Neverending Rap Battle

eat ma diss,both of yo,bambino n illustraight,muthafuckin bitches

no bambino was wrong i got multis n similes
but u can't see it as clearly as i can see your patches of acne,hehehe
may b u will see it when...me,a dissin machine,slap it on yo face as ridicolously as chicken egg smashed on yo cheek
u talk about multi's?dick suckin-bambino
you r 83 years old fake suffering-pachino
who sound like fuckin-banzino,tryna find ma weaknesses,like marlin searching-nemo
oh-my lord,safe bambino from me,grow-up-boy
dont poke yo nose here or you'll get yo nose out-of-joint
till yo kill one mic i would have conquered 'bout-half'a-detroit
n illustraight,if i dont lie yo rap was great,but if u started rappin in concert half-crowd-will-avoid
to listen to it,i-dont-lie
if rap similes were texed,you would have got rebate
u can't play wid me playaa,as soon as yo turn over's,u'll get check mate
i play wid metaphors and similes,believe me i can make whole rap by it n m as bold as brass
just like ma spit,as smooth as glass
but if u still say anybody here is better than me than u r like a dripping tap,everybody hear you but can't turn u off
cuz you have a face for radio, a voice for mime and a body you could grow tomatoes off
if u diss me again,i think instead of dissin u back i would laugh
n i really am stream's main rapper,
but u rap as rough as sand paper
and i know 'bout 6 dicks orgy
cuz yo girl told me but she said'oh it dont effects mee'
may be cuz she is much torturous than a prostitute
who sell's her pussy in exchange of resturant food
uyuuuh,S-M doubleU-k-s is smuuks
but if u cut "M" n "U" it forms the word,which suits you...

m not here to degrade,curse or criticize any of you,i dont turn ma back on truth cuz i can face it,but u all are here just to degrade,yo saw me rappin good widout multi's dats y u said me to rap wid multi's n said that''i dont know multis''
i dont ussually use it cuz i dont like to
but i'm not here to show ma self best,or to show u worse n i appriciate rappin of yo n illustraight both,
i'll just diss anybody who fucks wid me,illustraight started this so m not gonna leave his ass untill i dont finish it

i know multis n similes,you can see them in ma last post,,,,,n you got nice lyrics in rap yo posted,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
*inhale*
inhale it in the stimulant
then blow it out
goin out grab a mic and throw it down
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yo can't rap,yo lyrics are ****,,,,seems like u are just writin to rhyme

e.g,rhyme,time,lime,dime,fine....yo rap is like this,senseless n meaningless

Stfu you have not writtens single multi and any simile you gave written is stupid and irrelivent

Please tell me what a multi is because you obviously don't know you fuckin ****

u fuckin homo, fukin magit,,,,,u cant see similes?are u blind
similes;-
as clearly as i can see your patches of acne
as ridicolously as chicken egg smashed on yo cheek
as rough as sand paper
WHAT THE **** ARE THEY?they are fuckin similies
MULTIS;-
suckin-bambino
suffering-pachino
nose out-of-joint
'bout-half'a-detroit
half-crowd-will-avoid
WHAT THE **** ARE THEy,huh moron?
if u read the book ''how to rap''u can see there,kool g gives some examples of multi syllibal rhyme words e.g he said random luck and handsome ****,my-hat n hi-cat,muthafucka similarly i used,suckin-bambino n sufferin-pachino as multies,,,,out-of joint and 'bout-half'a-detroit are triple syllables,u fuckin don't know anything so don't poke yo nose here or i'ma cut it outa joint

Never said you didn't have similes I said they were irrelivent and stupid which they are chicken eggs? Really lol I laughed


Your multis are weak and you used about 3 in your entire verse everyone here is able to use multis in every line with intricate internal rhyme structures and guess what? We didn't have to use a fuckin book we live the **** in fact I'm rockin my microphone roots shirt right now and I'm on the train heading to NYC where I'm gonna look for some cyphers! Don't tell me I don't know this **** I breathe it

I can see that you've flipped a couple of lines against me
But it won't work
I'm coming for you, CHAAARRRGGGE!!!!
Smash a chicken egg in my face
I thrust a lava rock at this jerk
Watch it smother this fool, AAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!!
Your grandmother knows that your stage name sucks
Your grandfather knows that you're a Grade-A ****
Your little sister knows that you're a negligee slut
Your uncle knows that you ram-bust another male's butt
CHUMP, don't make me BEAT you up
**** a "half-crowd", we can fight in an empty arena, and I'll STILL eat you up!
I'm like a "dripping tap" because I got a flow that can water you down in seconds because everybody knows
I'm in a HOT current state
And you can't touch hot water, 'cause I can leave boils in your hands like a plague
So don't split hairs with me, smuuks, this ain't a salon parlour
You couldn't kill a "mic" if you appeared on The Source cover
Don't start a war, ******
I'll have you looking stupid like Eminem did when he left Benzino looking like a ball sucker
You're bold as brass and you're sharp as glass
Let's see how bold you are when I drop you 'til you break into smaller shards
This is a style that smuuks simply can't match
You can never outwit this top front-runner, fag!
You simply can't **** with ills or my brother bambs
'Cause we will simply stomp you like a postal office stamp
I double-dare smuuks to make an answer to my rap
The reason I fucked with you's because your swag is so bad
Everybody on this forum LAUGHS at your ass
Not because you're wack, but your ass is full of CACK!

http://soundcloud.com/bambi-17/spittin-4

you're too basic dawg

check it out

UMM PROF, BAMBI, WHITEY, ILLS AND DARK

http://able2know.org/topic/192946-1#post-5208881

I'M GOIN FUCKIN KILL HIM

get ready for a verse faggot

using multies or similies in every line makes yo rap ****,n it is not necessory to use them in every line,,,no pro rapper uses it,n if yo think it is necessory than u can use it in yo whack rap to make it whackest,but i dont give a **** m good wid out usin em,n i wont use em n i can **** ur ass up wid out usin em...

u can keep sayin ma rap **** but i'll b honest.......
wow u wrote spectacular rap if i see it as u dissin some1 else,but since u r dissin me i gotta diss u back,u fliped script nicely

what do u think is lackin in ma rap?

Bitchtits is my word. Get your own. I'm gonna **** smuuks up!

what the ****??

Oh my ******* god your an idiot let me clarify this to you your not as good as you say you are you have basic ass rhyme schemes that prove your flow is wack because just reading them I can tell it is choppy

You have no punches, wordplay, similes or metaphors and any time you write one of those it's very basic 90% of your lines are filler they hold no purpose and have no second meanings

Please name to me 5 GOOD rappers who CONSISTENTLY don't use multis I'm not talking one song I'm talking people with actual careers even fuckin mainstream dick suckers like lil Wayne use multis it's one of the 5 ******* basic parts of rapping you dumbass

Please listen to the second verse of this song http://youtu.be/I-Cswjfeb2w

Maybe crooked I will show you how to rap

everything about that song you posted

made me want to quit writing when i first heard it

crooked i is a monster, much love to tech too

both flow tremdendously

now it just makes me wanna step my game up

You keep saying you're gonna **** everybody. Slightly homosexual?
Believe me when I say that talking back at us won't help your situation.

Word it's just a show of true lyricism chino is pretty good on it too he didn't flow as intricately as tech and crooked I