Neverending Rap Battle

some difficult words are used bt meanings are writen in brakets

(chorus)
smuuks was the man disconsolated because he was 0 rated
disconsolated because hopelesness dragged in his way
crashed him to the curbs,he was the man who wasn't debated
directly hated,neglected n degraded but he endured it,aint faded
n now look what he became,an emcee,he just made it
(verse 1)
if his rap sate,niggers stipulate
an un acceptible terms,if he signs he is forced to captulate(surrender)
cuz nigaz hasitate,they think a brown man will adultirate(make impure)
n debase rap,he will humiliate,nigaz perpetrate
he became disconsolate,in his late days but if u c him before his teen age
u,ll say he is glad,happy,sane n plain
u paint him as a model of hate
axecrate(hate)him for the things he say
mayb cuz he dont know when n what to say
so he aint sane in your brain,critically insane
upper-crust of shame,r*pe is better than takin his name
discussed as upper state of disgrace in discussions n debates
but he ain't as bad as they say
thats y he still venerate(respect)u cuz he didnt learn how to obtain hate from u
he is as silent as his fate,still he irritates?
f**k his fate,he gambles,his turn over n here comes check mate
if he inculcates(satisfies)u ask racists to arbitrate(decide)
they r mentors of hate
he see's everybody ready,unzippin their pants,to give pen**s b/w his legs
he fades just pray's on his way that he slips n straightly fall's in his grave

better than before?

Using big words doesn't make it better its just sounds forced in this piece

Schitzo intermission - it be a warnin

Born wid to be sexual, a curse to man
Better run for tha hills fast as u can.
all u ladies and all u men
linin up to be someone again and again

setup, setup, setup, setup,
setup, setup, setup, setup,

[Siren]

I be scorchin the earth with lyrical slight
open up to tha daylight and light up my night
burnin yo socks with my fallin mistake
cos you no different, you be lowest.. Man rake

[Siren]

setup, setup, setup, setup,
setup, setup, setup, setup,

Bad boy, bad boy, where you gonna be?
Lookin up skirt and wishin you be me!
Swingin from the meds, a fool takin them all.
sit ur ass down and witness my sick fall

[scratch] - cray, cra cra crazy + spinback

[Siren] fades

Uses smiley for 10th time ever or so

solid peice

That's why I don't use them, and just stick to the vocabulary I trust.

No if you put deeper meaning behind it it's good but it has to flow but like if you just replace a simple world like "flow" with some 13 syllable word you just sound stupid

ok then

i'm feelin this piece

basic....

but ok

How you likin this then homie fresh out the oven




Started in the 8th grade two kids lookin to make change break pace move on to great things wanted to give her that gold plate ring but now I despise her cuz I held back desires now fake men call her my girl guess you must have lied girl used to be a dorkish loser but I was important to her but homies said even if you adore her it futile people hittin the floor is brutal she knew she was mistreated and I told her I would leave the kid bleedin with his teeth in but it's like she loved the abuse and that's hard when she means something to you fell in love with the truth and felt like Adam clutching the fruit never went to exceptional measures for sexual pleasure just made her happy cuz I knew at the end she'd remember so I kept distance gave her best wishes hugged her but saw the scars attached so I confided to her about my mothers heart attack that moment we were closer than ever and from that moment on we helped each other hold it together



I didn't like the path she had taken I was maskin her faces there's presently no future cuz our past is the greatest so despite the past we had things change people drift but we grew close again cuz love and pain is a lethal mix little did I know of her evil wish to sneak a kiss with a seem less prick she was no longer that decent kid if she brought it up I would just plead the fifth because ignorance to the situation brought me peace and bliss held onto the girl I once knew told her I love you but not what you've come to so remember this **** cuz you're better than this I wasn't lookin to hit those incredible hips just wanted my mouth pressed to her lips she called me that night with a topic touchin my brain she said I was her true love that had me up in a daze I think I found out what love is that day but then I found out next day it was just a drunken mistake so upset I felt the passions gone smashin walls breakin windows with basketballs and started backin off but we had this stare down I thought I was lookin inside said I know you've done bad things but I see good in your eyes she took it to mind but we aren't on a speaking basis don't know if this is peace or hatred cuz my dreams are heinous felt this heavy load on my shoulders and was replaying conversations over and over heart got colder and colder I can't stand the potential and I hate the dude she's seeing cuz she has a future and she's a decent human being but if you're trying to break my heart it's useless scheming cuz my heart will never stop its just bruised and bleeding but I think that's it the bad bloods gone its about time I moved on from crushed thoughts I don't think there's heaven on earth I never touched god cuz I never hear love stayed but I always hear love lost



http://youtu.be/pWUKbC59XyQ

fuckin amazing
dude.. crazy verse

satisfactory...

WRATHE

I was reading back in the pages and I saw you said you have your lyrics done and you need beats for future reference I would recommend you find the beats before hand because you'll find that the lyrics might not correspond with the beat as well as you would hope and then you'll end up doing alot of rewriting and syllable changing

I can expend most of my lyrics, so that won't be a problem. Thanks, cousin

Finally got something recorded damn it's been a while

https://soundcloud.com/mic_messiah/love-lost

damn yo

sick ****

haha your lyrics make me laugh not because they are good they're really bad i'm rippin you up doesn't that make you sad? no cause you suck and you're used to it or are you mad? your lyrics are whack how could you win like that get your facts straight before i crush you flat

wellcome to the ill world of E _tude
if i wasn't in lead they wouldn't beef with me bro

if it wasn't about time,i would have kept my speed slow
if it wasn't about rhyme's,i would be as whack as nee-yo

u see human's faster than horse?call 'em centour
see monster's more destructive then bulls?call 'em minotour

just before u see me as matador,ima wake u up n slap metaphors
fu-ck the sleep cuz dream is cheap bro

i'ma give you a 'candy',n chew you up 'rapper'
cuz u r like 'candi' n m your 'raper'(rape_r)

we ball like 'miami heat',u are like 'lakers'
we flow like miami beach,while u tha 1 to scream"where is life saviour"

u inhale smoke merely fair
but when u exhale its more than winter fog in air

u r burnin like a child sittin on 1000 volt chair
your too jelous prof,burned from toes up to yo hairs

even if u enter yo home when yo mum is cookin food
she'll sniff,smell n she'll say

'oh **** food is overcoocked'
'oh its PROFESSOR,ain't sh-it then its okay'

yo rap ain't whack,but you are crooked
if yo rap sate's yo fu_ck up yo hook

if u point me with yo forth finger u gotta be carefull
yo got rest of yo finger's fullturned at u

m such a bast-ared that meetin me with nice shake
means u are fu-ckin up yo entire day

yo wont even hold the mic if u are sane
so before u start yo rhyme,i'ma drive you all insane

oh someone choked himself to death again
same crazy **** is goin on in 8_e's apartment again

if yo father is feelin regret for the fuc-k
he gave to yo mom 9 months before yo birth

i'ma give him a shoulder n put u right back in yo mom puss(puss)(puss_y)
cuz she look's fuc-ked up after since you came in the world(skunk)

i'ma spit yo out later,cuz before that i gotta chew you up(punk)
just to taste u,ima chew u up

spit u out like chewing gum,is it fun?
to me its kinda like me battling____none

cuz yo are like the one who thinks too much
before he keeps his mouth shut

be carefull i got rap thrown
m like aedipus,dont ever act like antigone

cuz most probably,u gonna get same result
yo gonna get yo head cutted off...

ha,yo sound more whack...really

did you send your verse to prof yet??
because we are up first

**** all ya hoes

i rip it raw
when i hit this broad
and my fist sticks to her bra
this is what i do
i pop so much ****
my brain is fucked like a prostitute
ya you is who im talkin to
what ya tryna constitute?
yall gossip too
watch who you cockin to
or ill split ya cock in two
thats what i got to do
ill even start robbin you
thats what ive been plottin dude
im hip hoppin to this
i got ya two kids
in a headlock
am i gonna stop?
ya bet not
so ya best not
ask me to
and you can
laugh at the fact that i rap
so i can bash you in the back with a bat
now they all gon laugh at you
rap with so much passion too
rip up and twist up these words
just to baffle you
im after you
so i can grab you and gag you
im the baddest dude
with a cocky attitude
i dont dress up like ya swag faggots do
im feelin hot when i spit
whether i got a beat or not im the ****
and the piss, spittin bullets
i got the banana clips
and the cannibus
doin magic tricks
poppin pamelas tits
and damagin ****
creatin havoc with fist
takin coke and acid
layin in my open casket
like im done livin
everyone greivin and cryin
pop up and say im just kiddin
ahhh **** it
pull down my droors
point at the closet whore and say suck it
im cumin hard like when im beatin it
imma rare one
hand me some shrooms im eatin it
everyone shoutin 'scotty ya gotta share some'
right to bare arms, ill leave ya arms bare
no hair, bullets takin off ya clothes
EVERYTHING BUT ya sox and underwear
i aint tryna to kill ya
im tryna thrill ya
im done here but i aint gon stop
cause now ya cant even talk
like ya mouth was stuck and glued to my cock
ya chickens