Neverending Rap Battle

mmmmmmmm fresh to death homie

down loads content line was great. I feel it

Lol Down Loads for the Content was a good line .

Just look at you on Ill's Dick,
You been there so long you just might stick,
Let Ill fight his own battles, he don't need a side-kick
While you on here talking **** on a laptop,
I was out there grinding, have my game on padlock,
And if you questioning my game you can check my highlights,
Got these bitches going crazy like I'm the movie twilight,
I mean you was raped by your uncle and you mad cuz your aunt watched
Now all you do is hide behind a mouse,
The only time you leave you're house,
Is for putting dicks inside you're mouth.
And I Know you thinking "where this dude been at?
This kid is shifter than a ******* acrobat",
Well dude **** that chit-chat, and Go **** Yourself
Cuz stepping to me is ******* bad for your health.

-DLC
(Doing this for fun btw . Don't Got beef with any of you guys. Just goofing the **** around )

https://soundcloud.com/bambi-17/go-so-hard

Tryna act like a crooked fiend hypothermia when you get cooked by frees
Pussy please none of that shifty **** that padlock the only time you pushin keys
See I'm the king of this rap **** one move alters the game
You just a pawn who gets lost in the ranks
By night I leap opponents son I'm grooving in stride
Rookie when you see danger you just move to the side
Cuz I ain't scared of your **** homie I think your weak with your threats
Cuz I cross squares so pray to a bishop I don't keep you in check
Homie give up straight up your really bad at this
Funny my verses are twice as good with only half the ****

**** if you're the king, then I'm starting a revolution
You're verses are foggy at best, just call that **** pollution
And if you're pollution then Im the solution,
The **** that cleans and takes you're throne, call that substitution,
And with me replacing you, thats evolution,
The pawns becoming the king, Call that **** execution,
Now let me tell you something bout you're chess contribution,
The King can move one square and all he do is live,
Aint packing punches, might as well be a captive,
The pawn on the other hand his role is massive,
He starts the game off, can't afford to be passive,
So next time you use chess lines don't be the king
Cuz the king is the bitch at the back of the ring.

-DLC

(BTW i don't see how the **** it is even possible to rap you're first line, Hypothermia fucks the whole line up in my opinion.)

uh what are you talkin about?

ya gotta atleast have a good flow, which you obviously don't have if you cant rap his first bar which isn't even hard to spit

you're an idiot

The **** that let's me flow is Multi syllabics your skull is in fragments
full of some whack **** pullin out mad clips
You ain't a caged menace no ranged weapons it's stage presence
you'll need faint blessins for your fake message or a great medic
Straight dentist jaw fractured ill walk past ya I'm gods pastor
bomb cowards fist give you a dark hour like you lost power
Raw rapper got flawless raps your all an act ain't ballin man
**** tallest stacks remain cautious man or see caution masks
That's flowing not even on some battle **** yet your the whackest bitch
Your writing the same **** I freestyled when I was ass and ****
Stop rappin kid get on some science **** then I'm grabbin your weapons
Cuz Darwin explain that dominate figures take over so this is natural selection

Uh hypothermia fucks up the whole line, Its too ******* long and it has no place in the line. Its just a ******* random word and is clearly useless in the line. Record yourself rapping that one. You will sound like a ******* idiot. Guarantee
-DLC

Multis makes it flow

Hypothermia is the act of over heating and cooling at the same time "cooked with frees" is wordplay cooked as in hot or served with frees as in freestyles orcas in freeze as in cold by me saying crooked fiend in the beginning part of the line it equals out the syllables and makes it flow

Don't question my hip hop


Just **** off

How many times I gotta tell you,
You ain't tough you too frail and too brittle,
You're fruitier than a bag of skittles, nickname- Chicken Little
You are as fragile as a chick, who's an addict and a lick,
With a habit for some sniff, but she aint had it and shes sick
You're average when you spit, You got the swagger of a snitch,
You're such a faggot and a bitch, you're body language has a lisp.
And you saying you a pastor, ****, guess imma make this a disaster.
I caught you facing bricks on a toilet, and I don't know what to make of it,
I guess you and God just got a really strange relationship,
Im in a basement with a virgin reading burning pagan scripts
Cause God never really concerned me like a Satanist
So when you taste the fifth, pray like faith exists to an atheist
As you're brain gets ripped to bacon bits, and your demoted to a dead pastor of an ancient myth.
The great abyss waits for this defined fraud, who rhymes odd.
To settle this Imma stomp you dead on the floor, **** a metaphor.
You want a punchline? Well mine don't jab they blast and blow minds.
Cause I'm a different kind of brain, you need to open you're eyes,
Because life without knowledge is just death in disguise.

-DLC

Solid song btw. Not a big fan of a chorus. But a solid start. BTW Macklemore is the man.

i will record it, and I wont sound like an idiot cause I have a flow

but thanks for the compliment

not a fan of a chorus? call it the hook then

if you don't get the pun, **** ya

lemme hear some of your ****..

holla

You bit swizZz

solid start? start to what?

ive been recording for months nah BROTHA

check out my other tracks, if you think im just starting out

and mackelmore is a good LYRCIST but hes about a 7 because his flows don't go hand and hand with his lyrics

if he had a better flow with that voice he has and some of his **** he'd be more dope

check out the whole slaughterhouse group. then tell me who the man is or in this case who the men are

oh by the way my **** is 'downloadable content' if ya want any, peace out

but hes off to a "solid start".......

lol

kid try tellin ME im off to a solid start, he aint the one to judge that

he don't even know what a multi is
of course he's bittin swizz

i think its pretty clear im far bein a normal guy
i mean once i walk down a block and show my ass
i seem to leave people mortified (1)
me lovin anyone else but this life is impossible
i aint lovin no more of dimes
cause id rather hug fourty pourcipines (2)
rippin it with the clear flow
just kickin back, hittin a fag (3)
sure ive lost my mind
and i have no intentions of gettin it back (4)
now im grippin the mic so hard
in order to get my hand off ya gonna need a crowbar (5)
im on ya boulevard lightin a match
and blowin up ya whole car (6)
till the smoke is dense
ya cant see cause its so dark (7)
huh fostah child is the name
ice is within my veins
with a cold hearted cold heart (8)
ya wont no part of me
im sayin everything clear
so dont say pardon me (9)


yeah yeah, dont **** with ******
im creatin so much tension
like goin anal with a dry rubber
pumpin out another
motherfuck ya mother
straight from the gutter, baby
so go head and haaaate me
ya **** dont phaaaaze me
no bitch can chaaange me
**** bein cliche, today
yo gimme dat dro
**** all ya mainstream pussies too
yall amaze me with ya shitty ass flows
im out holler

anyone else wanna go into this beat, I only spit from 0:06 to like 1:20 or some ****

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=meMPlWb8noQ&feature=player_detailpage

K imma be real with you. I listened to Holla or something by you. I had to turn it off. You fucked with your voice to much. I couldn't listen to it.
-DLC

100 pages ago, I met you guys...

Well take out the 2 lines and read it that way.
I bet your punk ass still won't have **** to say
-DLC

Nah I don't battle biters