@Ragman,
Quote:...but Dale's version is awkward and far too wordy
Unquestionably, Rag. In my own defense however, I was trying to retain each unit of thought, adding where I felt clarification was called for
….whatever that means. With no offense whatever to Con,
[Two things bother me here. First, very minor, is that two 'for' in the same sentence somehow grates. But the other is, we're not sure whether it means 'because' or 'to'. In the former case of course Con text is critical
Forgive pun
Quote: a great man or woman, if there is one,
Jars unaccountably, perhaps because lacking in collo. Maybe it'd help if 'is' were italicized
What's not clear with this 'for' is whether it's he who is being worshipped or who is worshipping
Quote: rather, they are someone
Somehow the "they" seems a contradiction of number
Quote:upon whose shoulders we can set our feet and thus see further.
For some reason the gain in altitude needs emphasis
Yes, no, Con, my version didn't solve all if any of these, yours was indeed every bit as good as mine