Neverending Rap Battle

So I've been sizin up,
Do I see war child on the horizon? Yup
When he's just realizin, what
He'll be down on the ground writin, stuff
We'll be fighting, 'nuff
Till practice is over, rough

We be the new breed,
Dawn to dusk they're to flee
Everyone needs to breathe
So we suffocate em!
But you can't grow no tree
Without planting a seed!
Watch us proceed
Leave all rappers deceived
I don't need to repeat
You heard me, g's indeed...

I use audacity

What did you do to enhance the quality of the track? Only I was planning on rapping over a few instrumentals myself.

https://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/rocking-out-the-apollo NEW BEAT CHECK IT OUT FEEDBACK APPRECIATED

yo my raps dont need a ******* tune
i see your looking red like the ass of a baboon
yo and i dont use a shitty gun i use my fists
and i dont need any assists
and you gotta a thing for penis you pedophile
i bet your wearing binoculars and whatchin a naked mile
do you even know who the **** your messing with
im worse than ankin in revenge of the sith
im more dangerous than a lightsaber
and i wont keep you for the labour
because your weak as a leaf
a shitty ryme thief
so now you know who i am
the winner of the grand slam

You almost made me throw up on my computer

Lol .

come on wrathe
he's new
we was just like him
give the guy a break

like the delays or just the overall sound?

I use a compressor effect

If "break" means a "verse"

idk why but i feel bambi could write some verses like this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JXLsVLlbyb4

**** her with an umbrella and open it up while that's shits inside ya


that used to be my writing style

Metallica is rocking with the angels in Heaven. Nice contrast of angelic music mixed with metal rock and hip-hop beats.

yo does any one wanna get on a song with me and my bro its about girls we want to date and girls we dated be for

I will

Gimme beat and topic ill have it on wax within a few days

i might just take it easy
and try to lighten and loosin you up
kinda like kickin a bitch in her pussy till my shoe gets stuck
hell yeah imma mean dick and its prolly the biggest one youve ever seen bitch
i mean it, i've been steamin ever since i could walk
ever since i could talk i was raw, deal with it
if you tell me you aint feelin it , you lyin
all ya pussies rate **** but never have an explanation
and im jus releasin my music for yall to hate it
my whole persona is like a gay kid startin at a pair of tits
it aint somethin yall wanna play with
dodgin the **** ya say , comin straight from the matrix
head is so fucked and dysfunctional
stright pyro i got stuff to blow
switch up the flow
when i pick up a hoe
by her fricken pony tail
swing around and listen to the bitch bitch about a broken nail
get back on topic yeah lemme focus now
where was i ? oh yeah bomb droppin thats my tool
start laughin when i drop um all on my highschool
the police find my apartment complex with rigged with boobie traps
but i keep tellin um it aint mine
i may be lyin, violice has been on my mind since i was age nine
ever since i started rhymin my minds become a caged fiend
writin rage scenes when the ink soaks the page gee
wilikers, im filled with words been ill since birth
watch all the real emerge and never stop
yall know im hotter than kettle tops, outtie holla

got a page of razorblades who wanna cut,writing bibles n false idols, something else you can go out n lie about, liable ,flying out ya eyeballs when you see stars its a sign im signing out on yo mind n mouth,rip ya spinal out sign the vinyl no doubt , gwen stefani goes bananas fo my mc hammer go tony montana on hannah sonogram'r, photos, camera ,update my social parameter , the vocals bam at ya ,a simpson from the marge era , error he's from canada ,reid tara's tarot, tare a terrors terrabytes prepared ta write a pair nikes on there wind pipe , pair a sights on these parasites shoot i forgot my marriage lic-cense at the gun registry , **** a lable trying to edit me , aint dieing to kennedy aint living a censored dream ,mutant sensory , u cant mute whats meant ta be that tramp stamps a butterfly effect looping the memory,im sick of music so i keep on puking the melody's,stop n smell the breeze , sell the trees like christmas , pimpin's a felony buisness , ur tellin me she fell on knees, finished like the cleaning product everything thought up crystal clear so sin-cere sentiments burn through the devils sediment n tears seventh sense heaven sent angels doing kegels on my bed again, benalyn out of 11 ten a them just flu over ya head ,ahem , sick , need my medicine , levi edison , back on the thread again,destiny stitching spiderman webbin in, heres the method man you get stimpy n i'll get red again ,dead a pen kill a page,REAL for days ,im the film projector at pot fest , film director make raps undress ,so ya'll can see whats under the dress , is your hole punch broke, never leave these sheets unimpressed, dragon komicon girls home for some dungeon sex ,all these ******* threats, from toilet artists who dont like are **** ,which pair of huggies u gonna be hugging next ?

You know you have an obsession when you spend 37 minutes in the shower freestyling when the water got cold half an hour ago... XD

Well, the water in MY shower was warm all the way through, thank you very much. Plus there are still traces of freestyle watermarks all over the glass.

Yo, Bambs, I'm still waiting for your and Prof's verse for "3 Bachelors".