@gungasnake,
Its a dibby shy of being run on, thats all.
I usually cant fault your writing style , your content is what I find funny.
In the aforementioned case, however, you almost sounded out of breath
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Dont get me wrong, your writing style is adequate usually. Like me, you try to get to the point. As far as being as good "as any" youve got a long ways to go when comparing to joe Nation, Endymion, or Edgar Blythe.
Some of us are better at graphic communication. Some are better at the written word. Deal with your talents and limitations but dont exhalt yourself where its not evidenced.