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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 02:37 am
I wrote a sentence but I don't know if it make sense. if not, please correct it for me, thanks a lot.

I always feel that I have the responsibility to help our society and world, even what I can do is small.
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contrex
 
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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 02:56 am
I always feel that I have the responsibility to help our society and world, even if what I can do is small.
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Setanta
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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 04:57 am
My first thought was: ". . . even though what i can do is small." Either one works. It's a well written sentence, except for the omission, which can be supplied either as Contrex suggests, or with "though."
sullyfish6
 
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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 10:16 am
Even though what I can do seems small, I feel that I have the responsibility to help our society and world.

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contrex
 
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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 11:21 am
@Setanta,
I thought about "though", but it was too late to modify my post.
jinmin1988
 
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Reply Wed 9 Dec, 2009 07:27 pm
@contrex,
Thank you, Contrex. Your answer is very fast, I appreciate it very much.
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