dfc100
 
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Reply Sat 20 Apr, 2013 04:00 pm
@King123,
hmmm idk

whitey might be a better person to feed this battle verse
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thedarknova
 
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Reply Sat 20 Apr, 2013 07:14 pm
yall are going insane on me cuz i went insane on him lol yo i wasnt really disrespecting him or going crazy i was intensionally saying that to piss him off so he would really go hard on me not to get everyone all pissed off and butt hurt and yes i did put that up to be judged i just was in a bad mood and kinda took it out on some dude i dont know and im sorry for that but im still gonna have to leave you butt raped in the battle Wink
Downloadable Content
 
  1  
Reply Sat 20 Apr, 2013 10:39 pm
You guys are a bunch of bitches.
"I be catching bitches, while bitches be catching feelings."

Man the **** up
Bambino
 
  1  
Reply Sat 20 Apr, 2013 11:28 pm
@Downloadable Content,
xzibit
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Illustraight
 
  1  
Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 02:34 am
Journey Into The Mind of a Snitch

[Intro (consisting of a Sammy The Bull documentary sample)]

[Verse 1]
I've just been inducted into a family
That means that I'm accepted as a member so happily
But I don't really like the way their enterprises run
And I know that if I rat, then it's clear my time is done
So I've no choice but to stay right and loyal
These mafia rules have got me chained in solid coils
But at the same time, my top status has me spoilt
like a 13-year-old English aristocrat boy
This isn't a game, I'm down with the dogs
until the dogs die out and there is no-one else to follow
It seems like part of me didn't want to be in this
But another part of me has got to kick up to the business
There's an ancient rule that I can't turn government witness
I'll seal my own fate by being shot by the hit-men
I'm a made man, but the cops are making me flip
and they're trying to turn me into a motherfucking snitch

[Hook]
I'm telling on YOU, I'm telling on my CREW
I'm telling on the boss too, 'cause I'm a snitch
I'm telling on HER, I'm telling on HIM
And I'm telling on THEM, 'cause I'm a snitch
I'm telling on US, I'm telling on WE
**** it, I'll even tell on ME, 'cause I'm a snitch
I'm telling on EVERYBODY here and there
And I don't motherfucking CARE, 'cause I'm a snitch

[Verse 2]
A snitch is what I am, but you just don't know that
A grass underneath a black suit, it's a known fact
You see me walking round, conducting what I need to conduct
But unbeknownst to you, I'm wired underneath the trunks
Right now, that wire is recording
everything that's said by all the bosses in the mobster office
I was a Luciano, but now I'm Salvatore
who has all the evidence of your plans before me
You can do everything that you can to stop me
'Cause once you find out I'm a sneak, you're gonna have to drop me
You can send your most loyal hit man to top me
The police will find my body stuffed inside a bag of laundry
I don't agree with your ways of thinking
Some of your crew are aggressive and hot-tempered, Anastasia-smitten
The government's got taps on you, and I'm responsible for it
Do you know why? 'Cause I'm a snitch!

[Hook]
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King123
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 02:50 am
@thedarknova,
you think that your comment made me mad??
it didnt
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dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 07:08 am
@thedarknova,
face it dude

i've read kings verse
whitey could match him
idk about you tho
prove me wrong
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dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 09:12 am
what do you guys think of these lines

you aint on top, your on my bottom list
drain your blood for im a psychotic phlebotomist

pay attention to this last line

it wasnt me, possessed, the demons killed my wife
im going with the DEVIL because i already gave and LIVED my life
King123
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 09:31 am
@thedarknova,
call me out? i'll battle so its you and me
you'll run from this battle like you did to DFC
this didnt have to happen, just a new height risen
dont think i cant SEE you DARK?? i'm wearing night vision
battle?? you should know i'll fight
mad over criticism because you know im right

take a seat, grab a beer to relief the stress
i'll feed you when your happy, not when your on PMS
you can't win, how many times have i told ya
your a star?? but haven't blown up.. how can you be a nova
think your bad, you aint even scary
i'm lite up, man the dark dont scare me

king will leave dark and his verses both dismembered
have him repeating the same **** like a broken record
you want a war, well i'll beat ya veteran
traumatize your mind intill your left with a speech impediment
sit down you crazy bitch and eat ya medicine

i'll destroy your brain, lobotomize this zombie
verse 1 and i made it impossible for you to stop me
King123
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 09:34 am
@dfc100,
both very creative, dark lines.. i dont know what i was suppose to be looking for in the 2nd line tho.. mind if you clarify it for me??
dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 09:36 am
@King123,
thank you and yes i can clarify

ok if you noticed i put devil and lived caps

spell lived backwards

LIVED
DEVIL
King123
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 12:40 pm
@dfc100,
Ah i see what you did there
its creative... but its a basic way to put them together
in my opinion
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 01:57 pm
in all honesty I dont give a FUUUUK ...

I dont need someone with minimal skill level

and little to no knowledge about hip hop to attempt to explain to me , that they didnt understand half of what I have said

its my gift an my curse

I write in a way that you dont get the first time round unless your a hip hop head or a real rapper

and yea , its not basic in any sense and therefore not easy for the listener to comprehend right away

I became enraged because first thing he said to me was there is no story

and actually to be specific - that one had a story line , followed 1 basic idea

im sure a few caught that


MUCH LOVE

and FUUUK U AND HAVE A NICE DAY Smile
WhiteMofoMonkysmugla
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 03:21 pm
@dfc100,
Try something like "the devil bent me backwards and lived my life" draw attention to the fact that your reversing it because if you didn't point it out I would have just thought it was a coincidence
theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 03:58 pm
@theprofessor,
live each breath like the last , this life is mine , try to take my shine , my brilliants will blind, try to take to my rights , i'll do all I have left , came in this world like **** you life , wassup death ,ive bin fucked over , fucked around , ******* down , u think i havent fucked up yet? , you can stuff ya threats back down ya puppet neck, theres something you dont ******* GET , like respect an pussy , u can walk in my shoes , I leave ya muppet stretched, like armstrong , stand there getting fucked like a hard on , dick I aint no pussy , who u tryin to get hard with ? rip ya heart out ya carcus , shove it up your arses, screaming im a bloody artists , get the picture , its that time a the month **** , where I stitch ya, lips shut , split ya sisters , zip up , a zip puff , spliff dutch , like im rolling amsterdam in greenland eating green eggs an ham , roll through bethlaham like wheres the bacon? man , fate in the palm a ya hands ,psalms , bombs , pom poms,is common ta man islam , arnold palming , or arnold shwarwenaggin ? another regan era dragging terror cross the nation , inaugeration operations ,tolerating, incarcerations , interagations , and terrorist threats that scare the patients , sick, ugh , sickest part , hospitals feed disease , from the food you eat to the air we breathe , barely breathe , poison in the mainstream , trying to poison ya brains schemes , tell you every nights a night mare , so when you day dream, they can catch ya sleeping , one eye open till the day he reapin ,what he sow, fabric of spacetime wrapped around the soul ,when ya down n low, aint much ground to go. so u keep pushing that dirt , moving that earth , looking out gods eyes , thinking wow , look at those humans at work....
theprofessor
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 04:24 pm
@theprofessor,
id tell you i raped a bitch but she liked it , up in her head im a psychic
fuckin her dead with a knife tip , drive like i use to, without a license
stole my first second an third mic , born in a canadian cuntseed in the country of the third riech, ,stole my hurse killed it , reverse the earth till it revert to pillage , catch sipholous till it burns an sperm ya village
i will kill kids, mothers an fathers , undercovers n squatters , well im undercovers with ya daughters , getting head from grand kids , in wheel chairs I know you cant stand it ,internet rappers say dont spam it , i'll go ham bitch on ya whole damn click till im famished , or ya fams damaged , jesus christ , u aint nothing but a lamb sandwhich, mmm tasty you dont wanna face me , I leathermask gacy , leave pills buried in a doh boy , no pastry,pasty white AZ ,lace the mic , with some acid , lace my casket with cassettes n a old school tape deck
King123
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 04:29 pm
@theprofessor,
your just mad because no one has the guts to tell it to you

i was giving my thoughts GOD damn
if that sets you off.. how will you ever deal with having fame.. if you get there.. \
people are harder then me.. hell i wasnt even hard... IM FUCKIN SORRY For not being on this site to fuckin know you

i just joined a week ago

i was only trying to help you
but if that makes you mad.. then i wont feed you nore
if that makes you happy
since you cant take it
dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 04:31 pm
@WhiteMofoMonkysmugla,
hmm thats a pretty good idea.. thanks whitey
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dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 04:33 pm
@theprofessor,
dude wtf -_-

you better record this
this IS SOME SICK RHYMES IN THIS

i have to hear it
if you can make an audio
i would love it

nice fuckin lines

in wheel chairs I know you cant stand it

lol nice
keep goin.. im workin on a piece now
should be done in a few days
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dfc100
 
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Reply Sun 21 Apr, 2013 04:36 pm
@King123,
no one has the guts to tell him??

prof is a hip hop god dude
we dont have to tell him **** about anything
want to know why
because he already knows

i wouldnt pick a fight with him.. intill you Start improving

how is that

on wait
Im My Opinion
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