Neverending Rap Battle

damn 43-0...and lol i'll see all those punches and make sure i dont end up like him

Yo prof. Heads up, reverse poetry isn't "your style." It's been used by poets for about... 100-500 years, maybe? What if I said, "rapping is MY style which means you guys are stealing it." I don't believe that, but you'd might say that "a lot of people rap, so it's not." A lot of people do reverse poetry too. Like me. That's one of my new styles.


Bring it, cousin. You're better, but I want to see you do something other than gossip and post a rap every three pages. This is called "neverending rap battle for a reason! And that goes for everyone!

You push, and there's pulling going on!
You're squished by the engulfing rolling sun!
You mush (mush! Mush!) but there ain't no time to run
Everyone, they're all done! Save the puns for when they come...
Return zombies all unfed, concerned for your head, you burn the undead
But civilizations! Lay to waste!
What once were big living nations, are lost in the race

These analogies will give you allergies, for the things you want to take back
You just need all of these sincere apologies, open doors locked by cracks
You gotta die hard, dyin in sleep is for retards
goin to keep the cars, and drive away in a heap it's smart
Dyin will cut you like cheese cheddar, Please! (budeep, budeeeeeeee) dead heart

Some time in the future 2020, big roc 28 years of age is sellin records,
money stacked like double deckers, and hopin that his sex works
Spectre, 8 years younger, is learning to drive, his career has arrived,
and he's survived a harsh life, on the inside, where his soul has cried
He has had his first album rejected, his whole life corrected,
by a break up, (he never meant ****!), forget it,
he's wanting to be, an OG and go free, know and believe
But no scene has givin him the green on his album
So what he does is crazy, and hell if it works
But his life ain't being run, by publisher jerks, and nonono clerks
He flies to big apple by himself, prints his album out on 100 discs,
200 dollars in this, just because he's so pissed
So by himself he sneaks discs on the shelves, with 1$ price tag
All 100 sell, it's discovered that it wasn't even published
Some people are amazed, others are thuggish
They try to hunt him down, find big roc on accident
Big roc envies spectre for how well he's developed
Last time they met, spectre was a whelp, now he looked apposed to seeking help
Big roc knew him from some rap battle site, sound familiar prof? Goodnight

Omfg he means that dark nova would have never gotten the idea without his doing it first hense "his style" I'm pretty sure he knows he didn't invent it but he was the first here to use it

Don't question prof as far as writing goes he's one if the most dedicated motherfuckers ever

Bitch please 2

Okay. Thnx for clarifying. Correct me if I'm wrong, but i believe I heard dfc say something about prof meaning it was HIS

And dfc clarified that he meant its his style but he didn't invent it read into **** smart one

Okay thanks, but **** your sarcasm. Wanna insult me? Put it in a rap
I said "correct me if I'm wrong", I do believe I didn't say anything about being rude. Read into **** smart one

K thanks

With a name like "Enimen", you sure sound dope. So what are you, a backwards-ass version of Eminem?

Afterlife

Take a deep breath
[inhale]
Get the Stress off ya chest
[exhale]

Just Take a deep breath you can feel it in your chest [stress]
When each an every step brings you further on the quest
Towards the imminence of death ..A primitive regret
Pressed within your fingerprints lingering with death

Where life gets possessed and then ripped up out your chest
Except not yet, so be calm and dont panic. [Granted]
Your health is in good shape you'll find a way to manage
Sum are feelin stranded from what it is they've been handed
The truth is never candid but others just cant understand it
Using lies, abusing minds.. you might wanna find a bandage
And watch the souls sink [man] theyre so quick to vanish
Like the story were told about the ship of atlantis [Dammit]
Beyond the ocean floor, Times a closing door
As the mind open doors, to those blind to the signs
Will never know the source
...... of course
I Chose to abort and expose what its for
As it remains hidden like the code is in morse
From the god of the north to the thunder of thor

[Death is on board]

Just Take a deep breath you can feel it in your chest [stress]
When each an every step brings you further on the quest
Towards the imminence of death ..A primitive regret
Pressed within your fingerprints lingering with death
Where life gets possessed and then ripped up out your chest
Just dont panic [Granted] ur in good shape
Then you'll find a way to manage
The truth is never candid others just cant understand it
Using lies abusing minds you might need a bandage
Watch souls sink ... so quick to vanish
Sorta like were told about ships of atlantis
Dammit... Does lie beneath the planet
Under the siege of granite
Become the belief weve banished
From religion who preached the theme of heaven
How we telling ppl where the heading
When even the reverend has no idea
If that exactly how its ending

People's affect

Verse 1

Pushed away from society never held in people’s arms
Keep fallin cuz of this invisible shoulder I’m leanin on

A demon spawn brought to affect ya conscious 

But how are y’all gonna earn my respect with ya non sense 

People gain your trust just to lose it 

And rulers gain power to abuse it 

These young relations are useless 

Simply pavin the way for this blueprint

This is just the basic deal 

Cuz were still riding this life with training wheels

These people come in with the intention of leaving

We’re attracted to death cuz the exit is screaming

Forever was never set in stone don’t use the time 

Cuz immortality is just a figment of the human mind 

**Verbal physiology these vermin on top of me but I’ll never lie in the possums reach 
Never abide by the laws your providing me 
Never fall into the jaws of society 

People control our lives and I’m lost in the tyranny**

*BIG BREATH*
a deep breath for the good in the world but I’m suffocatin 

Throwing away people we once held onto like it was something sacred 

Seems like we’re all heavenly creations with a touch of satan

Battle between the mind and the heart so the war is wagin 

Us against the world it’s missiles were tryna spark blanks

Without you by my side I’m just this mino in the shark tank

**=double time

Chorus
I seem to underestimate these people's affect
But they always seem to leave in the end


To the beat of "daylight" by Aesop Rock

both yours and whiteys peice was deeep,

i loved it. both ya'll stayed on topic thru every bar.

like the knowledge behind it too.

Keep It Dope KID

Tried getting a little Aesop flavor

you know what ... its called biteing styles u ignorant basterds

and honestly ya'll need to shut the **** up


keep my name out ya mouth

I told darknova straight

theres a lil thing called innovation


and yea none of the POETS u could name wrathe DID WHAT I DID ... in the same way

Dark took what he saw me do a few months back and now he's doing it


congrats , u want a pat on the back or a slap upside the ******* head

none of ya'll ever step .. just keep making excuses and ur nuts tucked up


so in all reality SHUT YA MOUTHS


I taught most of you how to rap ... and im done cause u all get heady and arrogant over it ...

u ever see me in person .. im likely to crack ya skull for acting like such retards


half the "skills" u think you have was **** you read off one of my rhymes
or things ive broken down for you


u dont have a lil bit of the same skill ... u dont create .. u copy styles and call them your own

Illustraight is still one of the only people here who isnt generic


DFC- ur a wannabe gangsta rapper
Wrathe- u suck dick .. ur just attempting to learn ****
Bambi - knows he's straight up used eminems style
Darknova- uses Hopsins styles , which was actually biten off eminem
Whitey - uses underground eastcoast rapper styles mainly

so congrats SUCK A DICK and maybe be original

im not ya friend , im not ya homie , I dont even like you ...

U all bitch outta battles , and never freestyle

although you claim it , ive rarely seen it

and as far as im concerned on a whole - most of ya'll reiterate other peoples lines

whitey - I dont appreciate the whole " oh i want it to be something really good against you " but you have time every lunch to freestyle and write

mmmhmmm thats called backing out , and straight up in all honesty its weak as ****

I have no issue telling you whats up

none of you can say or do anything against me that i couldnt do tenfold back

u know it .. I know it .. the best you could hope to accomplish is teaming up together and dick ride votes

ya'll barely write verses and then magically get intimidated when i drop single verses ... and noone else will write for days

CONGRATS - im done with you people ... **** talking and ripping **** off

Ill's was right , when he said its funny how similar whitey's verse style was to **** he wrote months prior

and ive seen the same **** from all of you


dont crack to me , u lost ur chance , none of you has ever beaten me

ima walk away from this still the champ and you guys can jack eachother off
...

PEACE OUT PUSSIES take a long hard look at yourselves an check ya selfs ... ur ego's are incredible ...

YOU DIDN'T TEACH ME ****. YOU WERE TOO BUSY PUTTING ME DOWN! It seems like every ************ here under-appreciates my ****! I'm just a guy who's here to rap, not to put up with your ******* ****. SIT THE **** DOWN! Don't insult me! Truth is, in reality, this is a motherfucking website! If I met you in person, you wouldn't do **** to me! Do you call everyone you know a retard for not agreeing with your every decision? Have fun making friends like that, asshole! I'm 100% original, maybe you've noticed but you've been an asshole to everyone here! Say I don't freestyle and steal raps? Every morning I wake up and think of rhymes. I then post my original **** on the amateur rap battle topic, which has become my own... **** YOU PROFESSOR. Post a rap, bitchmotherfuckerassholepieceofshitbullshitassfacefuckingbitch!

alright..

thats not even being straight up.. unless you mean straight up dick

none of us step? step to what? to you on fuckin tiny chat?

andi write every god damn day, and never take a break from it

im building up skills

go ahead keep tellin me i "bite" eminems style

but as of recently ive drifted from that, as I HAVE stated before

and imma tellyou what I think, cause quite frankly im not afraid to say whats on my mind AS WELL

i dont know exactly what goes on up there in canada, AND YOU dont know what goes on down here where im from or from where whiteys from

dont automatically assusme that we dont "step" because we dont go on tiny chat

and i have a legit reason for not being on there. cause god damn i would love to be on there if i didnt have an ancient peice of **** lap top with no webcam

and if you're gonna keept havin these little episodes and callin us pusssies, go ahead leave then, but you've said you were gonna leave about a million times in the past

pull ya plug out, and get ya panties out of a bunch

dont assume **** cause thats exactly what you're doin

and im not gonna let you just sit here and "down" talk to me or any of us

i dont deserve it i know that

i know what my level of expectations are.

but nice knowin you MIKE you have been a big help and id hate for one little spaz out pussy fart attack on able 2 know to ruin our friendship, mutual that is

Learn to spell first at least before you go off bashing others like a jealous little girl..
I am not a grammar nazi or anything, this is a simple introduction to the real world

Thanks for all the inspiration like I just read the bible
full of misinformation, lol @ this prophet thinkin he didn't lie though.
Who the **** are you to start **** talkin like we don't know any English
Some professor you are, your logic is as fucked up as a sheltered woman's is.
You gave yourself a hard on by suckin your own dick
That ain't my style though, and I ain't runnin with your click.

Teachin one how to rap is like teachin one how to talk,
You sound like a pompous idiot that just got verbally slapped the **** up.
Yeah I am using English, and you apparently own it
since you butchered and chopped it.. but it hasn't sold yet.
I download files, so I guess I am biting off your style..
Va te faire foutre, mauviette you sound like a chav from Jeremy Kyle
You think you're a god and you created everything even though you read lyrics straight off the book shelf
Your delusional mind can't tell from what's real and what bullshit it's feeding itself.
Go leave this place while you still have your loose concept of an education
to pursue an ambition like quitting your cocaine addiction
You're like a manic republican that just lost the election
Do the world a service.. and stab yourself with a rusted spike repeatedly until you get a yeast infection


Note: English isn't even my first language and I grew up on classical music so I ain't biting ****. Your allegations (aka excuses as to why you suck/swallow/gargle) do not exist.


biting*
bastards*
you all* or y'all*
etc.. I could go on.

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P.S. It's painful to even read your post.

I am from canada too, it's just that time of the year for most people
when one keeps thinking they are the best then it means there is no room left to improve and that individual has reached THEIR potential and limit and in most cases.. satisfaction.
For real though, only sissies wile out like what professor did. Your northern neighbours aren't/shouldn't be known for that

To clarify though prof would beat the **** out of you in person lol....

So I'm supposed to believe I'm biting styles because I rap with an underground east coast style? I'm from the east coast and listen to underground rappers? Not everyone can create an entirely new style like yourself it's not biting its inspiration the music you listen to will most likely inspire your style that's common knowledge?

I didn't bite ills idea that happened to be a coincidence I never read that verse from him the idea to use questions in a verse isn't very unique? Very easily able to be thought of by two people

Why u so mad dude first i didnt coppy u i saw this style of poetry in ela then i saw destorm do it maybe i saw u do it but dont remember it was just something i wanted to do for a while
yes i use hopsins style sometimes but i keep switchin cuz im not comfortable yet and im just now learning to freestyle im sorry im not as good as u or any other rapper here i no this but y r u so mad we are all writing we are all trying we are all stepping up it may not be all the time but we are doin **** dude ur like my second father i didnt mean to offend when i did the reverse poetry thing i just wanted to put some thing up that u guys would think was cool.....didnt think it would cause this.

Did the site just take out the option of replying to all posts? Unless I'm on some kind of acid trip, I swear I can't find it anywhere!