’t know hows it to grow up
Without parental heed ****

rate it out of 10 please