Neverending Rap Battle

you can do somethin like this

i sometimes try to in a sense "sandwhich" my lyrics so like

shut up you keep talkin, ya keep tauntin, but i slap a slut up

thats just an example... so you can start a bar or a line with one scheme, add one more in the middle then end the line with the scheme you started with

if that makes any sense whatsover.. krso, ice cube, and ice t did that. and em did in the song "our house" with slaughterhouse..

That reminds me

When you have a scheme going and you want to switch to a new one start the newest line with a rhyme from the old scheme

I'll rob a dollar store for nothin and your HOME FOR LESS
The way I project my lines they always go OVER HEADS 
Like I cut your LOWER LEGS went back to break spines 
Cuz I'm coming straight for your neck homie I ain't gonna waste time 

It just helps with the flow as you transfer from bar to bar because if you just go bar by bar it can sound choppy

R.I.P BUDDY ( buddy tribute)

he was going insane, man i could see the pain, hidden in his face
lost his mind, thoughts start driftin into space
demons concealed his soul man i willing to kill several
his life ended on the same day i couldn't defeat the devil
Buddy, lisa, Johnny, eileen, frank, and mia's dead
but i stare buddy's picture wishing it was me instead
they refused to give him the freedom that he needed
and that is the reason, why buddy isn't breathin
i couldnt do anything buddy i know who needed my help
and if my mom wasnt willing to, bury you, i would do it myself
two days ago i saw you strugglin
threw your tears all i heard was you mumblin
than two days later you died
5 hours into the next day i cried
have you ever reached that point where you felt dead inside???
i knew you went crazy but nobody knew what happened
and so buddy i promise on your soul i will make it in rappin
when i lifted the paper and saw you man i didnt know what to think
knowing that you were dead, wishing you were asleep
see to me rappin isnt about being rich and huggin money
but i refused to let him suffer so i TOOK the PAPER off that was huggin buddy
rappin is how i escape, rapping is my stress relief
close the bag and whisper buddy rest in peace

rest in peace buddy....love you

This **** gives me chills man beautiful piece and rip to your friend

Yo Bambs I found a beat that fits very good

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mu_tDTuZbFo&feature=youtube_gdata_player

You might have to switch a couple syllables but nothing major it's also a couple bars longer

thanks man

Final-fuckin-ly haha now i can finish my swell on earth haha my dick just got rock hard

watch this half ass recording of that song off my laptop blow up.. id laugh soooo fuckin hard

that's the end of it all when those you befriended are gone
Target on your brain and the weapons are drawn  
Feelin like your potential is lost beggin for god 
Lifes fading out like its the end of a song 
Wishin your pops never had sex wit your mom 
Cuz then you wouldn't have these scars edged in your palm 
Heres the message I got get **** out of your life if it causes depression 
Cuz if we just let go lots of problems would be solved in a second 
**** the caution just dead it you don't need her to feel this way 
Kids sittin in the corner so upset tryna peel his face 
Bump a tune son turn on the **** that the real kids play 
No person should be reason enough to leave this place 
scream for days kids saw him as the boy with mental issues 
No idea he went home cryin to a bed of tissues 
Ed we'll miss you I shouldn't feel guilt I never picked on you 
But I stood by and watched as other people **** on you 
Like when brad pissed on you I just feel like a horrible person 
Cuz I'm always the one talkin bout suicide and how nobody is worthless
 I should have noticed when you didn't eat a piece of food 
I didn't think to myself well maybe he has feelings too
I couldn't step between you and the reaper in time 
People sayin it's not my fault but I have no peace in my mind
I know we never talked but the guilt is creeping inside 
Because maybe a friend is all you needed to keep you alive 
There's a book on my beliefs and I dishonored the code 
It won't bring you back but in memory of you I'm droppin this flow 
I just wish that I talked to you asked about problems at home 
Cus now all I see is your neck locked in that rope 
So I hope you hear this listen from the other side 
I walk in the halls see the tears in your brothers eyes 
Your just another mind who never found his stress relief 
Now instead of hey Ed were Forced to say rest in peace 

i just got done watchin "Notorious"

gimme ya top 10 FAVORITE hip hop artists

em
biggie
big l
crooked i
yela
royce
jay
dre
nas
pac

ill get ya scraped up like heidi flies' knees
snatch ya out ya clothes right down to ya whitey tighties
im highly sick, if ya dont like the track
you can kiss my grits, you tell me to spit some ****
then i watch ya try n manuver thru the manure
i do what i do, then watch ya dudes try to do what i do right after i do it to ya
i spit fluently fluent you can call it a sin
imma bout to lose it, yeah man ima bout to do it again
its toxic when i spit, alotta knowledge and logic
about topics that no one wants to discuss, but i will, jusst watch it
you dont wanna try me, megan fox is pregnant
i bet that baby has blonde hair and green eyes just like me
so high g, the rawest type, im lost in flight i bet jenni rivera knows what i mean
its all about timing when ya rhyming this music always seems to excites me
its what i vibe to, its what i do
this is what ill die to, you know you doin right when some people dont like you

Eminem
Yelawolf
Crooked I
Big L
Binary star
Diabolic
Eyedea
Cunninlynguists (group but whatever)
Hopsin
Collective efforts (again group but **** it)

never heard of them groups or eyedea...

but what do ya know the two of the four white trash mothafuckas on here have yelawolf and em in there top 5.

Oh It wasn't in order for me lol but look up cunninlynguists album "will rap for food"

Look at halfanimal and thugged out cub scouts specifically

1.pac
2.em
3.hopsin
4.outlawz
5.dizzy wright
6.swizzz
7.jarren brenton
8.nwa
9.yellawolf
10.mbk

Kill an unborn baby you still wouldn't de-fetus

lol my ten

1. lil host
2. prof
3. bambi and whitey...i can never decide with these guys
4. shutdown
5. ill's
6. darknova
8001. J blake
8000. wrathe
9. p500
10. jimmydamage

lol

Who are the other two?

Oh, I see what you did there. Lol