Neverending Rap Battle

'welcome to the ill world mr. PO
Ay, keep the talk, B; I'm tryna see dough'

you bit mr porter in a westwood cypher

prick face
drippin dick flakes
I spit mase
in ya face
ya be breathin it
so start queefin bitch
and keep ya ****

HOLLLLLER

Send in your 16 ma dude

nope i just took fist line from it...if anyother is same let me know

That's still biting even if its one line faggot

cut that 1st line n thn read it even thn its better thn your raps

Lol really? Another cocky son of a bitch with lame writtens

Allow me to break down your verse

1st bar: bitten in the first part and I'm pretty sure tude and bro don't rhyme

2nd bar: it isn't about time so this line makes no sense and nee yo is an r&b singer so this comparison is stupid considering these are 2 different styles

3rd bar: a centaur is half human half horse and how is this battle material?

4th bar: the transition was decent but I'm also sure again that metaphors and bro don't rhyme

5th: a very played out angle I've heard many versions of that line your gonna have to get more creative if you use that subject

6th: considering lakers are a multi billion dollar organization with many star players and past championships this is not much of an insult

7th: how is this an insult?

8th: the best simile you could think of to "burn" is an electric chair? Electric chairs don't burn you either it fucks up the electric pacemaker that keeps your heart pumping

9th
10th: so prof smells bad? Creative....

11: was that a compliment? Lol

12: pointing fingers? What kind of a punch line is that

13: decent subject but the way you connected it made it very very basic

14: again decent subject but simple because of delivery

15: people choke themselves in your apartment? Also nice job rhyming again with again

16: decent idea but you didn't even rhyme?

17: didn't rhyme again

18: "just to taste you" sounds a little homo and nice rhyming chew you up with chew you up

19: holds no meaning

20: considering prof is one of the most outspoken motherfuckers on the planet this is whack

21: I think you spelled some words wrong

22: just some imma harm you bullshit

you're better than no one on here

sorry bout it

Thanx fo correction
nicely poited ma mistakes out but

in 2nd bar i just gave example of whackness...neeyo

3rd bar is relating wid 4 bar,pay lil attention n c it again

4 bar:mataphor rhymes with matador
n sleep wid cheap

5,6 what u said is right,7 is connected to 8 bar...i cnt explain meanin cuz it is too wide

11.is an insult,i meant that 'if yo whole rap goes well yo hook fuks all of it up

12 u r right,i was hasitating to write it too

16,17th bar has same flow n i can rhyme

20,when u r dissin someone u dnt think that who he is...u just gotta diss him n thats wat i did...n if prof is that much talented than he would have got signed by any famous labell till now

21,aedipus is king who killed her daugher 'antigone'

nee yo isn't wack....

hes a brilliant singer and NOT an MC

and your lines made little to no sense

Anyone here could get signed to a famous label I could sell out right now and talk a bunch of swag bull **** and spit gun bars and make mad **** I stay true to the art form as does prof tech n9ne isn't signed? Lots of small labels have amazing artists on them some of the best artists I know of get **** as far as money your skill isn't judged by your income your skill is judged by your skill

They are all still whack the only line I respect is the last one because its creative angle

ME AND PROFESSOR FREESTYLING OVER A CAR PHOTO ON FB,,LOL



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neeyo is not wack,,he gets respect from males and females as an r and b singer,,thats hard to do,,,so thats wack that u would even type that,,never ever judge someones rapping skills on being signed,,,criteria has changed nowadays,,u dont have to be nice with ur writing,,u just have to have swag,,a catchy chorus,,,a dance and ur on,,i know dudes on my block that would rip apart most signed dudes,,thats not a barometer of talent,,that is all,,,carry on

you know what it does tell me, that the most lamest, brainless, complacent, ignoramus can be famous...

he's back!!!

yeah yo r right,u just need a catchy beat n hook nwaday's

Hello

when u mess with me
see it lil deep blood starts flowin in sea

see it lil deep,blood flow's in sea nigga,when u mess with me
live free or mess with 8-e if u wanna rest in peace

earthquick shakes earh,rain falls with blood
when i come to assault,yo better dont ask me anythin 'bout conclusion or result..

p.d's finds boneless cadaver in deep sea,there bones feed's me
until i dont see yo ass in grave m dave who is as hungry as vampire when he see's
blood

n m close to guns n drugs like wrist to handcuff's
i can beat you in yo father land standin toe to toe,hand to hand punk

just call me once
i will come n leave,leavin yo ass dumb

i stand alone but they stand in fear homey
when i leave ma home,ma momma dont pray fo me

cuz i left home wearing teflon
creep in ma hood holdin heads ripped off
outa yo chest,niga yo dont know me,if u think u do,your dead wrong

gotta be carefull when u enter in punk house
if yo ever tried to walk wit' yo chest out
u'll hear a clunck sound n u'll get yo chest bones torned out

when u skunk's mess wit' punk's,all they hear is skunk shouts
tell me you dont wanna fu-ck wit' me,i'ma make yo fu-ck bound

it goes as deep as 9/11 when spunk n douse meet eachother in one house
but yo know m as mad as hatter so b carefull what fly's outa yo mouth

or imma keep slappin yo back till yo shouts dont sounds soundless
i remember a nigga who tried to find anti 8_e homey he was foundless

this wasnt bad
this line was my favorite

see it lil deep,blood flow's in sea nigga,when u mess with me
live free or mess with 8-e if u wanna rest in peace