Hi, I'm now teaching writing in English in a college in China. When I check my students' writing tasks every time, I always feel confused whether the expression is natura or not, whether acceptable to native speakers or not, etc. I never take time to look through the forum and other guys' posts. If I intrude in and disturb you, i'm really sorry.
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 06:29 am - Thank you. The changes you made seem very natrual. And is the reason why you deleted the last sentence wordy? And please help me compare A with B. Which one is better? And could you make more... (view)
Sat 19 Apr, 2014 05:29 am - I ask my student to write a letter. In this letter, he needs to take some time off work because off his mother's sudden illness. I think the some words used inappropriately, such as... (view)
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 04:36 am - Please make the following letter more natural. Thank you.
Dearest Ella，
Congratulations！
I'm so happy to hear the good news about your wedding. It's very lucky that your husband... (view)
Sat 5 Apr, 2014 07:21 pm - As can be vividly shown from the pie charts of Yemen and Italy, we can see them divided into three sections, showing relative proportions of populations for different age groups in 2000 and... (view)
Tue 25 Mar, 2014 06:29 am - I think the expression is a bit excessive. Do you think so? If so, could you help me to check it? Thank you very much.
Sara,
It’s really a fantastic idea that you want to organize an... (view)
Sun 23 Mar, 2014 09:29 pm - Please help me check the note in terms of appropriateness, coherence and cohesion. Thank you!
Dear Sara，
I have heard that you are thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party.... (view)
Sat 29 Jun, 2013 01:38 am - Thank you for your kind help.
I am sorry to hear you are in poor health, and I did not know you were 82. Sorry again.
I want to publis this paper in an international journal, if it is published,... (view)
