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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 05:11 am
(1) I found the area where I live got power cut.

(2) I found the area where I live get power cut.

In my opinion, the two sentences are all correct. Cos (1) can be read as " I found (that) the area where I live got power cut', while (2) can be read as " I found the area where I live (to) get power cut".

What do you think about this question? TIA.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 05:52 am
Not at all equivalent. By the way, for someone who seems interested in the correct use of English, i find it odd that you use "Cos." The word is because, and it is abbreviated as 'cause. "Cos" is not a word, it is an internet usage, and indicative of extreme ignorance, or a dedication to the trendy "words" popular among adolescents, many of whom are masking a profound ignorance of spelling, usage and grammar.

"I found the area where i live got power cut" is an acceptable form of casual spoken English. If it were put into a formal, written sentence, it would read: "I found that the area where i live had gotten the power cut (off)." (The use of the word "off" is optional--"power cut" just has a sound of informality not commensurate with proper construction.)

"I found the area where i live get power cut." is not only incorrect, it would be a glaring error even to the most clueless native speaker of English. It sounds like the sort of error the non-native speaker would make. The opening of the sentence reads: "I found . . . " and therefore suggests the the loss of power occurred before you discovered it. Therefore, one says the power was cut, or had gotten cut, using the past tense to describe an event which occurred before you discovered it. "Get" is the present tense--that is wrong, wrong, wrong.
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 06:35 am
Frankly, both sentences sound stilted -- although #2 is clearly incorrect.

The sentence would best be written:

I found they had cut off the power in the area where I live.

Putting the "..in the area where I live" after the "I found" results in a passive voice construction that probably is best avoided.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 07:34 am
Thanks Setanta and Frank Apisa. Smile
I feel Setanta's explanation is very clear. Frank Apisa criticized the both of my sentences were "stilted". If so, is the setanta's rewriting -- "I found that the area where i live had gotten the power cut (off)."-- stilted too? Rolling Eyes
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Roberta
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 07:52 am
Hi Oristar, I'm glad to see you back and posting again. No, the sentence isn't stilted.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 08:12 am
Alright, Roberta. Smile
Still, I'd like to hear what Frank Apisa will answer...
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Roberta
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 08:51 am
Okay, Oristar. BTW, all right is two words, never one. :-)
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oristarA
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 09:52 am
Definition from AHD:

Alright (non-standard) = all right. Smile
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 10:06 am
oristarA wrote:
Thanks Setanta and Frank Apisa. Smile
I feel Setanta's explanation is very clear. Frank Apisa criticized the both of my sentences were "stilted". If so, is the setanta's rewriting -- "I found that the area where i live had gotten the power cut (off)."-- stilted too? Rolling Eyes


Yes. Very!



Calling the sentence "stilted" was not meant as an insult, Oristar -- just as an observation in response to your asking for help on this issue.

If you have access to an English teacher, you might try asking the following question of that person:

Which of the following three sentences best communicates the notion being offered

1)"I found the area where I live got power cut."

2) "I found that the area where i live had gotten the power cut (off)."

3) "I found they had cut off the power in the area where I live."

My guess is the English teacher will choose #3.
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Ceili
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 12:31 pm
Or a fourth option, try dropping got and replace it.
"I found the area where I live had the power cut."

Got just sounds awkward and is really the wrong verb. You would say I got a bike, or got a disease - something you attain/recieve. Using 'Had' implies ownership was lost. It's really based on personal preference but I would not use the word got.
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Vivien
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 12:37 pm
mmm i agree both are very awkward and clunky and not at all correct in English English

It would be the area 'had a power cut'
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Wy
 
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Reply Mon 22 Dec, 2003 08:16 pm
I agree with Ceili.

and BTW, The only way "get" would be OK in such a sentence would be:
I found THAT the area where I live getS power cutS OFTEN. (That is to say, "Power cuts happen often in the area where I live. I found that out after I had lived there a while.")

ps to Roberta, I commiserate, but M-W online says "alright" is all right...
Quote:
The one-word spelling alright appeared some 75 years after all right itself had reappeared from a 400-year-long absence. Since the early 20th century some critics have insisted alright is wrong, but it has its defenders and its users. It is less frequent than all right but remains in common use especially in journalistic and business publications. It is quite common in fictional dialogue, and is used occasionally in other writing <the first two years of medical school were alright -- Gertrude Stein>.

I won't use it, and you won't, but I think we have to let oristar ...
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Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 05:50 am
For what its worth, Oristar, i consider that Frank is nitpicking. You'll perhaps recall that i said your sentence is acceptable in spoken English. As we never know what the larger context is, i found the expression of the idea acceptable. Others here have noted that the use of the verb "to get" is perhaps not the best way of expressing this. In written English, the idea could be better expressed.

In conversation, however, it is acceptable. And, without knowing the context, it is simple arrogance to characterize the sentence as stilted. For example:

She: "They say that there were power failures during the storm"

He: "I found the area where i live got power cut."

In that use, you emphasize the area where you live, simply suggesting that were the case where you live, without knowing what happened elsewhere. I'm sure you know that written language is always a little more demanding, and inflexible than the spoken variety.
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 07:05 am
This may be a bit off point, but it is interesting nonetheless.

In his last post, Setanta wrote:

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And, without knowing the context, it is simple arrogance to characterize the sentence as stilted.


In his original post, Setanta wrote:

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By the way, for someone who seems interested in the correct use of English, i find it odd that you use "Cos." The word is because, and it is abbreviated as 'cause. "Cos" is not a word, it is an internet usage, and indicative of extreme ignorance, or a dedication to the trendy "words" popular among adolescents, many of whom are masking a profound ignorance of spelling, usage and grammar.


Setanta is always good for a laugh!



By the way, Ceili, I hope you realize that I did remove the word "got" from my suggestion for a better way of phrasing the comment.
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Eastree
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 08:09 am
Frank, the use of "they" in "I found they had cut off the power in the area where I live." is also incorrect. A pronoun should not be used without an antecedent (or something, in this case, specifying who "they" are). Since there is no definite personification from which to source the pronoun, then using a definitive entity would be a much better choice. Perhaps this might be what an English teacher would suggest:

"I found the electric company had cut off the power in the area where I live."

To add a trivial note, "found" could also be disputed (though I have no problem with it). Some might say "discovered" or "realized" might be a better choice -- though to find and to discover are basically the same.

Another trivial note would be other options about the dependant clause "where I live." It can be used, along with any clause (either dependant or independent) or prepositional phrase in the adverb specifying where the power had been cut.


I don't intend seem overly critical, I really don't have a problem with using "they" in your original sentence. But I am annoyed severely by the growing overuse of general pronouns especially when people refer to several individuals or groups. It only adds confusion, and very poorly conveys any message intended.


And Setana, you're also correct. The usage would be acceptable in conversational English, as awkward as it sounds.

Over all, if I was asked to re-write the sentence, I would have to change it to "I found the power had been cut (off) where I live." This does, of course, still keep optional words in parenthases. It eliminated the awkwardness of "got", or a form of to get in the place of to be or to become. There is also no longer a need to struggle with who had cut the power, especially since if power is cut most people assume the act had been accomplished by the power company. Another wide assumption is that if the electricity had been shut off by someone other than the correct authority, the speaker or writer would have noted it as such. And to mention something which does not need to be mentioned, the words power and electricity can be interchanged in this case.

As a last point, yes. I am being nitpicky over this. It only goes to show that there are many correct ways to say the same thing, and some ways may not be as correct in certain situations.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 08:12 am
Glad you are amused Frank. In that there would be almost no way to determine in speaking if one were saying 'cause or cos--it should be obvious that i was referring to written English. Of course, i am always amused by you as well, and your apparent inability to recognize simple and obvious distinctions.
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Ceili
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 12:32 pm
Frank, don't punch buddy. I was offering an option not making any comments on previous posts.
I rarely use 'got' in my day to day speech and it occured to me, this is one of those words - depending on where you are from, you may or may not use a lot.
I have noticed, "Got" is used much more in the States as sort of an accepted slang. So who am I to judge.

I ain't got ...
We got married.
blah blah blah
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Frank Apisa
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 01:53 pm
Setanta wrote:
Glad you are amused Frank. In that there would be almost no way to determine in speaking if one were saying 'cause or cos--it should be obvious that i was referring to written English. Of course, i am always amused by you as well, and your apparent inability to recognize simple and obvious distinctions.


Get someone to read my post to you, Setanta, and perhaps to explain it to you. Obviously you are not capable of understanding the English language.

I was not talking about the 'cause or cos -- I was talking about the fact that you characterized my use of the word "stilted" as arrogant...

...when you had used "extreme ignorance" "trendy words popular among adolescents, and "profound ignorance in your post.

And I am glad you are glad that I am amused. But especially I am glad that you are so amusing.

In fact, I am laughing right now!
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Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 03:32 pm
Me too, Boss, yer a hoot . . .


heeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee . . .

okbye
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McTag
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2003 04:33 pm
What's this, an argument about English and I haven't been invited?

I disagree. (Groucho Marx)

Or maybe it was "I'm against it!"
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