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please chck a resume

 
 
ziawj2
 
Reply Mon 28 May, 2012 08:42 pm
Please help me check a resume . Thank you!

Resume
Qiu Kai
Tel: 18971123243
E-mail: [email protected]

Objective
A position as an accountant in an accounting department

Education
2010-2013 Financial Management, Engineering and Technology College, Hubei University of Technology

Major courses
Accounting Principles
Financial Accounting
Computerized Accounting
Accounting of Financial Institutions

Work experences
March 2011—June 2011 worked as a saleman in Zhongbai Supermarket at our university
Feberary 2010—January 2011 worked as an assistant accountant in ABC Limited Company


Certificates
College English Test, Band 4
Certificate of Accounting Professional
National Computer ?Hierachical Exams, Level 2

Awards
2010 Scholarship Grade 2
2011 Excellent Student
2012 the first prize in “English Speaking Contest”

Activity
Basketball club
 
jespah
 
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Reply Tue 29 May, 2012 06:11 am
@ziawj2,
Lose the quotes around English Speaking Contest. They are unnecessary and, in fact, imply that it's not a real contest (quotes, when they aren't titles or quotations, imply sarcasm).

Change our university to Hubei University. Use the actual name.

Work experience, not experences, which is not a word. Keep this as a singular (it's the experience of only one person, you).

I would also put more information into your work experience. Just saying you were a sales person at the market doesn't tell me much. Did you exceed your quota every month? Write up new policies? Receive written letters of praise from customers? Get a recommendation as Employee of the Month? Even if you didn't get these kinds of accolades, you can write things like (assuming they're true, of course), Sold 100 units per hour in sales contest or Sold 100 units per day consistently during first month of employment, escalating to 1000 units per day consistently during last month of employment.

The assistant account work could also use description. Did you check tax forms, organize books, check someone else's work, overhaul the computer programs? There has to be something in there for an employer to get to understand what you were doing. Not every accountant does the exact same thing - you know this. You've seen fellow employees doing different things. So how is an employer supposed to know which specific thing you were doing unless you mention it?

This is usually done in the form of bullet points, which are hard to show on a forum like this, but look like
  • a bullet point
  • another bullet point


Also ditch the question mark in front of the word Hierarchical.

And ... good luck! Smile
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