dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Sat 4 May, 2013 05:16 pm
@thedarknova,
but i have to agree with king
that really wasnt the best you could have done
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WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Sat 4 May, 2013 05:24 pm
@thedarknova,
Well even vocalized if your going with a set structure

8 syllables
8 syllables
8syllables

If you do something slightly out of that order it's not a big deal cuz you can easily switch a double time flow or even just take 2 lines with one punch but like

8
8
8
8
23
8

It just runs on

You could have tried to either word those in a fashion where it would rhyme halfway through the line so it still flowed or shorten the phrasing so it didn't take up so much
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thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Sat 4 May, 2013 09:48 pm
hmm i see well i aint gonna bitch like dlc lol hey king we still got a round 2 and 3
Gliitch
 
  1  
Reply Sun 5 May, 2013 09:07 am
Whenever I run in a pun it's so fun
Like all those mothaf#ckas who are dumbstruck
It's dumb luck, I'm done, yup
I'm done, (what)
You heard me (no responses)
I'm hurting! (No more cautions)
Stop deserting! (To be honest)
I'll rephrase my wording!! (I want this!)

Caught this! It's on my line,
Be cautious! Don't lose the rhyme
Cause in due time before a new crime
Gets committed this is your sign
Are you a nazi? Doin things that seem copied
Like burnin bodies after gassin em in the lobby
(Mmmmmf!!!)
I'm rocking, talking, shocking, locking
Out the cocky, idiots who want me, caught (see?)
Now they're flocking to mock me
For a slip up, just a pick up,
Just a spit up, just a quick up?
Equip ya like it fits ya but it gets ya, wrappin
Around you like you're a Christmas tree
Here's my wish list, see, I am finished, Free!
Free as a bee with no wings
A bird who can't sing
A married man who can't afford a ring
Cha-Ching. Made a dollar off the lottery
Watering down my sorrow with the dollars
Founding fathers forgive me, I'm hindering
On competitioning so quit your petitioning
I'm finishing and winning, blue ribbon see?

Ima grab an AK and may say may-day
I can't play your gay game of pay-day
My rants say they portray money
As abundant as honey,
you see it on our shelves
You see it on our homes
You see it on our selves
If money is the root to evil,
Then well, welcome to hell!
Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 5 May, 2013 01:11 pm
@Gliitch,
I'm gonna live my life how I want for what it's worth
Hell isn't a place of punishment, it's on Earth
The shadows can't push me around, I push them first
They haunt me in my dreams, but I give them the worst
This autism of mine won't keep me from achieving
It was Cassius Clay that said you can believe it
So all I have to do is to get my mind to conceive it
One step further up the ladder and I'll achieve it
Like a masked magician, I keep my skill a secret
People ask me about my trait, I don't speak it
I keep my mouth shut about it like cowardly weaklings
The light keeps me awake from the day right through the evening
Accomplishment is a feat that I have to master
It takes a few giant steps to make it there gradua-
-ly, so I ask you to give me a bit of leeway
Then I can turn myself around like a disc by a DJ
I don't give a **** about the "he say" and "she say"
"You're weird" and "Elvis is great" every single weekday
I mean, Elvis is great and all, so what's weirdness?
I'll put his Suede shoes on my feet and I will wear them
I'll take a black man's clothes and put them on my back
I'll take an Indian's robe and use it as a hat
I'll take a Chinaman's eyes and use them as guides
I'll take a Jap's sword and use it to cut rice
I will paint my face with a Frenchman's palette
And make the colours stick for days like David Blaine's magic
Respect is not just a trait, it's a habit
So we should never compete like a toon duck and rabbit
Caste and skin doesn't come into the subject
We should treat a racist like an object and **** it
Gliitch
 
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Reply Sun 5 May, 2013 02:14 pm
@Illustraight,
Nice, dude

Talkin boutta racist? Face it, we hate it
There's no whites or blacks
No fights no japs
Racism? There's even RIGHTS for that
So when I write my tracks
It's to dislike that crap
(What tracks?) **** that-
There are no Americans
No heirs no kin
That inherit them
There are no Russian
No country-crushin
No lovely touchin
There are no Africans
Their back again
Because of blacker skin
There are no Asians
No Caucasians
No Canadians
No races
No Latinos
No old Grecos
No puertoricans
No Mohicans
No weak old
No cheap cold
It's all one world
Hey, it's all one people

It's all one face
For the human race
All the same base
All the same taste
Same composition
Striving for competition
Some lost within it
Like a loss of rythm
But still alive and kickin
So history books stay written
And rappers keep spittin
And the rich keep up the business
And lawyers keep shittin
And the boys keep clippin
This isn't about race
This is all about livin
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thedarknova
 
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Reply Tue 7 May, 2013 08:19 pm
yeah im still on that crystal light mothat fucka Wink
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Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 02:25 am
@theprofessor,
https://soundcloud.com/illustraight/pink-panther-in-new-york
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King123
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 03:52 am
@thedarknova,
ANDDDDD i agreed to a round 2 and 3... when???
King123
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 04:24 am
@King123,
your still on your first...
you think im gonna give you another verse
that was terrible
and im sure everyone can agree with me on that
that was Pathetic

seriously
what kinda rapper are you

dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 04:28 am
@King123,
well this is a meaner version of what i said
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Gliitch
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 08:17 am
@King123,
Who are you.
thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 02:45 pm
yo thanks monkey i didnt know that syllable played so much into structure but now i got it my next verse all have nine syllable bars
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dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 04:37 pm
@Gliitch,
shut up Wrathe
Gliitch
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 04:48 pm
@dfc100,
That took you longer than i expected. That was quite rude though

Please call me Gliitch
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 06:17 pm
@dfc100,
Lmao drew
dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 06:18 pm
@Gliitch,
took me long??? i never pay attention to anything unless it has something to do with me
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thedarknova
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 07:21 pm
@Gliitch,
hey wraith nice to see you again thought you left haha
Gliitch
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 09:33 pm
@thedarknova,
I forgot my password. XD Plus "Wraithe" sounded weird. I'm Gliitch now.

Sup my cousins! Did we ever finish that competition a while back?
dfc100
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2013 10:49 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
lol
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