Neverending Rap Battle

damn prof went hard(not like the time he was listen to my songs )

watch ya mouth when ya speak
the only flow you have
is a crack ounce in a creek
pounce on ya cheek, **** it
punch ya in the mouth till ya teeth fall instantly in ya stomach
wanna be, I come thru ya entrance
snatch ya necklace put it in my chexmix eat if for breakfast
the rawest cat, pullin out a gat
back hand you wit it till ya fall on ya ass
and snatch ya fleece
you lack punches and everything a rapper needs
no multis so you cough lies, no hard puns
cant even spell the word faggot but the funny thing is
you are one, goin on with my lines
you could suck my dick and you still wouldn't blow my mind with ya rhymes
spit so much **** right on ya forehead ya face smells
I could put ya 666666 feet deep with a gravity lift and you still wouldn't raise hell



this hellrazor666666 told me to bust a flow on a page he started

made him look stupid, cocckkky ****

yah, do you got a mic ? or do you jus use your computer mic?

Just something I was messing with...

Now shes talking to her ex and I wanna kill her,
Not that Im the type but Im just trying to find trust
Someone please tell me why these feelings are so familiar
We ignore the ones we love, but adore the ones we lust
Life is so backwards, living in reverse
I died when I was born and rested sideways in the hearse
Then God cracked the door and let me rise up out the dirt
But now it all makes sense because my beautiful demise is my rebirth
And I know you don't feel me, Nor would you understand me if I randomly won a Grammy,
Nor would you understand me if I wrapped my raps in candy
Cuz Racks, on Racks, on Racks, is the standard for all these pansys
Holy ****, I must be on that Holy ****, Even the Devil couldn't oppose me ****,
So yall dudes should just chill, I ain't spitting to get deals,
I'm spitting at car jackers and people that strip wheels
Not for the sick wheels, but so they could get meals
Cuz I know people committing crimes just to know how the rich feel
Its like i got ADD and they telling me to sit still
But you know the deal, All i wanna do is spit real.

-DLC

i got a mic

That was a good rap at the beginning. The middle was "eh"

Good piece but it seems like it would be off beat

I've just been messing with random ****... Posting some of it here

Now everybody's out here looking for a reason,
Funny how you could be dead even when you're breathing,
Me? Imma live it to the fullest every season,
When I'm gone, please dont waste time grieving,
Looking at my life I want to make my people proud,
Silently positive never negatively loud,
Legible food for thought that's edible to the crowd,
Packing for my future 'cause allegedly the time is now,
The power I've been given I can never take for granted,
I share my bare emotions in attempts to save the planet,
Running towards the light it seems I cant escape the damage,
I'm forever lost I guess I'm just a slave to the enchantment,
But I love everybody that I've met along the way,
Hopefully we'll meet another day.

-DLC

I suggest you buy a filter with it too

or atleast when you record don't have ya mouth so close to the mic

know what im sayin?

cause I was listenin to your tracks and they were good and all but they'd be good if ya put some effects and perfect it more

party song

get the bicardi , get the shots
start the party , never stop
its started , quarter to 11 o clock
its either your fucked
its either your drunk
somebody buzzed
somebodys drugs
layin on the rug
some chicks uggs
got puke on um
and my fuckin boxers
got poop on um
"someone roofied Autumn"
who done it?
whos blunt is this?
whos gun is this?
whos runnin this , SHOW
is what the sherriff says
around three in the mornin
while we are so fuckin
high, we are so fuckin
dumb, but we have so much fuckin fun
gettin sloshed and blowin up Tony's Ford
"you son are gon be handcuffed and wearin only orange!"
"but ocifer i only blew a .44!"

tippin all this
livin harmless
gettin honest
get up on me
get me horny
everymotherfuckin body
say ya wanna party!
( WE WANNA PARTY)
pardon me?
(WE SAID WE WANNA PARTY)

round two , we in a new town too
we bound to , be loud too
its how we do , for hours and hours too
fuckin in the shower too , always do
in the hallways too , that what ballers do
start takin hallucigeons while sippin on boose
start flippin on brooms
and watchin wicked witches trippin shrooms
everything was all black till i went to take a piss
and saw a clown face on my ball sack
startin singin megadeath
turns out the weed was laced with
acid tabs, shroom caps, crack and meth
woke up in a beamer with lipstick still on my weiner
puke and spit and boose and **** on my t shirt
three guys and one girl in the back, thats what i call teamwork
put my balls in her basket, we played basketball
house smells of hoes and alchohol
feels like i got the nose of a cadabra dog
smells like a party was goin on , cant even talk im at a loss

tippin all this
livin harmless
gettin honest
get up on me
get me horny
everymotherfuckin body
say ya wanna party!
( WE WANNA PARTY)
pardon me?
(WE SAID WE WANNA PARTY)

double time was dope

thinkin of tech when I was readin, nicce

There's a compress effect you can use on your voice in audacity which would also help

Http://soundcloud.com/mic_messiah/so-raw

Make sure you listen to the outro as well aha

aye,do yo have to configure any settings b4 u dwnload audacity,cz in ma pc its givin eror,m usin another software......or cn any1 suggest me a software as good as audacity?

YO niggas check it https://soundcloud.com/#thedarknova/the-music-game

Not that I know of, I just downloaded it and it was fine

At this point you're just rapping to a beat you gotta separate the verses and try to ride the beat better match syllable counts etc

And dont release something unless you get it off clean I heard a few stumbles which basically ruined the piece because overall it was dope with a good message and a few clever punches but the stumbles ruined it

**** thought i cleaned em all up ight ill go back fix what i missed

whats your email?

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