Neverending Rap Battle

Kno actually has a song and he says
"**** today's hip hop cats I'm going to my Eminem shrine holdin a rosary" lol

DFC100--- JUST WHAT HAPPENS (10 bars) i think


play this before you start reading:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97VrhvZqdFo

All those nights praying, begging for jesus
but its the demons, that rip you to pieces
i explained my verse but still haven't given a thesis (thesis means theme ik)
thinking your life is great, so you thought you didnt need us
then i see your hospital bed and look at these cuts
looking at your surgery and watching your knees bust
i hear you whisper free.... hush
thinking no, but knowing that we must
save you, then i think of when i used to hate you
thank you, you gave me a reason to make drew
he demanded to get rapture through
the real world where people will eat you like a raptor dude
i laughed at the fact he wanted to be a rapper to
i rap the truth, thats why you can not rap with drew
i laugh and watch you loss as you fight this war
LIFE and FAMILY, only things you got, i'll take away the LIFE SUPPORT
i hear you screaming WHY DIDN'T HE HELP ME OUT
because i only chose true friends, thats why theres no one around

play this at the very end:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_sJ05t16IwE

You've got yo bullets, your somethin'
If you got a gat. You might not be Huntin'
You see your statin fact, I say you attempt stuntin
Mr. Hydrant ain't ironic if you are not pumpin

Won't be goin grammatical
Here the stats will go
50 percent to the poor,
No Andante... Allegro!
Yah I will grow,
From bottom to top,
Aisle four, I will go

Don't care about delivery
Just obey my chivalry
And nobody be kidding me
So I don't allow no lip-syncing
I've been thinking, you're riddling
The riddler is contemplating
Compensating
For present day re-thought delaying
Proccess stating
That you cannot protest the praying

Prying eyes will find your lies
So no goodbyes for what collides
Two world collision
Coligraphy revision
History precision
Is too loose to be rewritten

Fear not,
I'd got shot for you small tots
Out-fought
The sick one with the small pox
When the sickest
Is the quickest
And you pick this
To win fitness
Over all raps you have heard
And I get what I deserve!

Speed be three beat me? We see... Nope

Tepees over me to be free... Dope
Battles to find a good verse... Grope

A last stand for that man...
A boring o' gory glory!
A rat canned for plagued sands...
Beaches infested with this story:
Close your eyes, the year is 2021-
Young couple's lovely cries, running never done-
They smile, don't ask why, they're havin funny fun
These tweezers wanna pry, what a stunning pun
The two tweezers begin lookin like free geezers
Their skin gets spots, new disease, no vaccination shots
They continually cough, only calming thing is pot
Twenty million users get caught
Then die of the new pox...

Chorus
Once we've seen it
We can't erase
We remember what we fear, an
Can't forget the taste
(Ooooh!)
We can look ahead at this!
(Ooooh!)
But the present will be missed!
I might not be a teacha
(Bam...)
...
But I insist...

A doom is gonna come,
we just don't know when

To cleanse what we've become,
a world of sin

The hardest part,
will repeat again and again

It's watchin the world end,
and a new one begin!

Chorus
Once we've seen it
We can't erase
We remember what we fear, an
Can't forget the taste
(Ooooh!)
We can look ahead at this!
(Ooooh!)
But the present will be missed!
I might not be a teacha
(Bam...)
...
But I insist...

Once again-
Another rap verse
You could get infected, by bein too close to the hearse
I won't stand corrected, when I tell you the worst
But if your at the scene of the crime, you might get caught first
You might be on the tracks, last livin one on the earth
Just alone climbing mountains, and treading through dirt...

When population goes from 8,000 mil to seven
Mil I don't think there's a goal to be settin
But soon enough, we'll see our children in heaven
So forget the past, and what your regrettin

Chorus
Once we've seen it
We can't erase
We remember what we fear, an
Can't forget the taste
(Ooooh!)
We can look ahead at this!
(Ooooh!)
But the present will be missed!
I might not be a teacha
(Bam...)
...
But I insist...

If the world ends that year
That would be a truthful lie

We all know what we fear
And our race shall never die

North and South America
Australia too

Europe Asia Antarctica,
africa (well who knew?)

If we stand up together
Through the weather

For the better
We'll find the treasure

Survive epoch's
And we'll get kicked

But only the deceived
Will be betrayed and tricked

Chorus
Once we've seen it
We can't erase
We remember what we fear, an
Can't forget the taste
(Ooooh!)
We can look ahead at this!
(Ooooh!)
But the present will be missed!
I might not be a teacha
(Bam...)
...
But I insist...

virtual reality

baptize a gospel, aristotle thoughts with spaceships in a bottle,show caution when ya see his kostons n how much they cost um , aint crossing jesus this ones for the believers ,litre's of leaders dripping bread crumbs , ghetto hansel n gretel these pigeons eating the pretzels, dont get it twisted,gippetto headphones who's pulling the strings,on my st ring the beats church bell smoking purple ,ninja turtles in ma inner circle , ,michelangelo,donatello,raphael,van gough, leanardo da vinci ,indeed painting a picture,vicars tasting liqour, drunk off there prophets will that make them richer,snicker all they want candy rappers,get wrapped up on the first chapter, publishing industry in the streets , put ya heart in the beats in vicinity of innovation put it in "Quotations" souls ancient, flow basement ,grab a pen scribble vatican in afrikann looking for die antwoord , 42 , to know thine answer u must know thy question !!! devine essence in every line a lifetime sentence holy ghost presence ,locked up in the present, lifes a gift i'll give it to ya'll ,cant be cap'd fitted to ball...

I said i wanted to here something real

"cough" really ?

LOL its funny cuz I wrote a similar line to this before I heard the song ever. But this one is clearly better v
"Kill an unborn baby and you couldn't de-fetus."

Mine was
"I could be an amputee and still you couldn't de-feet me."

-DLC

chillin chillimn

yo bambs what r we gonna do for this track like topic wise

SMILE FREESTYLE

[Verse]
Would you smile if a camera was put in front of you?
Would you smile if your mother or father wanted you to?
Would it stop the waterworks if I was to tell you
that the war which is taking place outside our comfort zone is done and through?
You don't seem to have a way to put the past behind you
Always have to be sad - I'm sorry, but there's no crying in my book
The tears don't always have to come out, there is such thing is fighting them
Yes - pain is hard, and we go through it, there's no surviving it
Yes - we've all been through lots of grief and lots of suffering
Yes - life is tough, that's what they say, there's no argument
Yes - you and I have experienced a lot of roughness
But no - that doesn't mean let it get the best of us and bother us
I believe in positivity, it runs through my circle
That's why I'm telling you, don't let the negativity irk you
I'm sure Scarface who did this track wouldn't allow it
And if Tupac was alive, I'm sure that he would denounce it
Like we denounce Satan, and all His indoctrination
We don't denounce God, and all the education
he bestows upon us
What will come of us
when we don't learn to flip around our frowns every once in a while?
There's a sur-p-lus, of understanding
It's up to us as human beings to go out there and grab it
What God has put together let no bitch ************ tear asunder
Come over here, my brothers
And smile with me

alch remix?

well I was thinkin like I will write about white boy things, like white trash things and kinda make fun of ourselves so to speak

ill send you my written when its done a long with the beat aigh homie?

I gotcha man , didn't forget about ya

nevermind I gotta new topic, I will jus send ya everything thru email ight?

Cassidy goes hard....

I love God with all of my heart,
His light shines bright when it seems like life is all in the dark,
He makes me feel like inside my life is falling apart
And he always there to hear me when i call him to talk
He can turn you're guilt into grace, you're sin into salvation
So be patient when you're going through trials and tribulations
Creator or all creations, ruler of all nations
Who saves us from Satan and damnation
Now temptation hard to resist, hypocrites will try to miss lead you
But I believe in God and that he provides for his people,
Hes with you when you're lonely, you hungry he'll feed you
And its the truth that money is the root of all of this evil
Thats why its hard for the rich to get in heaven, the wealth will tarnish you're soul
And knowledge and understanding is better than silver and gold

Cassidy is a beast...

If you haven't noticed novas black lol white trash probably wouldn't be a good topic lmao

No I'm sayin I do a white trash

And he does somethin "gangsta" so to speak

hahaha nice monkey and ight sounds good [email protected]

Nope, no alch remix. Just an extra.

ill send it thru here

Bambs I need some mastering tips ??? teach me everything u know an telepathically link your dads brain to mine so i know what he knows well ur at it --https://soundcloud.com/milkboxkids/blessed-test listen to this any ideas ? thats unmastered

well from what I can tell or hear

the beat is a lil too loud , either turn the beat down or turn the vocals up

if you turn the beat down , keep the vocal volume where its at

if you turn the vocals up , keep the beat where its at , know what I mean?

what recording software are you equipped with ? because I use the most updated version of audacity

and when I dbl track punchline

1. record over the punchline with a new vocal
2. if you use audacity put the one you recorded on the far right of the speaker/headphone
3. copy that vocal part and make a new audio track and paste it on that and put it far to the left

it would be much easier to explain in person and hands on

I got the WHOLE audacity down to a tee ,

but do you know how to compress vocals?

idk if any of that makes sense but the vocals either need to be bumped up a notch or two , or the beat needs to be knocked down a notch or two