@Heartless X,
Your Rhymes Wont Help You Hang With Me But This Rope Can!
diggin it
DUSTY - u bin gone too long man lolol How u bin ?
@Heartless X,
I started you and I'll finish you
Now watch me squash and wash this bug off my tennis shoe
You couldn't snap back in a new hat on a trampoline
I amp the scene, you're getting smoked like a gram of green
You couldn't make up a rhyme if you worked for Maybelline
You're a gay fiend, I ain't listening so don't say anything
I'll show up in Africa and throw a Giraffe at ya
snap ya neck in half and laugh at ya...haha
@theprofessor,
good chillin working on these rhymes
@Dudu C,
Lol
Attack Ya, No Need For A Punch When I Can Slap Ya
In Africa You'd Get Clips Shot At Ya Ass, Porn Directors
My Wordplays, I Say It Well
School Dis Kid, Maybe ''Add-A-Lesso(adolasense)'' Like He Around Da Age Of 12
Im Sick In Da Head, With Some Brain Disease
You Aint Sick No More Like Hospital Release
Basically You Been Discharged...
Still Waiting On Lift Off While I Done Hit Mars
You Swallow More Nuts Than Elephants In A Zoo
Even If U Spent a day in The Freezer You Wouldn't Come Out Cool!
@theprofessor,
sick ****.... good for an army scheme.. diggin it
PROF.. since wrathe isnt here anymore or whereever he is.. can i post the verse i sent to you when we were suppose to battle in the tournament.. or should i keep it for later
ALPHABET AVATAR ..... PART 2
Z
Zippy zebras zinging, zaniest Zippo zombies zapping
Zoned zootoxin Zorros, zouking Zoroastrian zaddiks
Y
Yahweh yoddlers yodelling, yelling Yemenis
Youthful Yardie yobbos yanking yellow yolks, yelping, "Yippee!"
X
X-Men's Xavier, XXL Xena's
Xmas xerophyte x-aminers, x-raying xeran's (xeranthemums)
W
Wanderers waiting worthiness when war wanders
While World War weapons wrongly worn, wolves wonder
Wishfully wishing war would whisk, weeping
Weak-willed women wail, wasting waterworks, weakening
Wounded whitewashers whining while windy winters wisping
Wild West wackos walloping wimpy wastrels, whipping
Wooden walkers wringing with wet Wellington's
Whopping weights weathering, wilting weak worlds, withering women
V
Violent Vietnamese veteran vultures vowing
Volunteering vile viruses, vacuuming victims, volleying
Valleys vacated, vixen vegetables vomiting
Visions vaporise viewers violently, volatile lay
U
Urban usurping, unemployed urinating
Universally unstable uproars, unmistaken
Uniforms unforgettable, unique understatements
Underhanded unreliable unions under ultimatums
T
Taliban thieves training terrorist tigers
Treasonists turning tables, trusters turned tyrants
Treacherous turncoats tricking, throwing totalitarians
Tactics trigger tragic tragedies, taking them
Tempers towering toward timid turkeys, tech thrown
Tough titans toppled, tactically teed telephone
Telegrams telling that the tolls towered, terrible tumbles there
Tourists taxed, toppled, temperaments tougher than Tupperware
Tyson tackling targets, thinking threatening thoughts
Tipping tools, taxing these tomato-thinking tarts
S
Sing-a-song-a-sixpence, sacks stashing skunks
Smoking slowly, slouching slothfully, sleazy sluts
Settling safely, some street-shy shitheads slacking
Sexually-stimulated sessions supervening, semen-sacking
Stinky snakes slithering slowly southwards
Skanks stuffed, shanked, Scarface-slashed, scars sour
Sausage ships sneaking, subway-swimming, speaking
Shakespeare sentences spoken, sassy streetwalkers screaming
Skilful street savant showing skills significantly
Superior savvy smart scientist scrambling stuff sedulously
Smacking sarcastic students, spitting similes
Suffering succotash, severing stupid swingers similarly
R
Richie Rich runts revealing round rings, ridiculous
Raised rank referees regulating, realisticness
Rocketing rackets riveted, run regularly
Russian Roulettes relayed, rewound recklessly
Runaway Romanians rallied round
Refugees ramming rambunctiously, roaring "Rawr!"
Ragamuffins rambling, ripe reefer rollers rigid
Robot receptionists rewarded, recommended
Remorseless rebels rebelling, ripping reputations
Ratios remarkable, revolutionary rapists
Q
Quiet quaint quails quacking, quirky queers quibbling
Queens questioning, quoting quick Qu'Ran quotes, quizzing
P
Party poopers popping painful pestilence pathetically
Predators playing possum, proper people pay penalties
Perverse penises penetrating peanut pussies
Pumping pea-sized pops propelling pain, pushy
Playboy pricks playing pranks, pandemonium
Prescribing perplexity, puzzling prey, picking, poking 'em
Poems poignant, potent, paralysing punks
Punchlines perplexing picky pansies, packing panic pistol-pumps
Pencils, pens, paper planning piss-proof paragraphs
Painting paradoxical pictures, paving personal paths
O
Overcoming obvious octopus obstacles
Optimistic Orthodox oracle, obviously optical
Outrageous officers opposing, oranges open
Obliterating opposition oxed overboard over oceans
N
Negativity never needed, nail naive nympho nays
Naughty ninja nemesis nuking notorious names
Nanny neighbours nagging noisily, napping nocturnally
Nasty negroes nibbling numb-nuts nervously
M
Mean mercenaries mocking masters
Mindlessly making missiles monopolising, major mine-crafters
Modest modern modulator mind-mesmerising masses
Managing much more mentally, my masterpieces madden
Minding Mister Muscle macho morons madly masturbating
My mannerisms mould me mildly, mitigating
Moderate man mastering modish methods
Mapping matters momentarily, making merits
Macadamian macaroni meddling muckers
Maintain manners mentioning me, motherfuckers!
L
Listen, ladies! Lustfully loving lippy limeys
Licking long lizards lovingly, little lychees
Look lively, lavish lulus like losing lives?
Lumps laminating legs, lookers letting loopy lies
K
Kit-Kat kittens killing Khalifa's
Kinky Kuwait kitties knocking knees, kissing kebab killers
Kung-fu karate Koreans kicking Kenny's
Katrina Kaif kids kidding kindergarten .....
J
..... Jenny's
Jailbirds jiving, jewellery jackers jumping jovially
Jacketed Jacks jabbing jills jealously, jacking Joeys
Japanese juniors juggling, Jumping Jacks, jeepers!
Jerusalem juggernauts justifying Jesus
I
Illustraight is ill, inside intelligence
Intermediate intellectuality is intrepid
Ill's information is intricately imaginative
Imagining innovative ideas, Illmatic
Impressing infants inventing ill ink, incredible
Infinitely implementing imprints invisible
Intelligently, Illustraight is invincible
Idiosyncratic incognito individual
H
Heretic hotheads hollering, hearts hardened
Heroin hopheads hopping, hardly honest
Hear a hardworking, humble, harmless harmonist
Harness hotter hardness hot-boxing hostile hardmen
Harmonious heaven harmonised, hosts highest
Higher is He, holler hosannah, His Holy Highness
G
Glorified gangsters gripping glittery golden gats
Grazing grandchildren, grandpas, grandmas, gnats
Glamorous goblins getting great garments graciously
Gifted guys gain growth, guaranteed, given gracefully
Gritty government gangs generating graphics
Girls going go-go, gold-getters gagging
F
**** fake fiends fibbing, fearfully flipping firm fingers
Forefront fighter following fundamental fixtures
Fibbers fronting, frightfully feeble
Feed (a)fore-mentioned fuckers fellow faeces, feed 'em
E
Energetically ecstatic, elevated
Exhibiting excellent Eminem education, elated
D
Dunces decimated, dedifferentiated
Device data dismantled, discombobulated
Dirty dunces decapitated, demon Devil Dante
Damaging dismal dogs, Destruction Derby
C
Charming, charismatically collating cool concepts
Cunning Claude Cat conjuring clever comments
B
Being brilliant brings bigger betterment
Bringing better Benjamin's benefits
Bye bye ....
A
..... Arrivederci, auf-wiedersehen, antio
Alphabet avatar - adios, amigos!
@Heartless X,
It's too hot like I dropped a match box in a Gingers twat
Then ate her out with butane and threw flame like a dragons snot
Now that's a fire crotch, gimmie a lighter watch
I'm on the empire with a jet Pack flying a kite on top
Punches hit so hard you'll land on mars and drop
Try and attack DC you'll need an emergency surgery to learn to eat
I flatlined this faggot he ain't even got a heart to beat!!
Or Artieries to breathe, The art of DC is hard to see
But read between the lines
This pussy prick is pussy as clits, pussy as it gets
Come over here and let me give that pussy a kiss
I'm blasting off loads laughing my ass off while ya girls coughing on my choad
Jumping on my dick like she's jacking off toads
I take backRoads and load fat bowls drinking keystone smoking moloboro's
This African is on UNICEF begging for sum change to get so he can rip a spliff
He admitted his brains sick I think he's challenged, I got his girls pussy wetter than a half gallon, Im sorry they made you believe you had talent, cuz u don't and beat DC? Yea right you won't...
@Heartless X,
Wu-Tang is nothing to me, I’m Illustraight
I don’t play chess, practise kung-fu or swing a blade
I’ll smoke you like marijuana and leave you in a daze
I guess that’ll teach you assholes not to stay in your place
It seems that ****’s the same but always a different day
I got rhymes that will kill fugazis in a million ways
So any of you lames who have something to say
I suggest you step forward now and spit it in my face
Every day’s a winding road like Road Runner in a chase
The coyotes plot to run me down, kill the phase
I’m like Elvis when I sway, I get the chickens amazed
But like eggs in a chicken-farm, I’m sure to be getting laid
If a criminal can flip a finger to keep the pigs away
A postman can deliver letters to every single gate
And a genius can find answers to difficult equations
Surely Ills can brush off his problem and be accepted today?
Any whores talking garbage, I’m calling them
Kick discrimination away ..... support autism!
I've been hearing a lot of commercial artists for a while
And it’s clear to say that I've heard nothing versatile
If I can’t make these cheap motherfuckers run a mile
I’ll put on a Rameses mask and dump them in the Nile
Yep … I'm the Pharaoh of this temple
And I’ll make every rapper in my circle go mental
I’ll double their hard work and put bricks on their backs
Make them walk a steep hill and build ridiculous stacks
I’m a malicious man, such a discriminate heir
That’s what I get when I’m crowned a King and I inherit the chair
Pull out my fat middle finger when I sentence a pair
to an eternity of pain in the middle nowhere!
I deliberately missed “of” in that particular phrase
I’ll “off” you motherfuckers like I'm de-switching a game
Genesis is my thing, **** a Corinthians page
But I DO respect the Bible, my homies, read it and pray
@theprofessor,
remember why i came in the game, eyes drained , migrained
cracking heads ,girl pulling me back in bed , whitey killed it , michael jacksons dead , now im in janet jacksons bed
shes jacking my head, im jill'n her hill's , illin n realer then death row in the psych ward,my life force what i fight for
, write mourges , dripping a fresh body ,parasites scared ta fight for the next body ,**** the devil ,puffin ghetto, ready for the next hottie to give him neck , next , to many rappers write chapters and cant right there books , im raps rapture , classic get yo ass kicked with a raptor in your back door, in fact sir im a factor ,fracture f'n actors faster then nicholas cage , sniffin for days ,last time I broke down , I broke ground , broke sound barriers , flashed the speed a light , before god learned to read an write , there was prof free'in breathing ciph after cipher bled through the eyes of a sniper , an took a shot ,hip hops igniter , with a palm a lighters tossed in the fire , im the bomb, tell ya mom well im inside her, blow up n piss on the pyre ,lifes a tv show ,i just sitcom , with a mic to spit on ,throw ice kicks on , cool, start running ,my nixon running out a time ,prof moving so fast , running out my mind, how sharp is your sword without the grind, i'll be out of line , till im outta lines , shoot a perfect 10 without a 9 , Look back without ya eyes and see ... what hip hop means
u sell a beat for a hundred , I make a hundred beats for the undead
u came in the game for fame , i just came and I forgot her name
Prof ciphers for daze straight , you talk like a lame fake
ur talking money an exchange rates
im in canada high as up ,never change states
im a hip hop artists paint a picture with intestines
u just talk garbage , leave you strangled by your best lines
wrap your spine around ya rhymes maybe then you'll back it
heres some lubiderm ,for you whack pricks ,dog you act bitch
i got a hundred ninety nine pounds , what was that ? meow..
@theprofessor,
ok
what are you trying to say in this piece
its just rhyming
no story
the vocab is good.. words and flow are good especially with those mulites... which this whole verse seems to be..
the only thing is the structure.. if someone sees this verse on a page of rapping and you want someone to feed it... there gonna look at this.. and click off
structure it.. and add depth
put your rhymes in a neat structure.. and tell the reader a story behind those lyrics
you got some good lyrics... just figure out the structure to this verse
add things.. take things away and tell yourself if it flows when you read it,
do your rhymes work, will people understand what im trying to say in this verse, your first line
remember why i came in the game, eyes drained
migrained, no ones able to compete in my grade
see what i did to your line
not saying to use this example.. not saying my example is better then your line
just saying do **** like this.. and it would become a better verse
in my opinion.. keep writing
@Illustraight,
vocab.... complex... 5/5
flow..... couldn't grab it 1/5
structure.... pretty neat verse 4.5/5
good read... hard read.. Too long in my opinion 3/5
creativity... never seen this before 5/5
multies.. couldn't count
.. 4/5
All in all this was a pretty cool read
one thing... you had a title
you made it work
the only thing.. even tho its basically using the whole Alphabet
IT is a long read.. which people somtimes are way to lazy to take 5 mins of there time to read a long verse.. you should record this if you can.... it would be alot easier for someone to listen then to read for this piece... i usually record long verse and drop a text with short ones to get feed and then i add on from that... RECORD THIS.. if you can.. then i will feed this piece even more.. keep writing
hope to here it.. peace
@thedarknova,
ok finally an audio
i liked the beat.. i like your flow in this beat
the only thing i would have to say
is advance your rap game.. because this to me was pretty basic..
talk louder when your doing an audio.. the beat kinda over powers your voice
hope to read/hear more
so i could feed more
@King123,
in my opinion shut the **** up and learn your self something son ,
you cant write what i write
and who the **** do u think you are ???
a nobody , trying to tell me how to write , go throat ya grandmas casket , u ******* head
@theprofessor,
dumb mutha fuckas trying to tell me bout writing verses
shakes my head and rolls a blunt for 420
ur a idiot King123
